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Premium Member Revised Nursery Rhyme No 3 - Little Miss Tough
Little Miss Tough Sat on her duff whining ‘bout ‘The Amerikan Way’ Along came a missile ...

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Categories: revised, america, fear, patriotic, perspective,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Revised Nursery Rhyme No 2 - Capital Capitol Expose
Old Joe and Jill went up to Capitol Hill Stayed four years, longer than they had-oughter Then Old Joe came tumbling down ~ As she scavenged the carcass for his crown ...

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Categories: revised, america, heart, humor, political,
Form: Rhyme



Premium Member Revised Nursery Rhyme - Mary - Bitesize Contest
Mary ate a great big ham her gills turned white as snow So, to the bathroom Mary went ‘cos up she had to throw Entry in...

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Categories: revised, food, funny,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member And the television church that our Lord and Savior has established in my apartment's home
Wasn't I more than a little bit surprised, when Jesus Christ very softly and gently whispered these simple humble words to me,"And, Roxanne, there is a church that I have established in your house whether you know it or not." When we think about a home church, we literally think of a typical established Bible study, praise and worship...

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Categories: revised, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Prose
Randomly Revised
J-oint O-peration's I-ntention N-ecessarily A-pplies J-ustified E-dit, A-s N-ame's D-econstructed E-xpression L-ooks E-xact O-r N-atural ©bfa042825 Monocrostic (Birthday of Joina Jean De Leon) ...

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Categories: revised, birthday,
Form: Other



Premium Member A Mating Dance -revised
For a significant length of time, they swim in synch. Then rapidly fluttering their fins like the wings of hummingbirds, ...

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Categories: revised, animal,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member One Minute Man revised
A bouquet of blossoms The calmness in the forest I felt his one eye willy against my ribs In a nanosecond, he became a minute man Was this a midwinter dream? I smile and then I kiss his neck, he whispers, honey, I hope that you are not upset, Darn! I was so ashamed of this One minute man, Viagra is all I can...

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Categories: revised, addiction, allusion, anger, anxiety,
Form: Blank verse
Rags -- revised
holding on to illusions trying to make it through fevered dreams reflect fantasies scattered threads permeate reality this state of delusion a symptom of the confusion calling from the void the angels shone with silver their furs stuffed in a sack lying upon cloudtops but ignorant of their rags seeking to reach the sky he thought he could fly but those born soaring never needed to try holding on to...

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Categories: revised, confusion, depression, discrimination, me,
Form: Free verse
Splinters -- revised
like splinters in the mind thoughts that cannot be left behind faded memories of self like a photo on a shelf behind that glassy shine you're frozen forever in time reality is divided as the flotsam rises like shards of broken glass the shadows of the past cutting you into two marching onward to your doom marching onward to your doom you, were fed from the bowl that...

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Categories: revised, allusion, analogy, angst, anxiety,
Form: Free verse
The Girl Who Cried Wolf Revised
She cried out for attention—was it really a game? Or was it the only way they’d remember her name? Her voice, an echo, lost in the night, Drowned by indifference, swallowed by spite. Her grandfather’s eyes, heavy with shame, Saw only a liar—never the pain. She was a burden, a whispered regret, A shadow of sorrow he’d rather forget. Lonely, broken, battered, and...

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Categories: revised, analogy, anger, childhood, emotions,
Form: Free verse
Conversation with the devil Revised part 2
The unkiss of life don't sell your soul Go find your soul the final kiss goodbye A Conversation with the Devil of 2025 Mad as thunder, kiss like thorns, blood like blackberry wine, fallen angel charms and looks with smell of Smokey quartz ash, with orange blossom flowers, with white Roses and honeysuckle dreams, and...

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Categories: revised, bible, computer, creation, dark,
Form: Bio
Premium Member Displaced--The Trail of Tears --- REVISED
Time Period~~1830-1850 As rain falls hard and soaks the ground and thunder roars its mighty sound, so tears of the displaced may fall, our cries bespeaking dearth and pall. The Deep South tribes of long ago were forced to forge a trail of woe, of death and want, with goods so small, our cries bespeaking dearth and pall. We Cherokees were brought to tears when...

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Categories: revised, history, native american,
Form: Kyrielle
Premium Member Recognition - revised for a missing line
Line of Inquiry: “Mistaken that I was this body-mind, I succumbed to desire and fell to fear but on choosing pathways loving and kind, light of God in heart began to appear and truth of my true essence became clear, which made in God’s image, is living light, gripping us in rapture of bliss delight.” - Unseeking Seeker Oh to rid oneself...

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Categories: revised, spiritual,
Form: Sonnet
Premium Member January--Revised
Junction of old and new Journey begins this month Junk those old calendars Joyful celebrants meet Jackets replaced with coats Jack Frost brings icy blasts Journal’s blank pages wait ...

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Categories: revised, january, new year, weather,
Form: Pleiades
Premium Member Innovative Thinking--REVISED
My long-time love gave me a special gift, a photo of himself when he was young. He even autographed it: “Love you! Dave.” From then, upon my wall this treasure hung where I could always gaze at it~~but then his love, if it was love, began to die. Who breaks up with someone he doesn’t hate on Christmas Day? All I could...

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Categories: revised, heartbreak, recovery from, time,
Form: Rhyme

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