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esoteric mountain

Esoteric mountain 

The track leading up to the mountain 
that had no spire but was as flat as a prairie 
in Idaho, dark soil and spuds
My faithful dog refused to follow 
preferred to hang around at slopes
she looked worried 
On reaching the topless mountain
the sun was hot and had a dizzy spell
before passing out, I saw a mule
Someone carried me the stream's
nascent, pure water for me to drink
I found a lump of sugar in my pocket
I looked around and saw no humans 
but heard the murmur of a whisper
from hearty, green grass gossiping
When rested, walked down and 
found a bar with a neon sign in red 
mystified, I thought of ill omen
In the salon, I told the barman what
had occurred, he visibly paled and said
leave the unseen ghosts alone
They are a choir that disappeared on
on a field trip a hundred years ago
 at night, they sweetly sing for us
Coming out of the den, the dog waited
and led the way to the main road, but
what was the mule trying to tell me
© Jan Hansen  Create an image from this poem.


Premium Member Lowlife Freak

She holds my hand like I’d never
wake up after passing -out and drinking
one last lick from a broken bottle, only to
find myself needing another round of gin.

Yet, my woman cuddles me as if this
hair isn't filthy even though I haven't
hit the showers, even though I can’t
take my body to rest, to act functional.

And she gleams like she can't smell 
the reek  of  alcohol  I am breathing…
how  my heart aches for the last time 
her mouth kissed me on the face
after I broke a promise I couldn’t
 possibly fulfill-- a lowlife freak, rogue of a man,

disappearing into bars and more bars 
to silence  fears so I cannot hear 
old ghosts on the  walls, in nightmares, 
within her embrace,
… but still 
I can’t love myself the same way that
she loves me like I never
screamed,
denied,
told her to go lose herself,
banging the door--
telling her that she was worse
than my compulsive urge.

She loves me -- a reckless quirk--
believing I will see THAT  day

when I can Change.

.......................
11.17.2016
Creep Contest for Silent One

Hidden Agenda

HIDDEN AGENDA:

It's on record,
Stripping naked in a rainfall. 
A prelim lost of freedom, 
Heddled by a downfall,
Highlighted with boredom.
The journey is so wrong, 
And the prelim wants to hold on.
His soul is crying 'oh Lord'.
Time to time feeling appalled.
The challenge seems so tough.
He wish his life is prolonged, 
So he don't demise too young.
The mind is guilty at a cost, 
Yes, the prelim is terribly at fault.
But the time is gradually passing out,
And still can't breakout,.
Pressurised by pals,
For him to join their camp,
Indeed he joined them at last.
Later he's realised it's bad,
After the wealth he has amassed, 
Can't satisfy his life.

Sacrificed the one he loved,
Only to succeed easily and fast.
Now that the deal is done,
He don't feel so fine. 
Surrounded by numerous restrictions,
Gradually getting him diminished. 
Always saying he's been foolish.
Figuring out he will soon perish.
Non of his family benefits from his wealth,
As the family's state is not well.
No one understands that tale .
It's a secret that has failed,
Tagged with a notion,
Described as the paramount conclusion. 
Surrounded by his cohorts,
Who are also in the same pot.
Hooks up loose ladies,
Uses and troubles them.
Plans carnally to chill at unqualified columns.
Gestures he shows, he ahem,
Anytime questioned about his solemn.
Since he showcases a stealth.

He acts strange,I can tell.
Even his own people,he can't gel.
And their insinuations about him can't be dispelled.
Never doubting words regarding his spell.
This perfidious act proves who he is,
Someone fastened to mortal sin.
Lost from good morals, backslidden.
He didn't get it forbidden. 
Buried in devil's riches, 
Fifty-fifty sooner die or go mad,
Traded a good soul for vanity, so sad.
Drastic move,Damning not a canard.
A reality to pick a lesson,administered.
Form: Lyric

Premium Member Whispering Prayers In the Dark

Sweet baby, I bought you a soft blanket -
vanilla with tender dots, a llama attached, 
to welcome you into this chilly world.

