Response Poems | Examples

List of Member Poems

MY RESPONSE TO HIM

He pulled me out of
the abyss of my despair 
He gave me His love
not a spirit of fear 

He promised to never leave me 
stay forever in my life 
so my response to Him 
Is yes my Lord Christ 

and when I was down 
to my last time 
God had my bills paid 
right on time 

He promised to never leave me 
stay forever in my life 
so my response to Him 
Is yes my Lord Christ 

God wants me to be 
at my best
for in me
He does invest 
He supplies all my needs 
satisfies all my desires 
So yes, a response to Him 
Is much required 

Yes Lord yes Lord 
with no uncertainty 
Yes Lord yes Lord 
with true affinity 
Yes Lord yes Lord 
Is my only reply 
Yes Lord yes Lord 
I lift your name up high 

You promised to never leave me 
stay forever in my life 
So my response to you God 
Will always be yes 
My Lord Christ

Premium Member An Afternoon Fright

manhattan roommate
brainwave specialist
blowhard rippling
always partygoer
dolphinfish royalist
turquoise irresistible
undrained rat
swearing yellowlegs
bearable humbling
houseguest behead
surrenderer bart


(Weekly Magnetic Poetry Challenge • July 20–26, 2026)

Premium Member Beauty's Response

(This poem complements A Sad Truth)

Beauty’s Response

Sad Truth, you so mistake and malign me.
Do you think I care for cheap flattery?
These insults are more difficult to bear
than your current rejection and negation.
I would prefer their silence and neglect 
over the cheap parody and deceit.

For Beauty is not as simple as Truth –
you are a quality expressed,
whereas I am one the soul absorbs;
Beauty expressed is not beauty.

How shall we enlighten this distinction?  
For this difference is the simple answer
to aesthetics.  But few will delve below
the falseness of imitation and find 
the breathtaking truth of Beauty.


Premium Member SYMPATHETIC RESPONSE

SYMPATHETIC RESPONSE
characteristically 
 assured
ideas

merely
tolerated
not LACKING RIGHTS
bearing
 counterpart
trophies

without
pride
by GRASPING EVENTS
mobilising
 effort
concentrating

single 
mindedly

IRAN RESPONSE

RESPONSE ANYDAY

IRAN STALLS UNTIL SUNDAY

AND WHAT WILL IT SAY

Premium Member Solace

Isn’t it beautiful that God
Takes care of your day
You’ve no idea if you are heard
You didn’t kneel and pray
It sounds ridiculous to you
To beg for benefits 
As if it falls on sacred due
Of God, to know your needs
But from a closer view it seems
That solace is the cause
And you are hoping for the dreams
Where God provides response.


No Response

If chaos is responded to with chaos, it will create more Chaos!

Premium Member AFRICAN DRUMS RESPONSE

Tempo Distinction
Energized skies
Enterprising praise
Descend in the stature
Rhythm of the wise
Beat by beat
Legacy retreat
Dancing in bare feet
Warmth from the sun
Survival honor
Native land tongue
Ancestry spiritual rejoice
Heaven’s delight
Inspiring breezes
Breed of value
Slave once never again
Strength and Endurance
Drum beat
African pride
Spiritual uplift.

Theory Of Probability

Not wishing to deride but
unable to make up her mind
let alone decide
my every question
elicited the response of
a definite maybe
a positive perhaps
a certain perchance
or a possible mayhaps
and if it weren't for her bed
being next to the wall
she'd never know
which side to get out of at all
and as for which shoe
to step into first
it's probably the perfect example of
indecision at her worst

Premium Member Response to love letter

Dear Eos,

I
wish I still felt passion in my heart toward 
the generous soul that you are.

You always saw beauty in the world 
and painted strokes of life 
with a brush of sweetness and delight.

I
am sorry for the suffering life's put you through.
The heart is a fickle thing. It simply was not meant to be.

We've walked together but now our paths divert,
we take with us the lessons that we learned.

----Tithonus.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Please Tell Me: A Response to the Film 'Grown Ups'

Please tell me it’s summer every day of the year.

Please tell me that Aerosmith plays from the sky.

Please tell me that heaven’s a basketball court.

Please tell me that everyone’s life has a point.

Please tell me that no one is ever alone.

Please tell me that dying is easily explained.

Please tell me that broken birds get back their wings.

Please tell me the tooth fairy isn’t my mom.

Please tell me that people are just as they seem.

Please tell me “I’m sorry” is always enough.


Please, Adam Sandler, you loveable lout,

Tell me that everything always works out.

Premium Member Written in Response to Pensive Solitude on The Eve of This Night

An outcast this night,
I mournfully sigh with gloom:
but, I make war, fight!
to defeat my rising doom,
and defend my haunted tomb.

Premium Member Response to Loan Request

Have you looked at the purple house down by the bay?
It is the one with green shutters, a shabby gray.
A terrific value, says that realtor, Mrs. Dray.
She would know and she always has her say.

Okay, then, here’s another idea said May.
Why don’t you buy a home over in Bray?
It’s a cheaper town, I hear people say.
It is a heck of a value, I was told yesterday.

You need a loan? I wish there was some way.
But all of my money is maxed out, said Lay.
Wish I did not have to go, but I cannot stay
For some imbecile is now towing my car away

Premium Member Love’s Response


Remember, my love
The signs from above
Two hearts in awe of
Dreams who never die
Despite when or why
God soon brings sweet grace
Stirring souls to chase
Love’s tender embrace

Remember, my friend
It is love I send
Love you can defend
Live with faith within
Where life does begin
Here your heart can win
I can hear your sigh
Love is your reply

Premium Member Mrs O'Leary's response to string theory

Someone asked old Mrs. O'Leary,
"What do you think about string theory?"
She said, "I don't believe in such a thing,
because it doesn't cover everything,
and what it leaves uncovered can be pretty damn scary."

Sub Categories

Looking for the formal definition, structure, and history of this poetry form? Visit the Poetry Dictionary entry below. Then return to explore how PoetrySoup members bring the form to life through their own poems.

Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace