Revved Poems | Examples

Premium MemberMonday Girl

I’m a Monday girl
waking with the Sun. 
Revved up and ready,
just give me coffee.
Ambition on fire. 

I will show you 
what I can do.
I was resting
now I’m solid. 

In the air 
it begins,
a vision.

Ready
to press

start.
Categories: revved, emotions, feelings, motivation,
Form: Diminished Hexaverse

Frost’s bite

When the first wave came and pulled a soul away, I continued on searching for shells in its wake. 

When the winds revved up and took someone else, I cried for the chickens who had to wait in the mud for me to rebuild their coop. 

When the bolt struck town square splitting one into two, I asked all the neighbors if my favorite tree burned, too. 

When the chill took my own, I froze where I stood. Icicles formed over head. The robins outside my window were replaced by sullen ravens. The sun stopped rising altogether. 

When the dark took me, I understood better. The eye of a hurricane hitting hardest at its center. The outskirts of a tornado splintering walls but not a brother. Grief sizzling in the coals of a fire, glowing stronger than the flames themselves. And frost’s bite, though sometimes peaceful and quiet, reaches everything on Earth, regardless of shelter.
Categories: revved, grief, imagery, metaphor, storm,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberNo More!

Please don't hit me again, please, please no more
Her tiny whisper met with a slammed door
and motor revved, as his car sped away.
But, he would be back by the end of day.

He would tell her that he would change his way.
"Babe, you know I didn't mean it," he'd say
"It's just there are many problems, you know.
If I don't find ease, at work I might blow."

Crumpled tissue lay tossed beside her feet.
reminders this madness would soon repeat.
She could tell Mom, who'd tell the neighborhood
Dad beat her, so she'd thought Mom understood.

Someone who listened was her best friend, Sue,
who told her exactly what she should do:
Find a group that protects against these things,
and you'll find the help togetherness brings.

When he got home that day, he found a note
that said, "Bud, here's a note that you can quote:
I hope you find that ease you're looking for.
Me: You'll not hit again. I've said No More!
Categories: revved, abuse, anger, cry, hope,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberThe Acid Test

A little spark. A work of art.
She lit the dark and filled my heart. 
Around I turned to feel the burn.
There she lies. I’ll never learn.
She huffed and puffed and blew me down.
I was amazed at what I’d found.
She drifted high above the rest
But didn’t pass the acid test.

A little prick under the skin.
It’s quite the trick how she snuck in.
Then through the vein up to the brain
The little things drove me insane.
She soothed and smoothed my troubled brow.
She calmed my nerves, I don’t know how.
She laid me down. I felt so blessed.
But didn’t pass the acid test.

A little sign. A dream defined.
I drew the line there in my mind.
Then, unaware, without a care
I breathed her in like so much air.
She revved me up and sped my pulse.
Somehow, some way she got results.
I must admit, she did impress
But didn’t pass the acid test.
Categories: revved, drug,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberTwo Feet On The Ground

Give me a taste of two feet on the ground,
let’s go get dragged by the undertow;
I want to sit and taste the ocean’s sound;

Break apart whatever has you bound,
I’m all revved up and I’m ready to go;
Give me a taste of two feet on the ground;

With palm trees in a salt breeze drowned,
island time is a serpentine bandolero;
I want to sit and taste the ocean’s sound;

Stuck laid up maybe I’ve been clowned,
then again there’s a force to my flow;
Give me a taste of two feet on the ground;

There’s sugar sand on this campground
and waves trying to grab my big toe;
I want to sit and taste the ocean’s sound;

My soul is owned by the sea year round,
living on the Gulf Coast you already know;
Give me a taste of two feet on the ground,
I want to sit and taste the ocean’s sound.
Categories: revved, emotions, feelings, sea,
Form: Villanelle


Premium MemberSipping coffee

“God within me is the enjoyer of the aroma, 
like this dopamine boosting flavor I taste.
I surrender all pleasures to the dweller of my heart, 
breath by breath so that my soul may be chaste”

He is the one that loves me and watches me night and day 
as I sip my coffee I ponder on my future and His way 
How can I yield to Him when my hopes are on the fringe ?
A caffeinated woman highly stimulated by life, unhinged 
like the fences of my childhood past, ...

