rough draft of the I don't care
When I was a boy,
I was snarky and coy,
I learnt the lessons,
when the bullies
beat the heck out of me
and too right as this
was my personality
and this little prick
was being such a dick.
Living so vividly
being taught a lesson,
I still smoked in the boy's
of the toilets
and got caught.
The teacher waited,
until I inhaled the last
as I knew
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Categories:
rough draft, angst, childhood, nostalgia, youth,
Form: Rhyme
ROUGH DRAFT
Verse 1:
I was once a whisper, light on your tongue,
A gentle hum, a soft song to be sung.
But like the fray of ink, fading with time,
I fell from grace as you lost your mind.
Your fingers once tender, tracing my lines,
Now calloused and tired, no longer entwined.
A thought you had, now lost in the folds,
A burden
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Categories:
rough draft, death, depression, heartbreak, imagination,
Form: Lyric
A High School Rough Draft, Lyrics
Hello, Hello, just a shadow
In a rat race on game show
it’s a rat race on a circus show
Just a game for the cat chase,
In a rat race against the cat chase
In this circus show
On my tiptoe, for Romeo
Under the mistletoe
But the lifeguard let go
Manifesto
I'm in denial
I'm in denial
Hunted by a crocodile
I'm swimming idle
I'm swimming
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Categories:
rough draft, break up, depression, river,
Form: Lyric
Rough Draft part2
Soak in the palmolive snake oil tonic.
The cool stalk of my ebonics on hydroponics.
Get stuck in the matrix of my convicts, of hooker phonics.
Get high off of my knock off water on the brain hydropunkicks.
.
I would sell out my Mother for a few bucks.
Trash the crackers who are buying my tracks,
malign the
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Categories:
rough draft, art,
Form: Lyric
Rough Draft
Gangster Hip hop is a perversion of poetry
a chant of rebellion, in notary,
serve me upon high times noteworthy high ego
malign a strategy to have you leggo your humanity
and follow the not worthy.
Lines.
Apollyon come from the pit in a not so cleverly rhyme.
Of, "Do What Thou Wilt Shall Be" The Hole,
greased
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Categories:
rough draft, art,
Form: Lyric
One Day Rough Draft
Maybe one day
I’ll find the right words
To describe
My love for you
Explain the high
That encapsulates
Every nerve
In my body
Swirling around
My throat
Like the way
Your tongue
Dances with mine
In the dark
Or the way
My spine
Melts against
Your chest
When you
Sigh
Then pull me closer
Illustrate
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Categories:
rough draft, autumn, deep, rain, romance,
Form: Free verse
Rough Draft
Oh, there once was a fellow could craft
Limericks at which most people laughed
But there was a rumor
They lacked some in humor
Till he finished that fourth or fifth draft
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Categories:
rough draft, humorous, silly,
Form: Limerick
Rough Draft Love
This rough draft love
needs some revision.
The author
isn't sure what comes next.
Chapters
often find themselves
in the shredder
called reality.
Crumpled pages
and bleeding ink;
they mark the story
of you and I.
So imperfect,
but still ours.
This autobiographic love
written only
by my hand.
The ink
smudged by my
clumsy touch
and so hard to wash away.
Tragic heroine,
maybe someday
you will find someone who
will write a
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Categories:
rough draft, analogy, feelings, first love,
Form: Free verse
Rough Draft Excerpt From My Book Im Working On
And he said, "Have you ever felt so empty...?"
I replied,
"Son, have you never felt the Sun on your back? Or are you darkness itself? I owe no fealty to you, you lonesome coward! My sins are mine, as yours are yours, so tend your own flame. Kindle it with love and compassion my friend."
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Categories:
rough draft, angel,
Form: Free verse
Rough Draft
We are not in the same
Both of us so good at the game
I told you from the get go
Now you don't wanna let go
You didn't take the clue
Infatuated with something new
All the cards said it was wrong
We didn't listen we still went along
Love doesn't have eyes
To make excuses for the lies
All I feel is lust
Miscommunication
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Categories:
rough draft, desire, relationship, truth,
Form: Rhyme
Random Thoughts *45* Rough Draft
Love like you've never loved before
Reaching your hand out to a closed door
Thinking I knew what was in store
Now I'm suffering, my heart bleeding on the floor
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In the club dancing, alone on the wall
posted up chillin' , drunk, trying not to fall
Not a care at all,
I feel seven feet tall.
Influenced by the alcohol, stimulated by
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Categories:
rough draft, inspirational
Form: Free verse
Rough Draft Disposed
Diversified, she sat upon the page
a tiny dot of incoherence brushed into the ink
She wondered how she got so small
and stretched to reach an "A",
the brink
which started the sentence of her life,
a thousand words to hide away.
While she studied the paper rift
she noticed the fibrous weave
of every white of every letter
to chalky dust inhaled
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Categories:
rough draft, art, on writing and
Form: Free verse