And darling girl, I whispered prayers for you,
on nights you spent in the dark womb -
with rumbling of voices and pulsing heartbeat.

Your mama dear, they told her to abort,
but we held your wee hands as we hoped
because we believe in life not death.

Your mama miscarried your sibling,
swept away to the lullaby room in heaven.
I see he or she laughing with glee upon God’s lap.

A mama’s love so strong but body weak,
a mama who carries you in every thought.
A father, with pride, and provision, who waits.

A mama who’d close her eyes but did not die.
She slipped and careened off the road, passing out,
and you tumbled, wondering what it was all about.

You, baby, wanted to live with all your might,
even with a hole in your heart and fright.
Looking for the light, to pass into another world.

Thus tossed and turned, with emotions worn outside
your trusting birthday suit, oh angel dear, you died.
Mama, daddy, and grandma cry, affected inside.

And your grandma dear, my best friend, so strong.
With tears, I say, you take after her, you tried.
Two of heaven’s gifts, they wait for family, they play.

12/19/16

WHITE CARS

White Cars Haunt 
My dreams awake in wasteful
Flights fantastic blight
Each headlight flares 
Restless into the outer fields of memory 
The oppressive, hot, humid twilight
Passing out of my sight
They haunt my wakening eyes
Along the way, hollow roads of soul
Down endless maps of history 
The endless engines thumm
An echo old still lasts, sitting 
White cars are empty and cold
Bloody taillights trace each past
Black rubber burns distant futures
White cars sit idle, haunting 
Engines' hot air rises to 
Meet my blurry vision of yesterday 
As white cars haunt
Passing me on the left and then the right 
Ghostly in the pale moonlight 
In a parking lot, idling, hot
As neon bars pop and flicker
Feel the rot of endless horizons
White white cars travel, burning 
Into the enigmatic magnetic night…


Premium Member I'M Dreaming/ a Liberal Xmas Tale

Who was this white haired Claus 
With rabbit teeth? 
Carrying a ton of peanuts 
For all to eat.

Dragged in a sleigh pulled 
By Agnew and Nixon, 
Who ran right beside 
Donnar and Blitzen? 

He circled Camp David, 
A fast fly by; 
With lox and bagels for 
the Jewish guys. 

A carpenters’ pencil 
Was poised by his ear, 
And boxes of nails dangled, 
From the gear in the rear. 

Why! Its Jolly Ole Carter Claus 
Draped in menorahs. 
Handing out home plans to 
the Arab before us. 

Visions of world peace 
Danced in his head; 
As, he flew straight to Afghanistan
‘Fore noggin hit bed. 

When down from the sky 
In the form of deer dung, 
Fell fruit tree seeds 
Too be sown in the sun. 

And, as CarterClaus’ whip cracked 
O’er Nixon's ear, 
As Agnew blanched, 
His eyes filling with tears. 

Droplets hit sand with 
A plop and a splatter 
’Pon the fruit tree seeds with 
Nary a clatter. 

The desert grew green; 
Trees sprouted and grew; 
Hearts filled with wonder, 
Bellies with stew. 

Homes were rebuilt, 
as before the fall, 
Cook fires were lit. 
Children grew tall. 

And Ole Carter Claus 
Flew home in a daze. 
Passing out sandwiches 
That Roslyn had made.
Form: Ballad

Final Exam Passing Out Parade 3rd Degree

Because this here is your passing 
out parade doth your cap and gown

This here I don't know if you if you are 
aware or know it yet

But also the end of what was once
your student life I hope you kissed
it a fond farewell and goodbye

As your days spent on scholastic 
dissertation theoretical drunken debate
expressing your altruistic views putting 
the world's wrongs to right in some or 
other cheap backstreet pub

And pack away your monogrammed
slogan t-shirts and swap your long hair
and man-bun for a short back and side's

Because you my friend I am sorry
to inform have finally just crossed over
to the dark side

Welcome to the big wide world we have
been expecting you

And though you now have in your possession
a certificate denoting you are university
standard educated and have letters
to accompany your name as proof 

Nothing you learned or where taught
be that even higher level education
would or could possibly have prepared
you for the harsh reality life has in-store 

