Scrutinise Poems | Examples


Ode to Earth

Traversing forests, deserts, and over plains, baked naked out in the sun,

forlorn, a child sobbing in the rain, or teardrops from heaven falling.., 

Imagine just a moment, futility of time, 
scrutinise what balance left for self, for humanity 
In an age, a place where passion died, 

then we ought not to fail but, 
inexplicably blind - we do

Like teardrops falling from heaven, where we played, where we cried, 

It is not unending this fate, It is not completely of our own undertaking, this given mortality..,

The strangest lie ever conceived - for ourselves by ourselves this odd endeavour, 

Look for truth, push for truth, personal integrity cannot perish - ever, 

And break the barriers of our lies, 

Love seemed to always be the answer, study, practice the middle path,
so engage, indulge in life as best you can, avoid the karma of consequent wrath, 

You have to give it, to receive it anyway, which is sufficient and sublime, 

Fill your heart, don't destroy another's which is a sin, 
Follow self, one's own instinct which is sufficient doctrine, 

It's better by design



Kurt Hubbard-Beale 
December 2003

Premium Member Evergreen

My leaves never droop and my flowers stand high
I bloom through the year as the seasons pass by
I witness the daffodils stand proud and tall
I see warmer weather put paid to them all

The alliums follow, the marigolds too
Then plants that will flower the whole summer through
Impressive by some standards, you might agree 
But none of these plants hold a candle to me

The roses come close as they bloom into fall
And still here I stand as I scrutinise all
I watch as the wind brings down apples and pears
I won’t drop my leaves but I see them drop theirs 

For I was put here by a man with a spade
Because it gets hot and there isn’t much shade
And all year I brighten this spot where I’m placed
I’m plastic - and there’s no accounting for taste


Premium Member Disassemble Me

It's something inconclusive
This feeling that I'm not
A perfect human specimen 
Lukewarm compared to hot

I scrutinise the mirror
That I carry in my phone
It tells me of belonging
Yet I feel so far from home

I probably need rebuilding
Like a human Lego set
A different type of perfect
Is the answer I detect

A voice within me cries out
Don't change a single part
I love you as imperfect
'Cos you're perfect for my heart

Let's work on your perspective
Stand right here just next to me
Now tell yourself through my eyes
Not more perfect could you be
Form: Rhyme

See Soul In Solitude

Sitting in solitude scrutinise stream
of breath surging spontaneously. Still 
senses, simply survey the front of nose. 
Steadily kundalini opens, spurts up.
Supernatural sensations surround.
Suddenly you sense separation from
body and behold your soul blissfully.

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Premium Member Reflections

I look in the mirror
What do I see
Not the face that used to be
Greying hair and double chin
Fat puffy cheeks that once were thin
Wrinkled face and furrowed brow
Even my ears are different somehow
As I look closer, to scrutinise
My neck and shoulders are thrice the size
They used to be before
My bosom pointed to the floor
As for my waist, where is that?
Gone forever, hidden by fat
My stomach that was flat and trim
Pokes straight out when I'm breathing in
I look in the mirror
What do I see?
Not the girl I used to be
Form: Rhyme


Archetypal

I am not your archetypal sort

My views and beliefs are all self taught

Based around my own thoughts

Within my own conscious mind

Questioning all truths and beliefs

One thing that I have seen is nothing

Is ever what you think it to be

We accept to much compliantly

Accept what we are so blindly

We never seem to dig deeper to see

If what we are learning stands up to critical scrutiny

We must ask questions and look at sides and aspects fully

If we are to find the truth of all things

You cannot just fall into line like a sheep

Following every word that they preach

Accepting every thing that they teach

Abiding by every single policy

Because when others understand you just accept their bidding

They will feel they can do anything without you questioning

Then they will exploit you

Then they will abuse you

Because then they will believe that they have control over all you do

Stop and question everything

Don’t be the archetypal compliant being

Scrutinise all that you’re told

And question all the beliefs and teachings you’ve been sold

And you will see this is good for the soul.

Materialistic Life

What's in this Life? 
It's nothing but conceited. 
I'm afraid it will corrupt me
And make me obnoxious. 
What's in this Life? 
It's nothing but fraud, 
Filled with stories and likes, 
Statuses and calls. 
Where is that simplicity?
The one that was once praised.
Which used to charm people, 
And used to cut through every craze. 
What is with the gazes? 
That scrutinise your laces.
Why don't they understand? 
Prada is worn by even the devil and his slaves!

Marxism For Dummies 14

Though Canton claims it’s communist, it’s not.
Beijing, like Belarus, breeds oligarchs.
There’s nobody alive who’s heard of Marx:
a rickshaw ride’s the only kind of trot.

Seek Mensheviks in Minsk, you’ll end with squat.
In Kursk are cadres countable as quarks,
and proles in Petrograd?  Like hunting snarks.
It’s Putin’s perestroika, not Pol Pot.

Why did the whole thing vanish in thin air?
Why’s Sputnik spat on?  Why is red so square?
We needn’t be complacent in the West.
There’s lots to learn within the Warsaw Waltz
for, as a tool to scrutinise the faults
of Christian Capital Conquest, it’s the best!
Form: Sonnet

Let Us Exchange Our Eyes

day kills night and night sleeps into day
death profits the earth trees 
grow like a girl
girls eclipse the moon the first explosion
corpse paint sun red emotions 
hide under the thick bushes
roots grow kisses the sky rain from the 
leaves earth frozen spins on
 its axis upside down
brown mixing with the black 
hesitant
cats roared shadows in the river 
shrunk
bloated faces unarming the ignorance
let us exchange our eyes n 
scrutinise the secrets of their souls
submerge unto the unborn
to morrow

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