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Subtlety Has No Place In This Life

Subtlety has no place in this life
A life of blatancy which allows no secret
Somewhere lost is discretion
Some place among the rising pile of greed

Truth is only interesting if something can be made of it
Be it fortune, fame, or power
No longer are we admirers of dignity
But exploiters of vulnerability

Let us return now to that place, 
Where all is death beside our truth
When what is treasured is our love
For others above ourselves

For days will come when nothing that 
We see or hear or feel
Will matter any longer 
When Death knocks on the door



Donna Golden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 4/15/2009 10:54:00 AM
Congrats Donna on your feature of the week...Raul
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Date: 4/14/2009 12:22:00 PM
I agree wholeheartedly. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 4/13/2009 4:02:00 PM
Much to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/13/2009 11:15:00 AM
Congrats Donna on your awesome poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future Donna. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:38:00 AM
Great write, congrats on being featured. Well deserved....Aleera
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Date: 4/13/2009 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Donna.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/2/2009 5:06:00 PM
Donna, you have alot of terrific poems!! This speaks to my constant annoyance with peoples behavior today...No longer are we admirers of dignity, but exploiters of vulnerabilty....thats my favorite line. Also loved your "Grandma" poem...made me think about how much i love my Grandma and how crushed I'll be to lose her....you made a guy get a little teary!!!
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