And unlike school which eventually
runs and has a predetermined course
over a precise timeline 

Life means life and the remainder of
your's has just begun starting now 

The time has come for you to put your
degree to some use find a job buy
a car and a house somewhere to rent 
or buy 

And oh did I forget to mention most
importantly of all

Start paying back whatever student loans
you took out compounding interest that
got you where you stand today 

Until your 10 year graduation reunion
comes around and is the 1 and only 
topic of discussion that everyone
still have left in common 

Same old people as before now
just all grown up replaced with
long drawn faces 

That once sparkled with aspiration 
instilled with dream's of changing
the world and making it a better place

Who now wish for nothing more than
to be able to put food on the table and
go to sleep without the fear of the power
being cut off 

Not the 3rd degree or lecture

Premium Member Carter Claus

*recite to Night Before Christmas

Who was this white haired Claus 
with buck-rabbit teeth? 
Carrying a ton of peanuts 
for everyone to eat.

Dragged in a sleigh 
pulled by Agnew and Nixon, 
who ran right beside 
old Donnar and Blitzen? 

He circled Camp David, 
A fast fly by; 
with lox and bagels 
for Jewish guys. 

A carpenters’ pencil 
was poised by his ear, 
and boxes of nails dangled, 
from the gear in the rear. 

Why! It's Jolly Ole Carter Claus 
draped in menorahs. 
Handing out home plans to 
the Arab before us. 

Visions of world peace 
danced in his head; 
as, he flew to Afghanistan
‘Fore noggin hit bed. 

When down from the sky 
in the form of deer dung, 
fell fruit tree seeds 
to be sown in the sun. 

And, as Carter Claus’ whip
cracked O’er Nixon's ear, 
as Agnew blanched, 
his eyes filling with tears. 

Droplets hit sand with 
a plop and a splatter 
’pon the fruit tree seeds with 
nary a clatter. 

The desert grew green. 
Trees sprouted and grew. 
Hearts filled with wonder 
bellies with stew. 

Homes were rebuilt, 
as before the fall. 
Cook fires were lit. 
Children grew tall. 

And Ole Carter Claus 
flew home in a daze, 
passing out sandwiches 
that Roslyn had made.

Premium Member The Armored Hearse

Prayers descend like acid rain from 
oligarch-soaked manchurians, stumping 
for elected office, praising hybrid 
demigods, passing out vouchers to the 
peasants.

A slow rumbling-
 part of the night-sounds-of-curfew;
descends like fire ants.

Cleaners of the guilt, hidden in plain faith,
unable or unwilling to walk, feign 
blindness, darkness helps.

Cellphone towers only reflect scripted 
light, as memories of real sunshine, fade 
to black. A good cup of coffee is hard to 
find, all the fine beans were swept away 
early on, replaced by dancing bears, 
politely ignored. Thunderclouds, imagined 
in shapes of our founding fathers, 
encourage the deluge, slowly ascending.

Underground-
   a grim band-of-believers watch (again)
a pirated tape of their favorite '80's movie, 
'They Live' from the fabled city called the 
new capital in 'The Postman' Minneapolis..
while the tormented sounds of-

     plows 
scraping overhead, and
 hydrants, 
bellys full, feeding power washers,
cascade
over hardened
faces.



05/11/14
minneapolis
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Premium Member Slip of a Sip

She drowned her sorrows in an amber liquid world
 Scotch on the rocks,  round and round it swirled
     She was now totally  drunk
      And on the verge of passing out
  The monkey on her back kept her in a funk
      As she could not control her drinking bouts

    Next morning when she awoke
 she remembered nothing of the previous night
   she fumbled for a cigarette to smoke
 she needed help urgently  to win this fight

  As the sirens rushed  to the accident scene
     mangled metal was all that could be seen
  they pulled out a body from the broken glass
    it appeared to be that of the amber swirl lass

 Now she drinks on a higher plane
     Where she feels nothing, not even pain
  A ghostly guest in this strange new world
       And no one to give her an amber swirl
                           ----
 4/11/12
© Joseph May  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

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