Best Revised Poems
Below are the all-time best Revised poems written by Poets on PoetrySoup. These top poems in list format are the best examples of revised poems written by PoetrySoup members
Oh, Heavenly NightThat night we kissed, my heart became a butterfly.
It sprouted wings and danced across the velvet sky,
then leapt across the multitude of stars there strewn
along...
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Categories:
revised, heart, night,
Form:
Lyric
My Heart Has Found a Home-Song VersionMy heart has found a home (Song version)
So many years alone-
my hearts without a home
Nights were filled with fear-
my heart shed a tear
My loneliness had...
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Categories:
revised, for her, heart, loneliness,
Form:
Lyric
When First Magnolia BloomsCoffee bean scent still fills the air
with each new sunrise in our log cabin
My arms around me embrace the winds of winters gone.
Every sky-night the...
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Categories:
revised, absence,
Form:
Free verse
Happy Solitude, Collaboration With Poet Destroyer A(This theme coincidentally matched up with another contest I recently
entered, so I revised my sonnet and then PD graciously extended this
idea of a day of...
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Categories:
revised, nature, silence,
Form:
Sonnet
Gone ForeverHere I sit amongst the long grasses and the reed,
in a solitary place, where my breath is freed,
on an Indian Summer's evening on the lake...
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Categories:
revised, autumn, nature, sky, summer,
Form:
Rhyme
Under the Willow TreesA path strewn thick with ruddy-faced leaves
led to nowhere and everywhere in fantasies,
our near-death rescue from boredom
...
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Categories:
revised, childhood, death of a
Form:
Free verse
Where Crimson Bleeds Its RoseUnder a blue moon
He becomes my dream
A secret uncloaked
Emotion unveiled
A mystery revealed
Existence of warmth
between my subconscious
and implicit knowledge
..And it is there
`Neath the soft spot
of...
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Categories:
revised, absence,
Form:
Free verse
Just Like the Wind
Before I ever saw those eyes
How deeply I loved you
Before you read my first thought
I found you
Before you ever dreamt of my lips
I kissed your...
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Categories:
revised, absence,
Form:
Free verse
By God's GraceI, who always used to gravitate toward health and fitness,
would flatter myself that I was too healthy to ever get a bad disease.
Then it happened!...
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Categories:
revised, cancer,
Form:
Free verse
My Angel In Disguise- Tribute To Fj ThompsonShe saw my pain and gifted me a crown
and named me Queen when I felt like a clown
She sent her gift cross the many miles
And...
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Categories:
revised, angel, friendship, tribute,
Form:
Sonnet
What Is This DanceWhat is this dance that we do?
First you spin me; I twirl with delight
Captivated by your attentive gaze
Then you back away as I move toward...
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Categories:
revised, confusion, dance, relationship,
Form:
Lyric
Categories:
revised, beauty, universe,
Form:
Light Verse
Love of EdelweissThis is a slightly revised repost but which was formerly deleted.)
I climbed the high mountain,
breathed in the harsh high air,
really relished the beauty
of the valley...
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Categories:
revised, love,
Form:
Free verse
A Moment In Time....Sleeping Beauties~ Moment in time....
As I reflected upon her picture; this fairytale revised ~
And how she disappeared so quickly
Yet but a passing vision before my...
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Categories:
revised, friendship, life, love, time
Form:
I do not know?
Where Do We Belong Where do we belong Where did We go wrong
Weren't our emotions deep enough to make us stay
I look back...
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Categories:
revised, goodbye,
Form:
Lyric