Scrutinised Poems | Examples


Premium Member Rummaged

Rummage
If you must.
My presence here
Is based on trust

So dressed am I
In Summer svelte
Yet you're to check
My trousers belt;

I'm scanned 
As if each cell is rogue
So scrutinised
Despite en vogue

I understand 
Away from home
You check my
Hydrocortisone;

The lotion for
My perfect tan
Or salve for lips
To kiss this man

Accept, do I
My gooey three
Could form a plan
For bomb plot spree

A victim
Of mis-communication 
Disturbing transport's
Destination 

Ungroomed
Is how my luggage ends
While protection 
Of the sky depends

On just this task 
For safety's sake
More pleasant if
A smile you'd break

Your focus can't be
All on me
Perhaps you're  wondering
"What's for tea?"..

Or hoping soon
To get away
To pack for your own
Holiday

So here's my wish
For you to find
Credentials
Of a different kind

As poke and prod
Display and sort
Where discretion is
A last resort 

So one day you may 
Understand 
In travel 
To another land

Exposure
To some inner delving
Though required, it may be
Disconcerting
Form: Rhyme

Waiting for the storm to pass

People started running,
for buses, taxis, trains,
with umbrellas no defence,
against the wind and rain,
a drowned rat cycled past,
then disappeared down a lane,
when lightening flashed, I dashed,
hoping to dry out again.

I shot past the pub’s “welcome” sign,
“No Prams or Pushchairs Inside”,
then scrutinised the menu,
for something not micro’d or fried,
with my paper, pint, pasty, and peas,
I sat by the warm fireside,
waiting for the storm to pass,
and brighter weather outside.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Glamour a Freed Verse

GLAMOUR
mores
shown off
ae moral
 imperatives
symbolic
 to its core s
  emblematic
&superficial

a  potential
 put together
 the spectaculare
scrutinised
embroidered
& paraded
insights
of the
 passive
barely
 visible
idealised
 faces
 brightened
loved caressed
 to an
inner
 perfection

Premium Member Not Moving On

A crack will appear, a hole will grow
The truth will out just so you know

Many decades of men try to hide their crimes
Some are so conceited and up themselves that they even think that they can beat time.

But while they spaff the truth and live on lies
People find new ways to crack their smile

The truth will out because for the nation it must
Too many of us dead, too many of us lost
The anguish, pain and sorrow of so many out there
We will not let the truth be buried to compound that despair.

The truth will out.
Their lies will be scrutinised.
They think that we are nothing but fools who fall for lies.
But this is above politics, here there are few rules for us and them

The truth will out and then the nation will stop and stare
With eyes of anger and raging glare.
Our people have differences yes, but when the hammer falls
When we see the tears of our people who have lost it all
Hear of stories of our children dying alone in fear

Don’t think that we’ll forget who’s responsible for a nations tears.

Premium Member The Joy Continuum

awareness self aware
of dark veils of ignorance
shrouding our consciousness 
rotates polarity of sentience 
to view inner luminescence 

the offered enablement 
seen by periscope vision
is then scrutinised by ego
by jaundiced perception
in dimmed colouration 

once baton of awareness 
shifts into the void internal
we must rest our lower mind
trusting cognition spherical 
to behold God’s miracle 

for detachment complete
let us celebrate our delusion
resting our head at His feet
in continuum of meditation 
heart radiant in elation

looking around in wonder 
nestled in quiet contentment 
bliss in-pours as vibrant thunder
as we view life in astonishment 
delighting in soul unfoldment 

17-September-2021
Form: Rhyme


Pandemic

The silence hurt
The empty hours
Aching to be filled
With meaningful activity
With encouraging words
The office abandoned
The empty desks
Unread bookcases
Files to be scrutinised
Would things ever revert?
The hubbub of colleagues
The banter in the corridor
The incidental exchange of ideas
The shared insights on the whiteboard
The feeling of team 
A form of family
All a distant memory
Not a worthy competitor
Not a godforsaken war
Not a foreign power
But an infinitesimally small
Invisible enemy
Out of nowhere
Has changed everything
Causing a revolution
In the path of evolution
Economy thwarted
Jobs lost
Education abandoned
Caught us all by surprise
Made us hunker in our homes
Afraid to come out
Hiding behind screens
Hiding behind masks
Scrubbing hands religiously
Avoiding those we hold dear
Each interpreting the guidelines differently
Applying tailored logic
Trust breached
Will life ever return to where it was?

Premium Member War On the Plebs

No one would have believed in the early years of the 21st century that English lives were being culled by evil powers from the timeless worlds of hell. (No’ 10)

No one would have dreamed that they were being scrutinised by someone who treats us like we’re a disease that swarm and multiply in the inner cities.

Yet somewhere in the gulfs of hell, minds immeasurably more evil than ours regarded our lives with such disdain and slowly and surely drew their plans against us!

Premium Member Immense Condenesd

I M M E N S E       C O N D E N S E D


I     Instructed by a plot, broken into paltry portion
M   Mauled into small, mammoth to screaming speck
M   Mountain range cramped, meandering cancelled
E    Elements of concept squashed into essence
N   No word left unchecked, numerous adaptations
S   Scrutinised, all adjacent scoured thoroughly 
E   Erraditacate unnecessary words, edit again 


C   Captivate from word one, add an anomaly 
O   Owe the audience pleasure, build their trust
N   Never accept the standard, leave cliche alone 
D   Dive into the character's psyche, dig their dirt
E    Employing research makes validity emerge
N   Nullify nonsense inclusions, nudge away distractions
S    Set up captured fast in short form, stir in surprise
E    Every line moves story forward, each essential 
D    Diagnose end point, not long form done and dusted
Form: Acrostic

B,B

Beauty's Beast.

Well I'm looking but I don't see.
A little here a little there
I even looked under the stair.
In the wardrobes and chest of drawers.
I even scrutinised the floors
but look I did and could not find
am I stupid, am I blind.
You say you left it by my chair.
Well I'm sorry  to say it's just not there.
I'm flabbergasted to say the least
but I think your wrong Beauty,
there is no Beast.
Form: Rhyme

The Nihilist - Eight: the Searcher

How high the moon in comparison
  To the depths in which I sink;
How black the nightfall garrison,
  How black the thoughts I think.
In every niche I see her,
  Every place I think I spy
Glimpses of something proximate
  In peripheral white of the eye.
I seek with fevered staring,
  I seek when more sedate,
And all the time comparing
  Degrees of love and hate.
The searcher and his tether
  Are bound so they are one,
Through endless shifts in weather,
  Inclement skies and sun.
On desert plains and highways,
  Through anguish and through bliss,
On crooked wasteland byways,
  Or cold metropolis.
I microscope my mind,
  My bare soul scrutinised,
For scraps of clues to find
  Some answers symbolised.
The heart is driven weak
  By all it left unsaid,
How long must someone seek
  For something known as dead.
Yet search by force of will
  Until all hope is gone,
And time is all to kill,
  And travel travels on…
Form: Verse

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