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The Subtlety of Sin and Sandy Shores

The Subtlety Of Sin And Sandy Shores

Bone dry and hungry
Demons feed on fire quietly below
Never satiated eating emptiness alone

Sin laps up the souls above with certainty                                                                              
Like waves licking at the sandy shore
Slowly, quietly, over time, with salt 
Consumed like lust
Lost dignity

Gone without a trace
They go to another place
Where no soul or shore should be  
Disappear in a mist of mystery
Taken out to sea

Symphony of Subtlety

Gentle silhouette
A contrast to her fierce heart,
Moving gracefully
Yet her beauty's conquering,
Symphony of subtlety

Subtlety

The water flows from the tap,
Over the translucent  cube.
No function, and no reason.
Perhaps, the waters over the eyes.


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The earth is brittle under heel

in quiet little ways

But leaves are bragging

bright with flame

as we watch the seasons change        




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"Season.....Gogyoka"
11/3/12
Resubmitted for Brian Strand's Contest:207

Subtlety Has No Place In This Life

Subtlety has no place in this life
A life of blatancy which allows no secret
Somewhere lost is discretion
Some place among the rising pile of greed

Truth is only interesting if something can be made of it
Be it fortune, fame, or power
No longer are we admirers of dignity
But exploiters of vulnerability

Let us return now to that place, 
Where all is death beside our truth
When what is treasured is our love
For others above ourselves

For days will come when nothing that 
We see or hear or feel
Will matter any longer 
When Death knocks on the door



Donna Golden

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