Perceptive Poems | Examples


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Premium Member Perceptive Bunny is Ready for Rain

Perceptive bunny wanted a raincoat and a rain hat
Mommy asked Daddy “what do you think of that?”
He is clairaudient, he knows something, he said.
They got him a slicker, and a cap for his head

Perceptive bunny wanted rain boots too.
To fit his enormous feet, not easy to do.
But his parents indulged him, without refrain.
He spent a week playing outside in the rain.

Premium Member A Perceptive Pug

A cautious young lady in Garden Gate
brings her pug when she goes on a date
One bark: He’s nice
Two barks: Thinks twice
Three barks: Run before it’s too late!

Premium Member I Know Who I Am

I know who I am.
I’ve got a problem, I’m not ordinary.
I see things that are transparent.
And I never clap with the rest.
I know there are ghosts everywhere.
Some are real and some man-made.
If it’s funny I will laugh, if it’s not
I won’t pretend. I’m not here to make
Up the numbers, I’m not a statistic.
I know nothing bad will happen and
I’m not naive enough to be a sensation.
I think I’ve done something, that’s more 
than the average Joe. I don’t sleep-walk. 
I’m conscious every waking moment.
I can smell a lie. I’m special, perceptive.
A knowledgeable idiot, alive. Are you?

David Cox  08/02/21


Perceptive Glance

The whispers were faint at first,
Now they've become regular chatterboxes.
I hear them behind the eyes of passerbyers,
As they believe they'll go unnoticed...

I see their black smokey like tendrils
Slowly stretching out to touch me,
But are quickly repulsed as if
Touching burning coals, or a burning light.

These walks in the darkness especially after rain,
Cool under foot, as reflections remind of
Daily doings and the things that can go unnoticed.

As I'm being consumed by personal desires
And the everyday chase for everyday things,
Yes, the chatter gets louder with wanting pleas,
But they grow much fainter with self control.....

Perceptive To the Fortuity

the fragility of a flower
quavering in autumn's draft
infallibly will succumb
to the rime of night

the capability to shield it
prevails in your hands
if only to prolong its life
from the foreordained path

imagine your own life
retained in your hands
your trembling fingers
grasping the tips of needles
wary of each droplet
perceptive to the fortuity
that each could mean
extended life or inevitable death

Perceptive Poem

V-ery
K-ind

K-een
A-uthor's
N-ame
N-icely
I-mplements
A-nother
P-erceptive
P-oem
A-bout
N-obility

Topic: Birthday of poet Dr. V. K. Kanniappan (October 17) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic


My Nature Is To Cure All Ills

where is the pill dear
It's in our heart, us to know
follow word wise to make

Premium Member Perceptive Eyes: Syllables of Wisdom

listen to the wise

           see life through perceptive eyes

                  wisdom is your prize






               .................................
                  January 9th, 2016

Premium Member Monoku-Perceptive Connections

genetic aesthetics -
                                     relative relations

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