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Premium Member The Great Mahele

*Image of Hawaii State Flag & State Motto/Seal by Pixabay.
The Great Mahele

The Hawaiian islands were overwhelmed,
In the year eighteen hundred forty-three,
Hawaiians were prisoners, promptly held,
By Captain George Paulet a Lord he'd be.

Constraining the islands for his monarch,
Accusations formed by Richard Charlton,
The islands British Consul a suave shark,
Aberrant land swindler cursed charlatan.

Prod Captain British subjects land taken,
Put was U.S. Captain Long ne'er meddle,
Commodore Kearny's U.S. warships end,
Six months seizure--awards a nonmetal.

Paulet cut our flags Union Jack now flys,
In part plus changing words immortalize.

2021 November 16

"Ua mau ke ea o ka aina i ka pono." (Hawaiian)
"The life (or sovereinty) of the land is perpetuated in righteousness." (English)
Hawaii's State Motto/Creed and Hawaii's State Seal

King Kamehameha III, of The Kingdom of Hawaii, said those words as part of his message to the people of the Hawaiian kingdom after British ships withdrew rather than risk conflict with America. The acts of the usurpers caused the king to establish "The Great Mahele", giving land to the commoners, whereto, I'm now a benefactor thereof.

King Kamehameha I friendship with England caused the inclusion of The Union Jack as part of Hawaii's State Flag. It has eight stripes of white, red, and blue that represent the eight main islands. The Union Jack flew o'er the islands during the seizure, but the Hawaiian Flag was restored after it was learned that England never sanctioned the occupation.
Form: Sonnet


Premium Member Ten Words Ten Lines 2-Big Surf Competition

Ten words ten lines 2-Big Surf Competition

After a long ennui of big wave competitions
surfers take to Oahu's North Shore "to go for baroque."
For these bonafide big wave riders hanging ten
is party time, cake frosted with elan and deju vu.
Waves peaking it's face into the eyes of the brave,
with carte blanche of fifty footers, part of the sugar.
All eye candy are on the Hawaiians, lipping alley-opps on the curls,
showcasing avante-garde to the diletttante's and spectators.
As waves keep pounding the shore to the cacophony of applause,
to tats, tongs and tans, big wave riders take to this anomaly waving.


Anomaly
Avant-garde
Baroque
Bona fide
Cacophony
Carte blanche
Deja vu
Dilettante
Elan
Ennui

connie pachecho

1/20/18

Paint a Picture Black and Gray

Pull out the easel
   set the canvas 
    positioned long and slender clean slate.
Sketch the figures huddled and dark-bound hostage
   to charcoal-cooled coals 
    etching in shadow images;
Faceless entities 
   slipping in and out the background
    earth-toned sojourners accepting, alone, quiet, dying;
Still the images in silence
   hard and disfigured 
    grotesque horrors in place;
Somber soul-drained eyes 
   skeletal socket holes 
     buried in the heart and mind;
Let tears fall down their cheeks
   in wonder, awe, and 
     fear of what happens next.
Acrylic primers dilute the wash in the storyline
   flaking and cracking 
    tearing each soul and truth away;
Polyptych blended burnish bleeds 
   quiet, soft exuding 
    whimpered cries, asking why;
Chiaroscuro collages of death from life
   fading to diluent breaths 
    the heartbeat of an unholy  silence;
Graded gouache monochrome scraper boards
  releasing sfumatos of singularities
   communal lives sacrificed
Varnish the final rendition
  camouflage the realities,
  the actuality of what it represents,
Time immemorial in genocidal atrocities
  of Native Americans, Cambodians, Hawaiians, 
     Jews, Rwandans, Bosnia, Darfur,.
When does it stop?
  The never-ending list 
   life is more precious than this
      until change comes
Paint the Picture Black and Gray
      pray 
        then act.
© DM Babbit  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Imagism

Premium Member Prince's Adoptees

"I have been a stranger in a strange land."  Bible, Exodus 2:22

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Hungry eyes seek substance, food matters naught--
sees the unpleasantness that drains the eyes.
The sea, Heaven on earth, explicit thought
of days that pleased youth oft courses--denies
to the stare of his feet, wherefore and whys,
slowly his head lifts, upright, turned around,
raises palms to rub eyes, lowers ... astound,
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.
Rudders turn stern, sails fixed, helms steer abound,
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.

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The Creator last passed, blessed the Isles, ought
for the righteous--who first cheered led to cries--
so say I, the Lord of host ..., naught bethought,
lead to temptations; scripturally wise,
threshold darkness crossed, newcomers, eyed prize,
an ancient people's customs, rites, all-round,
diverse power creates oneness, propound,
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.
Afeared spread out and a kingdom compound,
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.

