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Premium Member Fool of Infiniti and Queen of Fate

Fool of Infiniti

A wanton bird pecks at the stars
A Jester peers through crystal bars
This prison of love with rainbow hue
Illusion parts to lets you through

On dragon wings forever free
You quest into your dreams to see
Smoke and mirrors and shadow haze
To guide you through an endless maze

Slow motion tear rolls down her cheek
Its only passion that you seek ?
Engulfed in strange duality.
She wonders her reality

Your eyes still mock her with desire
Your kisses light her inner fire
Your touch can melt her to your will
But you will never take your fill

Black widow spider guards your heart
She spun the web, she keeps it taut
It is your only fatal flaw.
A secret, silent metaphor.

And all about her swirl the dreams
The nightmares all with voiceless screams
And in her hand the strangest key
To fit the door of What Will Be ?

And when her eyes search yours again
You take her to the spider den
You spin the dreams she hopes to see
And lock your hearts in mystery.

So enter in to lick the flame
Eternal prisoner of the game
Illusion is false imagery
She whispers your Infinity


The Queen of Fate

The Queen of Fate by the outer Gate
Her carriage to Nowhere, will await
Her cloak is wrapped against the night
Her eyes are wide with peculiar fright

Gray horses eyes turn back in fear
With thunderclaps upon her ear
Blue jagged lightning points the way
Along the path to yesterday

Cold, sullen driver cracks his whip
His crooked smile curls round his lip
His horses leap the cruel abyss
Dark Queen of Fate sees none amiss

Above the mist a gate appears
Who will wipe the Gate-man's tears ?
Gray horses strike and paw the air
Fate Queen ascends the carriage stair

And all about her swirl the dreams
The nightmares all with voiceless screams
And in her hand a wondrous key
To lock Enigma's Mystery

Pass through the gate O Queen of Fate
Another carriage will await
Drawn by steeds of Promises
Illusion starts and finishes.
Form: Lay


Premium Member Your Fatal Flaw

You seemed to be perfection in my eyes
Everything of beauty in you I saw
Your pure honesty left no place for lies
But alas, I’ve found your one fatal flaw

“What could this flaw be?” You ask me so sweet
Certain the answer could not be that grave
“If I know my flaw, I'll give you a treat
Why look so worried, dear? Tell me! Be brave!”

So with a heavy heart I pierce your soul
“It is pride, dear, PRIDE is your fatal flaw!”
You look aghast yet say, “Why this is droll!
Your argument is only made of straw.”

“FATAL….for from your presence I now part.
FATAL…for I bear with me, my dead heart.”

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Delving Into Denial

A serpent lies writhing on our divan,
we see now how denial might begin.
Hissing at all who would foil his vile plan,
our fatal flaw is not delving right in.

Climate Change is much more a twisty tact:
coiled thoughts like stone turrets in ivy.
If nations can't accept a real fact -
it's hard to turn this round, from what I see.

Setting science so very far aside,
deft doubters like letting sleeping snakes lie.
Skeptics scurry for a safe space to hide,
afraid to give the truth one honest try.

This then, becomes a crippling contrivance:
ever still stronger, steadfast defiance.






4/24/22 103 Words
© Greg Gaul  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Sonnet

Warriors Final Due

The moon had held a wickedness 
So unlike many of night I've seen
Embraced in an eerie listessness
While projecting an ominous scene

This night a warriors life was lost
One who unselfishly fought for all
She'd pay no matter what the cost
Her battles she picked, was her call

See it wasn't by beast's razor claw
She was too wise for them you see
Warriors hold at least one fatal flaw
One taking her life setting her free

It was much like an evil deception
One thing she was unprepared for
Like every rule held an exception
This one cut deep to her very core

The downfall of so many it seems
Struck down by the blade of a love
Laying there her blood did stream
Had to rise was all she thought of

High above that love raised his sword
With a swoop drove it deep in her heart
Her eyes stared at the one she adored
He broke her soul, that's the worst part

Her story will live on for the good done
How what a brave soul she held so true
Yet she knew for all the battles she won
Brought her even closer to her final due
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member On the Eve of Euthanasia

A little dog is a gift from God
Meant only through life to trod
As a companion to solace our mortal
Frailties through love unconditional.

But loyalty exposes its fatal flaw
When devotion's bonds exceed human law
And penalty is death for an unfailing friend
Whose only sin was a duty to defend.

Hers was love of a kind not easily shared
Yet, fate cast her with one as unprepared
As I to provide the healing balm -
And failing - it is she must meet the calm.

My crying brings her to kiss away the tears
I shed on thought of her end. I live with fears
she consoles as if to forgive
What I must do and can never outlive.

On the eve of euthanasia  2011

PS We found a new home before this was necessary.


Premium Member A Fatal Flaw

Home invaders
Climbed the fence;
Huffed,
Puffed,
And blew the windows in,
Suddenly, they're inside a mansion.
They came prepared
With large duffel bags.
They grabbed all they could -
A family heirloom,
Jewelry,
Knickknacks, etc.
Then one walks out to the balcony
And a caged parrot locks eyes
With the stranger,
Bows its head,  thinking - 

"Please, don't take me, too! I don't want to part with Mr. Tyson!"

"Matthew? It's time to go!" a voice calls out
.
"There's a parrot out here, Cam!" 

