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Disassemble Me

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"Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring."- Marilyn Monroe

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A Sam Scott poem:
8th December 2023
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It's something inconclusive This feeling that I'm not A perfect human specimen Lukewarm compared to hot I scrutinise the mirror That I carry in my phone It tells me of belonging Yet I feel so far from home I probably need rebuilding Like a human Lego set A different type of perfect Is the answer I detect A voice within me cries out Don't change a single part I love you as imperfect 'Cos you're perfect for my heart Let's work on your perspective Stand right here just next to me Now tell yourself through my eyes Not more perfect could you be

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/8/2023 11:47:00 PM

Oh my, this is such a thought-provoking, beautiful and intriguing piece with so many moving emotions.Very true, imperfection is a unique art of perfection in itself..It all depends of perspective and one's own heart embracing the soul as it is.I can truly resonate with all these feelings here and that quote is really brilliant to paid with.."Like a human Lego set A different type of perfect" So many amazing descriptions here..with impeccable rhymes. A soulful write this is and I've saved in Favs

Sam Scott
Date: 12/8/2023 11:53:00 PM

:'-) I am touched by your comments Hiya. Thank you, truly x

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2023 11:41:00 PM

This is absolutely stunning how you’ve created cadence with your brilliant rhymes and flow of words woven in sheer eloquence, yes imperfection is still beautiful. And that quote on the top describes it all. And says it all. And I think so many can resonate with this poem especially how you’ve written “ Yet I feel so far from home“ a very familiar feeling. the ending in this is perfect! Uplifting poem. Every line in this hits home and is soul touching. A fave definitely for me. Pleasure reading

Sam Scott
Date: 12/8/2023 11:56:00 PM

As always your oh so generous endorsement of my simple poetry is heart-warming :) Bless you Ink x