Unplucked Daisies

A dreamy girl hides her wishful eyes
under her fingers and white daisies;
who wonders what she's thinking?
Is it a wish or the surge of a feeling?

Those fragile dainty daisies of late spring
must be unplucked soon, and if she believes 
her love is pure, it needs no further revealing;  
will she revive her dream and put on wings?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sergi Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Hi Andrew: I love your version!
Devnath  Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Beautiful poem enjoyed from you. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:53 PM
lovely interpretation of the image congrats on your win Andrew:-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Andrew, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~
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