Slip of a Sip

She drowned her sorrows in an amber liquid world
 Scotch on the rocks,  round and round it swirled
     She was now totally  drunk
      And on the verge of passing out
  The monkey on her back kept her in a funk
      As she could not control her drinking bouts

    Next morning when she awoke
 she remembered nothing of the previous night
   she fumbled for a cigarette to smoke
 she needed help urgently  to win this fight

  As the sirens rushed  to the accident scene
     mangled metal was all that could be seen
  they pulled out a body from the broken glass
    it appeared to be that of the amber swirl lass

 Now she drinks on a higher plane
     Where she feels nothing, not even pain
  A ghostly guest in this strange new world
       And no one to give her an amber swirl
                           ----
 4/11/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 8:40 AM
wow, I did not remember this one of yours but seeing it again, I realize it is a much darker one from you and I LIKES IT a LOT!!!! Congrats.
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Joseph, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 11:55 AM
many congrats on your win Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Richards Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 9:44 AM
A difficult subject, and the consequences, so well portrayed.....the truth is hard to hear. Well done!
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 6:30 AM
Congrats on the win, Joseph
A   Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Joseph, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 4:23 PM
JOSEPH, A FINE WINNING POEM.... :-) , Congratulations in ANNE'S "any poem goes" contest. Take care~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 7:11 PM
this is the kind of poem that is very interesting to read. A strong message in your tragic tale. Congrats for your win.
Jones Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations Joseph on a great win.
Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
A  Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 6:16 PM
JOSEPH, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 10:12 PM
congrats Joseph on a brilliant write and win luv .. super ..
Hendricks Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your placement, Joseph. Well done. :)
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Joseph, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations Joseph this is superb and a lesson to all xx
Gooden Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 8:42 PM
Congrats Joe. Love.
May Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 5:59 AM
thank you so much Sherese....good to see you
Johnson Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Very sad and happens too often. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
May Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 5:59 AM
thank you very much Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Some are just too fragile to live..it's beyond sad.Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
May Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 8:16 AM
thanks Debbie... much appreciated
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 5:42 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Joseph. Love, Carol
May Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 6:06 AM
thank you Carol... I appreciate it..
Johnson Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
May Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 1:03 PM
thank you Joyce
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April 30, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Congrats on a poem well done!
May Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 10:23 AM
thank you Diana-Marie
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April 30, 2012 at 9:40 AM
Wow! Great poem Joseph! Congratulations on your win ...Samia
May Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 10:22 AM
thank you Samia
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April 30, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your win Joseph
May Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 10:22 AM
thanks Bob
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