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No Subtlety

The earth is brittle under heel in quiet little ways But leaves are bragging bright with flame as we watch the seasons change ________________________________ "Season.....Gogyoka" 11/3/12 Resubmitted for Brian Strand's Contest:207

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 8:40:00 PM

Beautiful Carrie :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/2/2012 11:46:00 AM

Nicely done Carrie! I love 'brittle...little,' the alliteration of 'bragging...bravado,' and the ways...fade off rhyme... super job!! Best wishes, Keith :)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/22/2012 6:17:00 PM

A little gem here from you Carrie.I am so sorry to know about your loss.My condolences with you and yours.Take your time to settle and come back.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/22/2012 9:00:00 AM

Belated many congratulations on your grand win my dear friend, Carrie! This is indeed a great gogyoka! i love it! Thank you for sharing and have a very happy and blessed Thanksgiving Day to you and your family. Belated thanks for your congratulatory comments on my poem, too. love/hugs, Leonora

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2012 2:36:00 PM

fantastic first line there..yup all crunchy like potaoe chips!! Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2012 1:39:00 PM

love this, Carrie - sending you and your family our very best wishes x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 5:53:00 PM

Carrie, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/10/2012 8:06:00 AM

And the seasons roll on by! Autumn is the most glorious but also the saddest! Keep 'em coming Carrie!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/9/2012 8:35:00 PM

aww your too sweet HUGS can you image a man giving you a knife as a love token [well it WAS!] I feel his loss almost daily but there was no way to hold on to him once he wanted to leave [sigh] ohhh he did think better about giving me a gun though LOL..sssh i wouldn't have taken one! Light & love