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Response to Loan Request

Have you looked at the purple house down by the bay? It is the one with green shutters, a shabby gray. A terrific value, says that realtor, Mrs. Dray. She would know and she always has her say. Okay, then, here’s another idea said May. Why don’t you buy a home over in Bray? It’s a cheaper town, I hear people say. It is a heck of a value, I was told yesterday. You need a loan? I wish there was some way. But all of my money is maxed out, said Lay. Wish I did not have to go, but I cannot stay For some imbecile is now towing my car away

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