He is the scent that clings to my bones at my most secret hour
the shadow that never leaves me, my Babel Tower 
How can I be obedient until death when life continues to shower? 
Juiced up to the max by life's contours I tend to cower 
like the deer in the forest I shrink away fast, ...

He is the light at the end of a long and darkly tunnel 
a few prayers on the lips and I am able to leave this jungle 
How can I serve Him best, when all I do is stumble 
revved up like a strong cup of espresso I can only guzzle 
like a thirsty beggar, without a solid repast.
Categories: revved, appreciation, courage, faith, god,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberNismo Is So Nimble

Bulky ute voyeur selects sleek sporty stalion
    Driving by, supersedes her oversized sedan
    Wide wheel arches have Porche comparison
    Voracious engine's enthuse easily enchants


     Large car cast dispelled by lacklustre Calais
     Original conjur 370Z parked beside boring
     Low leg swing exclusive slide in, magic valet
     Over revved start stabs adrenalin assuring 
     

     Our dear Dara, choice contacted in December
     Available last minute to test drive his beast
     Black gloss road boss, enlarged 'lungs' terror
     Capable crazy bitumen baby, tester pleased


     Ultimate Man concurs, the amenable outcome
     Keys in her hand a few days after, aura froze
     Couldn't imagine huge generosity from anyone
     Racing car reap, increase on what she sows

 
     Merry go round roads, another showoff slotted 
     Silver pole stabilised glides in Surfers cycle
     Crosslane carousel onlookers, briefly besotted
     By hot hoof nimble Nissan race horse style






         28th March
         Too Great of a Man
Categories: revved, blessing, business, simple, tribute,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMemories of Sideshow Alley

You could hear the sounds
of sideshow alley blaring out
from a mile away. The hollow,
metallic rasp of music
and glow of coloured lights rose
in a huge bubble 
above the beach.

Adolescent dreams
would flutter the warm summer 
evening like a mindless moth
revved up on hope. The clang
and clatter of rides, the yells 
and excited screams sprayed out 
of a whirling blur of lovely faces
wound your inflamed passions
ever tighter. The telepathic 
signals you sent out
to catch an eye scarcely scored
a glance. Then poised on a chance,
your brain would freeze and hang
on your tongue like a lead balloon
leaving you gasping for air,
a hundred words away
from ruby lips tired of waiting
to blow you up. 

Alone, at the end of the jetty,
all you could do was to let 
the wind billow out
a swollen bag of unspoken words 
and send them off winged
with a foolish hope. And then,
the long walk back, the sound
of sideshows subsiding
into the sad lament 
of breaking waves, the smell
of urine soaked sand
wafting up from below 
the boardwalk, the weighted 
solitude of the bus ride home.
Categories: revved, beach, memory, nostalgia,
Form: Free verse

Need For a Heart Connection, Shaping Up Our Nations- Comment On the Ukraine and Russia Conflict

What can we do,
    A distant few
         Who stand for peace, not war.?

How do I stop fighting, violence, suffering and pain?

Emphasize love, connection, and cross-cultural affection.

    Look down from above,
         What will you see?

Our hearts are connected
     We're all being affected
           On this small planet we inhabit together as one.

I denounce destruction
    More- am a fan of construction

Creativity, not morbidity
    A higher quality of life for all. 

Cross national projects, volunteering overseas and cross-cultural community celebrations please!
        How can we possibly shape each other's nations? 

Meditate on peace,
Pulling up our sleeves to expose the elbow grease, plant trees, garden, play music, bowl- fill our time mindfully, fill our soul- 

What can we do
       A distant few
            Who are revved up to dream, create and help?

"A lot" I say
   Self-reflection says we've got a heart connection, a beautiful bisection, that need not correction.
Categories: revved, community, conflict, culture, peace,
Form: Free verse

Unscheduled Flight

A black fly in midwinter
has burgled the warm air of the kitchen.

It struggles for height,
a brittle-winged air-bender
reaching for plateaus,
higher footstools,
grasping for spice shelves
or the slope of a slick cooker hood.

The splutter
of an over-revved engine,
the bolted clicking of insectivore plates.

Up it lifts again
turning like a wounded helicopter
only to crash-land
on a dish of cooling porridge.

Mired, it scoops gravity out
from a clogged exoskeleton
staggers to a porcelain edge.
Heavy airfoils battle a steam laden air.

Its weight now cannot be sustained.

