Lin Lane Poet Senryu

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Perceptive Eyes: Syllables of Wisdom

listen to the wise

           see life through perceptive eyes

                  wisdom is your prize






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                  January 9th, 2016

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Cecilia Macfarlane January 15, 2016 at 12:48 PM Excellent advice and win. Congrats. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2016 at 7:07 PM glad this one won high!! congrats.

Sandra Haight January 13, 2016 at 2:54 PM Nice words of wisdom, Lin. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 3:49 PM Thank you so very much, Sandra! hugs to you too.

John Hamilton January 13, 2016 at 7:55 AM Very nice, very true! Congrats on your win! Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 7:57 AM Thanks a lot, John.

Skat A January 13, 2016 at 12:06 AM Lin Lane, Congratulations on your awesome. HUGS --- SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 13, 2016 at 12:05 AM Wise words indeed Lin.. lovely rhyme.. big congrats on first place win! Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 7:57 AM Thanks a lot, Upma.

Susan Gentry January 12, 2016 at 11:35 PM Congratulations on win. Excellent advice and great image to match. Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 7:57 AM Thank you, Susan.

Eve Roper January 12, 2016 at 11:18 PM Lin, love the picture and the poem Congratulations on your win. Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 7:57 AM Thank you, Eve.

Janice Canerdy January 12, 2016 at 4:21 PM I really like this rhyming senryu! Congratulations on your win. Janice Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 7:56 AM Thank you, Janice.

Jan Allison January 12, 2016 at 3:42 PM wise words indeed Lin Congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane January 13, 2016 at 7:56 AM Thanks, Jan.

Beautiful Scars January 12, 2016 at 2:36 PM Congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles* Lin Lane January 12, 2016 at 3:06 PM Thanks, Laura.

Funom Makama January 12, 2016 at 8:47 AM Indeed! Wisdom is the prize. Goodluck in winning the prize. Great write Lin Lane January 12, 2016 at 3:01 PM Thank you, Funom.

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2016 at 7:58 PM Nice rhyme with it too, Lin!!! Lin Lane January 10, 2016 at 8:20 PM Thank you, Andrea. ;)

White Sage January 10, 2016 at 1:53 AM well written Lin Lin Lane January 10, 2016 at 4:40 AM I thank you very much, sage.