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Premium Member Oh, Heavenly Night
That night we kissed, my heart became a butterfly.
It sprouted wings and danced across the velvet sky,
then leapt across the multitude of stars there strewn
along...

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Categories: revised, heart, night,
Form: Lyric



My Heart Has Found a Home-Song Version
My heart has found a home (Song version)

So many years alone-
my hearts without a home
Nights were filled with fear-
my heart shed a tear

My loneliness had...

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Categories: revised, for her, heart, loneliness,
Form: Lyric
When First Magnolia Blooms
Coffee bean scent still fills the air

with each new sunrise in our log cabin

My arms around me embrace the winds of winters gone.

Every sky-night the...

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Categories: revised, absence,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Happy Solitude, Collaboration With Poet Destroyer A
(This theme coincidentally matched up with another contest I recently
entered, so I revised my sonnet and then PD graciously extended this
idea of a day of...

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Categories: revised, nature, silence,
Form: Sonnet
Premium Member Gone Forever
Here I sit amongst the long grasses and the reed,
in a solitary place, where my breath is freed,
on an Indian Summer's evening on the lake...

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Categories: revised, autumn, nature, sky, summer,
Form: Rhyme



Under the Willow Trees
A path strewn thick with ruddy-faced leaves
led to nowhere and everywhere in fantasies, 
our near-death rescue from boredom 
      ...

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Categories: revised, childhood, death of a
Form: Free verse
Where Crimson Bleeds Its Rose
Under a blue moon

He becomes my dream

A secret uncloaked

Emotion unveiled

A mystery revealed

Existence of warmth

between my subconscious

and implicit knowledge

..And it is there

`Neath the soft spot 

of...

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Categories: revised, absence,
Form: Free verse
Just Like the Wind
Before I ever saw those eyes

How deeply I loved you

Before you read my first thought

I found you

Before you ever dreamt of my lips

I kissed your...

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Categories: revised, absence,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member By God's Grace
I, who always used to gravitate toward health and fitness,
would flatter myself that I was too healthy to ever get a bad disease.
Then it happened!...

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Categories: revised, cancer,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member My Angel In Disguise- Tribute To Fj Thompson
She saw my pain and gifted me a crown
and named me Queen when I felt like a clown
She sent her gift cross the many miles
And...

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Categories: revised, angel, friendship, tribute,
Form: Sonnet
Premium Member What Is This Dance
What is this dance that we do?
First you spin me; I twirl with delight
Captivated by your attentive gaze
Then you back away as I move toward...

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Categories: revised, confusion, dance, relationship,
Form: Lyric
Star Child
Revised....

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Categories: revised, beauty, universe,
Form: Light Verse
Premium Member Love of Edelweiss
This is a slightly revised repost but which was formerly deleted.)

I climbed the high mountain,
breathed in the harsh high air,
really relished the beauty
of the valley...

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Categories: revised, love,
Form: Free verse
A Moment In Time....
Sleeping Beauties~ Moment in time....

As I reflected upon her picture; this fairytale revised ~

And how she disappeared so quickly

Yet but a passing vision before my...

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Categories: revised, friendship, life, love, time
Form: I do not know?
Where Do We Belong
 Where do we belong      Where did We go wrong

Weren't our emotions deep enough to make us stay

I look back...

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Categories: revised, goodbye,
Form: Lyric

Book: Reflection on the Important Things