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An influx flourish, commitments ill-fraught,
church breeds greed, false prophets, true profits--guise,
knowledge sought by natives plots short-changed taught,
forced natives, dethroned queen, kingdom, likewise,
unlearned natives conquered by day, by lies,
time passed, those with knowledge escapes eastbound,
some accomplished, tiresome measures, homebound,
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.
Though zilch, non-native highest seat -- renowned,
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.

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Grant, native Hawaiians were first who found,
last Hawaiian; Isles, their burial mound,
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.
Moses, Exodus estranged you -- your crowned,
last -- prince by name, adoptee, choose uncrowned.
at last, life found its true purpose; a home.
Form: Ballade

Premium Member HO'OPONOPONO

I was recently introduced to an ancient prayer…from of all places a T.V. show!
It comes all the way from Hawaii…
It’s called Ho’oponopono. (Hoe-oh-po-no-po-no)

It’s a simple prayer…four lines repeated…
with a more complicated goal…
A way to cleanse the spirit and rejuvenate the soul.

The first time I heard it …was around a father who was about to die…
The family used this prayer as a way to say goodbye.

The last message they wanted him to hear…before his life was through
was…I love you…Thank you…Forgive me…and I forgive you too.

The word Ho’oponopono means to make right…or correct
I’ve heard a similar mantra
I’m sorry…Please forgive me…Thank you…and I love you…
has the same effect.

The Hawaiians showed their wisdom.
They knew these four lines should include…
love, the giving and receiving of forgiveness…and finally, gratitude.

Love and gratitude are easy to understand and forgiveness they define…
not as forgetting but as a way of releasing the anger and resentment 
that destroys one's peace of mind.

And I thought how Ho’oponopono would be useful today
in a world where so much hatred and prejudice we are dispensing…
In a world where our conflicts need resolved and our spirits need a cleansing.

I think if anyone in conflict repeated the Ho’oponopono
our world would truly and finally be great…
because nowhere in this Hawaiian prayer does it mention the word hate.

I’m sorry…Please forgive me…Thank you…I love you…
I love you…Thank you…Forgive me…and I forgive you too.

In the Ho’oponopono I’ve gained a new perspective and appreciation…
because if you listen closely…hope is built right in to this prayer's pronunciation.
© Jim Yerman  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member God Or god Or

God is not a cliche, 
but a derivative of historical man's interpretation 
via ancient civilizations' understanding 
as to what a 'deity' 
symbolic model 
that they had extrapolated 
for the mere reason of 
controlling the masses
by undergoing thorough 
the guides and, or guise 
known as 

"centralization of ideology." 

Easy if you got a book
like a Bible,
or a Koran,
or a Torah,
etc.

Egypt had Ra, 
Romans had Jupiter, 
Greeks had Zeus, 
Norsemen had Odin
and American Indians according to their tribes
and Hawaiians had them too
our's was Kane

Thanks to the missionaries, 
who had brought the 'g'od fact into perspective, 
via, 
the capitalization factor. 

In my view, 
'tis a futile attempt of 
The Early Churches
to part WAY 
what I--
and the silent, 
have known ...
in the aforementioned.

It was part of my thesis 
for Theology Admittance 
when I was 16, 
extra points for raw concept
methinks ethnic bias--Hawaii College.

Easy with my Mom, ...
"Just 'mum' on that subject son."

Premium Member Hubbys Folly

We are off on a long DRIVE to see the famous, re-known big FIVE,
Three hours later at the Kruger National Park we safely arrive,
And cruise among predatory country, beautiful, colorful wildlife,
Full of LIFE the two of us, my husband and his very excited WIFE.

We see a pride of LIONS, and park next to a tour bus of HAWAIIANS,
They seem ecstatic, cameras clicking, among them Uruguayans,
They follow us, as they seem to think we will know where to go,
Continue over a bridge SLOW, see crocodiles drifting with the river FLOW.

Still the tour BUS continues and winds its way whenever they see US,
We see cheetah, leopards, a herd of elephants, an absolute plus,
We stop, the tour bus stops too, at a waterhole, but leave, close by are bees,
We spot rhinos, baboons, eagles perched on TREES, a warthog on its KNEES!

The tourist’s excitement contagious and SPILLS, we come across horn BILLS,
Big birds, the secretary bird, Goliath herons, but the horn bills by the hills,
Excite them the most, we had befriended each other and my husband said,
These birds don't FLY, upon which they flew off towards the SKY, hubby so red!

POETRY CONTEST ENTRY
IN RHYMES SUBLIME POETRY CONTEST ENTRY
SPONSORED BY; JOSEPH MAY
05/11/2020
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Two Hawaiians, a Sunset and a Memory

Two Aloha-shirted Hawaiians 
of generous girth were strumming 
their ukuleles 
on a small stage in front of the hotel’s poolside bar
in the late afternoon, 
rehearsing for the night’s performance. 
It must have been the low season,
as both bar and pool were deserted. 
and the singer, unburdened 
by a leis-laden audience’s 
Mai Tai-soaked expectations,
was going through a mele 
as if trying it on for size,
his voice loose-limbed with an easy grace.

