When you pray something
Be clear and specific
God hears exactly.
Specific, ... Terrific;
Couldn't Skip Any,
Feat's, Show!
Laughter And Rhythm's,
Rhyme, .... Hope!?
SPECIFIC MOMENTS
visual language
inspiration
in
retrospective
contemporary
dreams
of an alternative
future
a moment
of
reckoning
flooded
into
the eye
once moribund
now
captivated
encountering
the beauty
of refinement
to establish
affinities
between
the sensitive
& the
non-comprehensive
a turning point
a narrative
of the a romantic
constantly
renewed
in
the mind
a battleground
& clashing
of styles
a sign
of prescience
& genius
an indicator
of dialogue
in rethought
figuration
of
the
absurd
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
The words (some),
ponder before leaving
from the basements and utter words...
The words (others),
crack continually and
spread astray around the world...
determined words ponder well
its weight... others don't... injury
life without remorse... !
Native trees, meadows,
rock and shrubs give shelter to
many bird species.
All of my poems may be prolific;
Subject should be more specific;
With much logic and common sense;
Understood even if you are dense.
From my finger poems always run;
From start until finally be done;
Take a break along with some rest;
Which for me always will be best.
Poem style relates to my Impunity;
While I welcomed each opportunity,
That allows me to become creative;
Was Initiated by me a local native.
If pandemic we are able to overcome;
Create a song we can play and strum
Maybe my great poems will be in need
After well loved and everyone agreed.
James Horn
one year
very specific, left behind by all
she insistently keeps it
a male
that she hasn't seen in like...
located in that gathering
and together
they sang, and so went along
in that specific year
with him
well actually, completely and utterly alone
she keeps on singing
Specific Did Try
Specific did try
To be and on God rely;
Never pass me by.
Jim Horn
when some things stop
others begin
it is fractals
marking density
patterns of voids
as spaces
in infinite
relativities
subject to laws of nature
stan sand
Not specific this God beyond understanding
Said Elihu to Job long ago.
Outstretches all classification,
Not bound by identity one or another,
Bigger than any holy publication,
God above definition of those who made God
Pleasing to themselves, that is,
A gender-ascribed Bronze Age tribal god of war
Unable to deliver from foreign control who
Now saves only souls who believe such a thing.
Not specific this God beyond understanding
Said Elihu to Job long ago.
Outstretches all classification,
Not bound by identity one or another,
Bigger than any holy publication,
God above definition of those who made God
Pleasing to themselves, that is,
A gender-ascribed Bronze Age tribal god of war
Unable to deliver from foreign control who
Now saves only souls who believe such a thing.
Start Being Specific
We always thought that it would be terrific,
If some people sounded much more specific
Do want to be heard,
Each idea and word;
Who only prefer to be profound and prolific.
Jim Horn
Battlefield had been in middle of a small church;
People now dead who once there they did perch,
Others remained injured and may be maimed;
So who are those by us who should be blamed?
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how many times I have received this message.
How about you?
The large feather floated in the thermal air
twirling and swirling up and down, round and around.
Where has it come from, what’s it doing there?
In wonder I scooped it into my cupped hands
gently blowing on it to see the *filoplume quiver…..and
as I lay it on the grass, there are birds all around
they noisily fight over such a find, the victor thinking it’s grand
I hope it will be used to line a nest then all can share
*filoplumes arise exposed beyond the contour feathers on the neck.
Penned 7 November 2016
I asked the old fruit tree out back
To bare something sweet for a snack
Went back the next day
His root was displayed
I chopped him down quick in one whack
an original poem by the poemdog Daniel Turner
I help only the following two types of people.
Children & The Mentally Disabled.
All other down on their luck people can all go to hell
because most likely they caused their problems of their own free will.
I will Always however help every single other animal.
The distressed and the oppressed of human acts unfathonable.
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