"Nope, you heard Cam! You guys go now. Leave me be!" 
thought the parrot.

Cam peeks out to the balcony.
"What do we need a bird for?" he asks.

Shouldn't we take it with us? Parrots talk, right? It could give us up." replies Matthew.

Cam thinks for a moment, 
So does the parrot.  
"Great, just great! I'm about to be stolen!"

"What about we kill it?" suggests Matthew.

Frantic thoughts: "Oh, hell no! You'll do no such thing, boy! Horrible idea! Cam? Help me?"

"No, we don't need the damn bird. Let's go, now!" Cam says, emphatically

"Whew! Thank God!" thought the parrot, breathing a sigh of relief.

The cat burglars made a clean getaway,
Or so they thought.
They made one fatal flaw.
They should've taken 
Mr. Tyson's beautiful talking pet.
The parrot began spilling tea
Upon its owner's return -

"Matthew, we gotta go!"

"There's a parrot out here, Cam!"

"Matt, let's go, now!"

"Damn, I can't find my phone!"

"Back door! Back door! He's pulling in the driveway!"


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06/08/2022

Dialogue

I have this superpower
It's more like a curse
I can hold conversations with people in my head
But I can't do that in real life
It's why I avoid people
If there's no one there
I don't have to struggle to talk to anyone
I don't have to constantly look at my word count 
And worry if I'm reaching my word limit

I know I shouldn't do that
But I'm an over thinker
I worry that I'll sound stupid
Or people will look at me weird for the topics I'm passionate about 

"Did my joke fall flat?"
"Should I say something?"
"Should I know this? Why don't I know this?"

So I stay silent
In a world filled with noise, I alone stay silent
That is my fatal flaw
My own mind.
© TJ Samuels  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member I Will Break Free- For Titles Contest

“I’m Strong Enough!” 
“How Dare You" think otherwise!
“This moment,” I've come to realize, “I’m Worth it.”
So, “Cry and Scream” all you want. “I’m Going Away.”
“Tranquility Beckons” and “A Time to Love,” for me has finally come.
“Don’t Ever think I've Forgotten” how “You Branded Me"
With “Scarlet Letters” you wrote on my heart, ”Unloved.” 
With your “Leftover love," I will never be "Satiated" 
“Unable to Sleep,” I dream of “Making love”- a "Euphoria"
lasting a “Thousand and One Nights."
But, “My Lips are Sealed.” No longer will I plead…
“Nothing Matters Anymore," for your “Fatal Flaw” is “Exposed.”
“There Must be a Punishment” for what you've done. 
Now, you will see “The Warrior Princess" in me
Today, “I will Break Free!”

It’s All in the Titles Contest
By Adam Hapsworth

Premium Member I shall find a way or make one

(Inveniam viam)

Far beyond these eerie things, where limits have no scales
Fish are replacing gills, with turbine aerated tails 
Sea level’s losing all meaning, for the humpback whales 
Ships piggyback them, harpoons syphon wind from their sails 

Today I woke up early, lately I’ve let dreams flow 
Into an abstract yonder, where visions often go
A wave came over me, up from my downy pillow 
When tidal forces passed away, many moons ago 

As the ocean waved goodbye, I called for an encore
Behaving like a poultice, the beach drew back old gore
You could’ve bowled me over, sent ripples to my core
Never again I’d sleep soundly, near this bloody shore 

After a fretful lie-on, facing truths with each turn 
My sundial running on empty, stars can’t always churn
Moribund in dimness, til an old spark can return 
Reigniting glory days, (let supernovae burn)

Overhead the vacuum grows, just to make more space 
Stretching my dysmorphia, to align with gods face
No one knows for certain, who enhanced his human race 
Gave an artful hand, outsmarting evolution’s pace 

As life spirals forward, in a world out of control 
Entropy dismantles, stripping back our maker’s role 
The poet in me keeps goofing, digging deeper holes
He’s a junkie rhymester, overdosing on this soul 

So hail all billionaires, who never walk down my street
Flying above fake cripples, with power in their feet
Prodigies of bad and worse, scheming to make ends meet 
Leaves an aftertaste of smugness, one that will repeat 

As for those big questions, some take a straightforward twist
Two things I thought might go away, stubbornly exist 
Not death or taxes, I’m already over that list 
Each day I arise, how come lies and bullsh!t persist?

First there was oblivion, til I woke up and saw 
Now fully awake, dead ahead looms a fatal flaw 
But so long as I can dream, and able to guffaw
It only hurts when I laugh, Don’t you think? vents my jaw 

By David Kavanagh 
Hms
Form: Rhyme

Real

A pathetic pantomime this life
The plot going nowhere
An art house film 
disguising nothing as something 
deep and dolorous
A carnival of calamity
My face reflected in rippled glass
Distorted
Contorted
like a funhouse mirror
My mind a haunted house  
of memories I’ve never made
Reciting my lines to an invisible man
who keeps missing his cue
My scenes always ending up 
on the cutting room floor
Maybe you drink too much
or I don’t drink enough
to make any sense of it
There must be a thorn 
some fatal flaw out of frame
waiting in the wings
left behind in the green room
when you take the stage
My past full of actors playing a part
pretending to feel
I’ve never known real

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