Wrapped in the ukuleles' lolling strains,  	
his falsetto notes tumbled out into an 
uncongested airspace,
where no ceiling formed by small talk, disjointed laughter 
or tinkling glasses impeded their progress,
so they unfurled their wings, 
lifted themselves into the hibiscus-brushed breeze,
and climbed,
hopscotching and frolicking on their ascent,
skipping from Tiki torch to treetop to balcony.
Some straggled, loitered on windowsills.
Some, afraid of heights, fluttered back down  
to rest on top of beach umbrellas 
next to shadows of palm fronds. 
Still others hang-glided out over the sand 
and the lapis water,
lured by the marigold light.

So that, when they alighted on my 
hotel room balcony ten floors above, 
they were fragments,
excerpted by the intervening air  
from the upflowing cascade into 
a broken yet voluptuous murmur,
a soft, lilting South Seas benediction 
floating around my head.

I’d just sat down in the balcony chair, alone, 
my wife being inside the room busying herself 
with the correct placement of luggage 
after we’d checked in.

And so it was that I found myself looking out 
at the beginnings of a sky-painting Maui sunset 
accompanied by air that quietly sang.

Maybe it was my senses unwinding 
after the bustle of the journey, 
or maybe it was simply that I was caught unawares, 
but the feeling of contentment, 
the almost Zen-like awareness of the here and now,  
that overcame me at that moment was something 
no convergence of sights and sounds 
has been able to reproduce in the 20 years since.

It was, to be sure, an experience I’d paid more than 
a negligible amount of money for.

The irony is that it was the first time 
I truly understood the simplicity of happiness.

Mahalo.

Premium Member The Hawaiianism of Ho'Oponopono

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The Hawaiianism of Ho'oponopono

A word, astir, in undulating waves surges and awash a clear open black shoreline of Hawaii nei, as it recedes in cycles dashing back to an instant, springing forth that word grasped first in mumblings made by a question from what comes later. 

Hawaiiana has amongst the narrowed rudiments containing 12 alphabets; 7 consonants; H - K - L - M - N - P - W, plus 5 vowels; A - E - I - O - U. In its wake, Hawaiians have improvised their grammar by accommodating words to include more than one meaning, it is known as, "equivocal". A different way of supplementing their shortfall via letterings is by repeating words, whereto, two aspects emerge, firstly and the most prevalent variant of Hawaiiana repeats is, word pluralization, simply by adding the 's' at the end, sort of speak. Then secondly is word emphasization, or best to be known as, word empowerment. 

"Ho'o" is an energetic prefix, in and of itself though insignificant in the Hawaiiana context as a stand-alone word, implying "to make or making". In this example, the base word, "pono", is an equivocal word. In no respective order, first; moral qualities, uprightness, and decency. Second; a clear understanding, completeness, and being thorough. Third; correctly fulfilled, proper procedures, and accuracy. Fourth; prosperity, welfare, benefit, and equity. There remain several meanings that essentially are extensions of the foregoing. 

Nevertheless, when the base word is repeated, then "Ho'oponopono" basically means to, "make right a wrong". The Hebrews call it "Kaphar".

Back to mumbling and anticipation as a kid faced up to grownup legs. A worn grimace is yon about pause steadily. Quizzative looks around the room and tempts a peek past the formidable figure that blocks nearly the whole of him. The aged utter clarity, "E pule ho'oponopono kakou", (Let us pray for correcting our wrongdoing), afterward, an amended kid embraces the closing answer, "Ae, ho'omaika'i ia oe", (Yes, victory is yours). On the whims of a pendulum, Ho'oponopono wanes as a learnt man winds a clock up to speed.

2021 May 28
Form: Didactic

Premium Member Chants of the Palm Fruit Eaters--Cm

Chants Of The Palm Fruit Eaters--CM

I ate the palm fruits midst, my folks,
Delight in sounds we made.
The gourd chants to our ancestors,
It binds our souls with theirs.

I delight, despite echoes, bounce,
Midst, the palm fruits, eats I.
Of gourd chants to our ancestors,
Sits quietude, but I.

“… an alien life, a life unlived, not lively, hardly ours.”

***In the 60's, full-blooded Hawaiians numbered under 2,000--I venture naught, what our numbers are today, but I am the last survivor of 4 bloodlines. The impetus of my return to Hawaii, leaving my family in the States, to be with my buried descendants.

2019 August 23

*1st Place*

CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE
~~nette onclaud
Form: Verse

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