Best Response Poems
Intrusion In the Fray:Response To TomForgive intrusion in the fray
I'm making comments today
Tom's limericks, three
were cute as can be
But of Kim and Jack, I must say.....
We all know how well Kim can write
She graces each page of the site
But limerick queen
Jan is a machine
There's no cause to argue or fight...
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Categories:
response, poetry,
Form:
Limerick
Response of a Harried Housewife To Her Spouse“The
children
are always
interrupting.
You never have time
for me,” her husband whined
as he dropped his dirty clothes
right there on the floor by the bed.
Trying not to roll her eyes, she gave
this quick response to her disgruntled spouse:
“The kids, chores and mishaps have me spinning,
and you tell me you...
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Categories:
response, wife, work, me,
Form:
Etheree
How Do I Love Thee Contest - ResponseHere is the poem by Elizabeth Barrett Browning, 1806 - 1861
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of being and ideal grace.
I love...
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Categories:
response, love,
Form:
Italian Sonnet
Confident Dancer In Response To First PoemTentative Dancer
Do I choose to join, this Poetic Dance
To reveal my soul, to take this chance
I am left to wonder, who will care
If my life is charmed, or full of despair
I release my emotions, to the page
The good the sad, the parts with rage
The pen...
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Categories:
response, adventure, beauty, dance,
Form:
Couplet
Response To Sonnet 43
Response to Elizabeth Barrett Browning's Sonnet 43,
Let Me Count The Ways
A hundred years beneath the earth my love,
And still, I love thee with my cold dead soul;
You see, my love the soul is still quite whole,
I love thee, yet you are an angel...
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Categories:
response, love,
Form:
Italian Sonnet
In Response To My First Poem For ContestOriginal Poem Just Desserts
I was at my favourite restaurant and had a lovely meal
If I finished all my food then a pudding was the deal
I’d relished every morsel and was pleased as a Cheshire cat
The dessert menu was on its way, Oh I couldn’t wait...
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Categories:
response, food, humorous,
Form:
Rhyme
Bugger - Her ResponseBugger
17th July 2015
Last night my missus gave me some oysters for tea
Was I in for a night of rip snorting whoopee?
I showered and shaved trying to smell like a stud
Her half dozen oysters must have all of been duds.
Things were desperate so I engaged...
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Categories:
response, fun, funny, humor, longing,
Form:
Rhyme
Response To PotpourriDeath brings relief in the belief
that afterlife is awaiting.
So shed no tears, harbor no fears
as you cross the river of light.
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19th January, 2016 ~ Quote 4
“Death is not extinguishing the light; it is only putting out
the lamp because the dawn has come.” Rabindranath...
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Categories:
response, faith,
Form:
Verse
Her Lover's Response - How Do I Love Thee Contest
Elizabeth Barrett Browning, 1806 - 1861 - To Her Lover
How Do I Love Thee? (Sonnet 43)
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of...
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Categories:
response, heart, love, soulmate,
Form:
Sonnet
A Response To Your First PoemNew Year, Past Years
Dawn, looking as blush as twilight,
Where the silhouette of trees still lingers
And envelopes me—
Transporting me to my world of yesterday.
I can still hear my children’s laughter;
Watch them play and dance
To their sweet singing tunes.
How quiet the morning...
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Categories:
response, absence, children, loneliness, love,
Form:
Free verse
A Response To Slipping AwayDo not lose hope; I’m coming home to you.
although you’re far away, I swear I hear
the desperation in your song so blue.
And in the dark, I see your face appear.
It’s just as if I’d never left your side.
Do not lose hope; I’m coming home...
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Categories:
response, feelings, love hurts,
Form:
Quatern
In Response To My First Poem
See-Saws - (First Poem posted on PoetrySoup, 08/04/2014)
What playground does not hold the magic lure
of see-saws firmly braced upon their stands?
What child resists excitement, felt for sure
in ups and downs: the hard thump when he lands
and surging thrill of bouncing up again?
To...
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Categories:
response, life, philosophy, universe,
Form:
Iambic Pentameter
Lifegivers ResponsePlease read Eileen's poem "To the Lifegiver" first.
Yes I have given you 365 days
Yet the pages are not blank
I have choreographed an amazing dance
I ask you to take my hand
Your life is to important to leave to chance
You being you is what makes me smile
I...
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Categories:
response, bible, celebration, drink, joy,
Form:
Free verse
In Response To Dylan ThomasDo not go gentle into morning light
Young souls should burn and rave at start of day
Rage, rage against the coming of the night
Though wise men at their dawn know toil is right,
Because their deeds must fork some lightening they
Do not go gentle into morning light
Good...
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Categories:
response, life, perspective, tribute,
Form:
Villanelle
In Response To My First PoemAT THE FINAL GOODBYE
The congregation
mingled within the silent
stone slabs of their
ancestors, a final goodbye
to yet another
destined to leave this place.
Yet to one, in this his
profound sorrow an
enchanting moment.
He craved! With a soul
sensitive and true to
touch a living memory,
his lips again to caress
her symbolic smile.
His...
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Categories:
response, lost love, love,
Form:
Quatrain