Get Your Premium Membership

Revised Nursery Rhyme No 2 - Capital Capitol Expose

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Gershon Wolf.


I think that this 'Revised Nursery Rhyme' style has potential to be a new poem type on the Soup. I myself am too lazy and unmotivated to do the work to get it done. As well, I really don't care to put any 'restrictions' on any so-called  'poem-type'. I guess that qualifies me as a 'non-poet poet.' ... All that said, maybe someone else wants to take on the challenge. If so, it's all yours. ~ Cheers, Gershon   P.S: If nothing else, these poems are fun to write.  

Old Joe and Jill went up to Capitol Hill Stayed four years, longer than they had-oughter Then Old Joe came tumbling down ~ As she scavenged the carcass for his crown The DEI VP's heart exposed as stone after DEI = Didn't Earn It VP = Vice-President, Kamala Harris

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/10/2025 4:47:00 AM
Was an American travesty. Ye old jedi mind tricks that fooled no one, that exposed lies.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/9/2025 8:52:00 PM
I like it, Gershon. A fun read, too bad it has that underlying truth in it. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2025 9:23:00 PM
I was 'under-lying' i/o 'over-lying. lol.
Date: 7/9/2025 2:57:00 PM
Love it, GW. And you’re right about a new poem type… the possibilities are endless. Might have a dabble myself. Terry
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2025 6:21:00 PM
Oh, goodie, goodie, gumdrops, Terry. You'd be great at these. No bout adoubt it. Lex Dissia

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry