Charmaine Chircop Poet Haiku

Probabilities Haiku59

down the aisle with dad

and promised margaritas

last petal unplucked



Not for the contest , but thanks for the inspiration.
Inspred by the love me/love me not flower,and you

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Scott Thirtyseven August 1, 2014 at 10:17 AM A poem full of promises, nicely done.

Justin Bordner July 30, 2014 at 8:35 PM Let the drama commence Charma. I can feel the gravity and suspense of this momentous event. J.A.B.

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 30, 2014 at 6:43 PM Possibly marriage? Maybe, maybe not:) I love HI- KOO-----=)

Paul Callus July 30, 2014 at 3:26 PM A lovely and touching haiku, Charm; the last line...excellent! // paul

Jack Ellison July 30, 2014 at 10:30 AM Same old Charming Charmaine!!! Love ya, sweet lady... loving huggsies, Jack XOXOX

Robert Nehls July 30, 2014 at 8:14 AM Very nice picture you painted here, Charmaine. I liked that line, Last petal unplucked. beautiful..... Robert.

Russell Sivey July 29, 2014 at 9:21 PM Wow,you have piqued my interest with this marvelous write my friend! I surely loved reading this magnificent poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Tim Smith July 29, 2014 at 8:26 PM Very clever Charma...love it Tim