It falls to the hard kitchen floor
spins disorientated on its back.
A dervish dance.
Sibilant thunder-claps
of a now dismantled buzzing.

Will it try again
to lift its wreckage?

Between the paused silence
of a ticking wall-clock
a burnt-out fuselage trembles.

Nothing disembarks.
Categories: revved, poetry,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberCharted Journey

sails fully set
anchor revved high
and rudder set

yet there is no wind 
and no current
with the moon
an innocent bystander
watching a deceptive calm
waiting to rage

a dolphin encourages tranquility
but a mermaid surfaces
and bids her farewell

safe voyage she mocks
calls upon sea shells 
to propel an ancient message
too often ignored
which only the hobgoblin
understand the full extent of
with longing and despair

the traveler throws
a small pebble into the ocean
ripples appear for a few moments
until a fog horn appeals for more movement
as the sea can be precarious
when waves and tides’ danger
appear only to be on the inside
Categories: revved, anxiety,
Form: Free verse

The Race To End Infidelity

Phwwwwwhht! 
Went the high pitched airy sound
From the tiny plastic whistle 
And off the competitors raced

Vroom!
The car engines revved
One Male driver with a Mistress in Toyota
Another Female driver with no one in a Honda

Zap!
The race began 
Toyota ahead 
Honda Behind

Kakpum!
Came the screeching Honda sound
Like the bad guy's tires 
In a cops-and-robbers chase

Shreeeerchhhh!
Came the halting Toyota Sound
As the driver and mistress go dumb
With hands above their heads

Phwwwwwhht! 
Came the final whistle
The race ended 
And none touched the finished line

Waah! Waah!
Came the sound of tears
From onlookers and the surviving competitors 
As they stared deep into space

Hahaha!
Came the voice of the judges
Who adored the Toyota Driver’s Bravery
And Condemned the Honda Competitor

Boo!
Came the voice of condemnation
For the Honda Driver
Whom they tagged “Foolish”
Blames filled the air 
For both the Toyota and Honda driver 
But no one won the chase 
So Infidelity remained
Categories: revved, abuse, betrayal, death, deep,
Form: Blank verse

Premium MemberFreaky and Weird

We grew our hair down to our shoulders
    Hirsute we were, moustaches and beards
  Turned up our noses at those who were older
    'Cos we were so hip, so freaky, so weird

  Revved up our stereos, going stone-deaf
    Dropped pill after pill, of common sense bereft
  Wore psychedelic threads to match our psychedelic brains
    We thought ourselves 'free,' but we were really in chains

  Don't ask me if the Sixties were 'wonderful years!'
    ~ Just leave me alone with my cigars and my beer
Categories: revved, america, drink, drug, fashion,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMigraine

Another morning
Breaks in a wet and thickening
Cling of fog, gathers on leaves to load
Down and bend
Each with a growing weight,
Fastened until too heavy to hold when all
Gives way to spill and
Hammer on the roof of your world.
Inside, the air throbs. Fragile nerves
Jar with every weighted blow and cry to
Keep the light from 
Leaking in between clenched lids.
Migraine !.
Nothing worse to wake to,
Or have the inflamed dregs of a dream
Pounding like a pestle in the mortar of the skull,
Quickening with every stroke and
Revved to pummel each clambering thought
Should you try
To escape the prison of your pain. And when
Unable to take anymore, you have that
Vision of a place where you would like to go, then
With your finger, marking it with a large
X on your imaginary map, hoping when
You're ready, you can blast off leaving a smouldering
Zero on the pillow where your head should be.
Categories: revved, pain,
Form: Acrostic

Premium MemberPoem of the Day

You asked me for a poem today.
I raised the roof of my skull 
like the hood of a jalopy,
I replaced the sparkplugs and 
Revved my six cylinders, smoking 
Choking an unbreathable cloud, 
My tarnished shroud.

You asked me for a poem today,
And here I am full of meager
Moments where I once savored 
Modest madness. Where I neglected
Love and paid up with hungry longing,
All my regrets for reckless crimes.

You ask me for a poem today.
Just one day, a poem!
But all poems are made somewhere in the stars,
Carrying ships of perfumes and refracted prisms,
They know no start or end,
They violate all clocks and calendars.
I won’t know when the words stop flowing.
You might catch it if they do.
Categories: revved, imagery, inspiration, muse, poetry,
Form: Free verse

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