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Rags -- revised
holding on to illusions trying to make it through fevered dreams reflect fantasies scattered threads permeate reality this state of delusion a symptom of the confusion calling from the void the angels shone with silver their furs stuffed in a sack lying upon cloudtops but ignorant of their rags seeking to reach the sky he thought he could fly but those born soaring never needed to try holding on to...

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Categories: revised, confusion, depression, discrimination, me,
Form: Free verse
Splinters -- revised
like splinters in the mind thoughts that cannot be left behind faded memories of self like a photo on a shelf behind that glassy shine you're frozen forever in time reality is divided as the flotsam rises like shards of broken glass the shadows of the past cutting you into two marching onward to your doom marching onward to your doom you, were fed from the bowl that...

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Categories: revised, allusion, analogy, angst, anxiety,
Form: Free verse



The Girl Who Cried Wolf Revised
She cried out for attention—was it really a game? Or was it the only way they’d remember her name? Her voice, an echo, lost in the night, Drowned by indifference, swallowed by spite. Her grandfather’s eyes, heavy with shame, Saw only a liar—never the pain. She was a burden, a whispered regret, A shadow of sorrow he’d rather forget. Lonely, broken, battered, and...

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Categories: revised, analogy, anger, childhood, emotions,
Form: Free verse
Conversation with the devil Revised part 2
The unkiss of life don't sell your soul Go find your soul the final kiss goodbye A Conversation with the Devil of 2025 Mad as thunder, kiss like thorns, blood like blackberry wine, fallen angel charms and looks with smell of Smokey quartz ash, with orange blossom flowers, with white Roses and honeysuckle dreams, and...

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Categories: revised, bible, computer, creation, dark,
Form: Bio
Premium Member Displaced--The Trail of Tears --- REVISED
Time Period~~1830-1850 As rain falls hard and soaks the ground and thunder roars its mighty sound, so tears of the displaced may fall, our cries bespeaking dearth and pall. The Deep South tribes of long ago were forced to forge a trail of woe, of death and want, with goods so small, our cries bespeaking dearth and pall. We Cherokees were brought to tears when...

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Categories: revised, history, native american,
Form: Kyrielle



Premium Member Recognition - revised for a missing line
Line of Inquiry: “Mistaken that I was this body-mind, I succumbed to desire and fell to fear but on choosing pathways loving and kind, light of God in heart began to appear and truth of my true essence became clear, which made in God’s image, is living light, gripping us in rapture of bliss delight.” - Unseeking Seeker Oh to rid oneself...

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Categories: revised, spiritual,
Form: Sonnet
Premium Member January--Revised
Junction of old and new Journey begins this month Junk those old calendars Joyful celebrants meet Jackets replaced with coats Jack Frost brings icy blasts Journal’s blank pages wait ...

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Categories: revised, january, new year, weather,
Form: Pleiades
Premium Member Innovative Thinking--REVISED
My long-time love gave me a special gift, a photo of himself when he was young. He even autographed it: “Love you! Dave.” From then, upon my wall this treasure hung where I could always gaze at it~~but then his love, if it was love, began to die. Who breaks up with someone he doesn’t hate on Christmas Day? All I could...

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Categories: revised, heartbreak, recovery from, time,
Form: Rhyme
1st revised of NOTHINGYAHOO
1ST Revised version NOTHINGYAHOO the psychopathic murdered of 51589. majority been Innocent and God fearing whose souls will testify keeping him in the hell fire FOREVER. Only did his mother know what evil, she would have summon God to stop his evil birth. The greed in NOTHINGYAHOO has no morality, just a carnivorous cannibal. schemes to manipulation human intelligence. Take...

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Categories: revised, 12th grade, evil, grave,
Form: Free verse
The Light of the World is Jesus collections
Once I was lost in the deep darkness of sin, But than Jesus Christ came and entered right into My heavy sin laden heart and washed away all of Sinful inequities and gave my life a whole brand New start. And now I enjoy a truly redeemed heart. Chorus In heaven there is no darkness at all, The light of...

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Categories: revised, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Lyric
Premium Member Night of Love in Andalusia - Revised Repost
I lounge lazily on my deck chair Up high in the spacious loggia Loafing the time away, patient, waiting..... The ocean ebbs into the small bay As the sun sets far away over the horizon. From below electric lights flash on One by one and guitars are strummed. The enticing aroma of paella wafts up...

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Categories: revised, dance, love,
Form: Lyric
Premium Member The Tortoise and the Hare, Revised
The tortoise ran his race far, far off the pace While the speedy hare zoomed from here to there Yet when they tallied up the score the...

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Categories: revised, animal, care, race, success,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member Murphy's Law: REVISED UPDATE
*NOTE subtleties emphasized in their articulate closures contain a quantum message. I think we're in trouble mate why, what's wrong I saw the pilot reading a manual was it how to land a plane in a storm no, how to fly one ???---!. there's no life preservers on this ship, mate I heard this captain say that the ship has a...

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Categories: revised, angst,
Form: Dramatic Verse
Premium Member We Go 2 War by Glenn Hughes: Revised
My Interpretation: Glenn Hughes Lyric: In the space of a short span Mother can...

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Categories: revised, war,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
Premium Member Growth - Revised
Teach love of life to just one human ~ Soon you’ll have a garden bloomin’ ...

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Categories: revised, garden, growth, humanity,
Form: Couplet

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