Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Haiku

Haiku, I Love U

raven falcon dove
                      inks on the wing plumed unplucked
                                   alight on the page








18.01.11


Composed for James Edward Lee Sr's
Haiku, I Love U

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Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2018 at 6:39 PM Lovely, congrats.

Sara Kendrick January 20, 2018 at 2:47 PM Very creative work..I enjoyed reading your winner.Way to go..Sara Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 10:05 PM Thank you Sara! xomo

Line Gauthier January 20, 2018 at 10:19 AM Congrats on your wonderful winning haiku, Maureen. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 10:04 PM Thank you Line! I have to laugh, I interpreted the contest as an I Love U to the Haiku ;) xomo!

Sandra Haight January 20, 2018 at 8:39 AM Maureen, congrats on your nice placement in the contest for you awesome Haiku! Hugs, Sandra Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 8:43 AM Thank you Sandra :) xomo

Eve Roper January 19, 2018 at 9:23 PM Congratulations on your win, Maureen! Hugs Eve Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 8:32 AM Thank you Eve :) xomo

Gregory Richard Barden January 19, 2018 at 7:06 PM Yeah, Mo - awesome, my friend ... this is a fav, and my winner! Congrats and blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3 Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 8:32 AM Thank you my friend :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich January 19, 2018 at 7:01 PM I think I already saw almost every one of the poems on the winner list. But here I am again to say CONGRATS and WELL DONE. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 8:30 AM Thank you Andrea :)

Jan Allison January 19, 2018 at 4:15 PM Many congrats on your win Mo:-) hugs Jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 8:29 AM Thank you Jan :) xomo

Connie Marcum Wong January 19, 2018 at 3:05 PM This haiku was another one I really loved Mo. Congratulations on your win! xxoo : ) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 8:27 AM Thank you Connie :) xomo!

Charlie Smith January 19, 2018 at 1:59 PM Beautifully crafted Maureen, congratulations... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 20, 2018 at 8:26 AM Thank you Charlie :)

Anisha Dutta January 16, 2018 at 11:36 AM WOW! Hugs. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 16, 2018 at 11:43 AM Thank you Anisha :) xomo! <3

Akkina Downing January 15, 2018 at 9:25 PM Just fabulous... hugs and smiles :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 15, 2018 at 9:31 PM Thank You Akkina! Love your hugs and smiles :) returned!

John Fleming January 15, 2018 at 2:58 AM Intriguing to say the very least, Maureen. It is almost as if you are inviting a person to try and interpret the words. I might have it all wrong...but I enjoyed putting my mind to it. My warmest regards! :) john Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 15, 2018 at 8:31 AM Such is with any art, no? :) I have learned since joining the soup that intent is moot in interpretation, once read, it's yours. Delighted you enjoyed this piece! Thank you John xomo

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2018 at 6:52 PM wow, what a metaphor this is. Such a beautiful image, Maureen! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 14, 2018 at 9:04 PM Thank you Andrea :) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden January 13, 2018 at 6:14 PM Oh, this is wonderful, Dear Mo - love the phrasing and imagery - fav-ing, my friend! <3 Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2018 at 11:24 PM Thank you Greg, for all and the fave :) xomo!

Bernard Chan January 13, 2018 at 6:39 AM Fantastic imagery. Great haiku! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM Thak you Bernard :) crazy bird lady strikes again xomo!

Scott Thirtyseven January 13, 2018 at 5:45 AM Fabulous Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2018 at 11:24 AM Thank you Scott :)

Connie Marcum Wong January 13, 2018 at 1:24 AM A beautiful haiku Mo. I bet this does well! : ) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2018 at 11:24 AM Thank you Connie :) xomo!

Jan Allison January 12, 2018 at 7:47 PM what a wonderful haiku Mo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2018 at 11:22 AM Thank you lovely :) xomo!

Harry Horsman January 12, 2018 at 4:48 PM love this Maureen, a true Haiku. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2018 at 11:21 AM Thank you Harry :) xomo!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2018 at 12:50 PM - Wonderful written, Maureen :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2018 at 11:20 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :) a lovely weekend to you too! xomo

Line Gauthier January 12, 2018 at 7:18 AM Lovely haiku doubling as a delightful tongue twister. Love it, Maureen. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 12, 2018 at 9:57 AM Thank you lovely! :) xomo

James Swartz January 11, 2018 at 11:38 PM Very imaginative Maureen! Your creative mind is alight on the page. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 12, 2018 at 9:55 AM You have captured my bird brain so sweetly my friend <3

Silent One January 11, 2018 at 3:41 PM Clever... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 12, 2018 at 9:52 AM Thanks x

Arturo Michael January 11, 2018 at 2:05 PM Free to write...Lovely Haiku...All the best Maureen Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 12, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thanks Arturo, with this contest prompt I noticed all my Haiku are for the birds :) xomo!

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