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Premium Member Paisley Swallows

That one lost their tongue
somewhere along the way
long ago, the sound,
doesn’t come out the same
anymore, so they roll it up 
like a carpet containing 
a nakedly dead body
of blunt words 
like unplucked violins
untuned to how it all 
really works 
begging to be heard,
and the flowery prose, 
purple and bruised 
like over-ripe fruit
teeth rottingly sugary sweet, 
is now seen 
day-in-and-night-out,
struggling with ease 
way too much 
like madness overgrown, 
the dense overgrowth 
of language unspoke
hides glittering gems 
blushing shamefully
more exquisite than 
the now daily averies
all penned in babel
that flow in glass jarring
anticipated patterns 
of suffocating 
paisley prose,
the simple beauty
in the plainly spoke,
never again 
to be seen nor heard,
the mercurial metaphors
birdfeed scattered
to the begging migrations
of petulant bluebirds
naughty nightingales 
honey trapping 
wet-beaked hummingbirds 
all beating hearts
with their wild wind flapping,
tossing sticks and stones 
to those tongue thirsty 
kiss lapping, lap dancing 
love parched, gargling
swallows





Candide Diderot. ‘24

Ryokan Translations of Zen Death Haiku

Ryokan translations of Zen Death Haiku and other Poems

First one hidden face is revealed,
then the other; thus spinning it falls,
the autumn leaf.
—Ryokan (1758-1831), loose translation by Michael R. Burch

This world:
a distant mountain echo
dying unheard in the Void ...
—Ryokan (1758-1831), loose translation by Michael R. Burch

The peonies I planted around my hut
I must now surrender
to the wind’s will
—Ryokan (1758-1831), loose translation by Michael R. Burch

Wild peonies
blossoming in their prime,
glorious in full bloom:
Too precious to pick,
Too precious to leave unplucked
—Ryokan (1758-1831), loose translation by Michael R. Burch

I persuaded a child to purchase rural wine;
once I'm nicely tipsy,
I’ll slap down some calligraphy.
—Ryokan (1758-1831), loose translation by Michael R. Burch

The thief missed it:
the moon
bejeweling my window.
—Ryokan (1758-1831), loose translation by Michael R. Burch

The Orchid

Deep in the valley, a secluded beauty!
Serene, peerless, impossibly lovely.
In the bamboo thicket’s shadowy tower
she seems to sigh softly for a lover.
—Ryokan (1758-1831), loose translation by Michael R. Burch

Virgin Forests

Through virgin forests 
And unplucked gems
Twisted vines
Thoughts do stem.

Stroll through winding trails
And I’m nearly planted
By the weight of glory
Pressing me into the earth.

Almost sprouting roots 
And taking up residence
In the innocence of things green.

Step back, run home
Think about this maybe forever,
Famous last words.

In my comfort zone, 
Where nothing satisfies
And nothing is better than me
Lenses only blur
And spinning the reel
Only lengthens distance between
Me and dreams of late.

Where my appetite can consume,
Crunching through anything
To enjoy a fleeting taste
Of something not even real.

Next time I’ll do it
I will spread roots deep
Shoot my everything
Into the richness of the soil
The only true kingdom on earth.

Keep my ideals high
So I can’t taint or splinter
Keep my foundation low
So I can stand upon it.

Finally find somewhere
For my teeth to be defeated
Turned to dust by a truth
So much harder than themselves.


Acts of Kindness

To discard past experiences
that serve me not,
and finding wistful grace
that more love in my heart 
enchants those I do,
 
then open fresh of  pages 
within this autobiography,
joy from random magnanimity---

untiring compassion
perhaps selfless,

to nourish trees of unplucked affection



18
Brian Strand

Premium Member Haiku, I Love U

raven falcon dove
                      inks on the wing plumed unplucked
                                   alight on the page








18.01.11


Composed for James Edward Lee Sr's
Haiku, I Love U

Unplucked Daisies

A dreamy girl hides her wishful eyes
under her fingers and white daisies;
who wonders what she's thinking?
Is it a wish or the surge of a feeling?

Those fragile dainty daisies of late spring
must be unplucked soon, and if she believes 
her love is pure, it needs no further revealing;  
will she revive her dream and put on wings?


Probabilities Haiku59

down the aisle with dad

and promised margaritas

last petal unplucked



Not for the contest , but thanks for the inspiration.
Inspred by the love me/love me not flower,and you

Bended Mind

She was an angel
Falling from the sky
She heal my heart when I was about to die
And in return
I paid her back with evil coins
Her heart was broken
And it could not be mended
Night mares and grotesque visions
Horrors extended
Now my mind is bended
When our time was good I would kiss her in the clear view of the sun
And to her
Our souls was one
She taught me the true meaning of living
Why I am here and what is important
What is not
Her hair fell over her shoulders like a cascade on a hill
And her breast was firm
Like petals which were unplucked
Her lips taste like honeyed wine
Her imagination sent chills down my spine
She had a mind of genius
My mind was minus
But I paid her pack with evil coins
When things got better
To suffer a life of misery and pain
Bended mind
I am like an oxen with no brain.
I can no longer live with shame
So I die again

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