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(Inveniam viam) Far beyond these eerie things, where limits have no scales Fish are replacing gills, with turbine aerated tails Sea level’s losing all meaning, for the humpback whales Ships piggyback them, harpoons syphon wind from their sails Today I woke up early, lately I’ve let dreams flow Into an abstract yonder, where visions often go A wave came over me, up from my downy pillow When tidal forces passed away, many moons ago As the ocean waved goodbye, I called for an encore Behaving like a poultice, the beach drew back old gore You could’ve bowled me over, sent ripples to my core Never again I’d sleep soundly, near this bloody shore After a fretful lie-on, facing truths with each turn My sundial running on empty, stars can’t always churn Moribund in dimness, til an old spark can return Reigniting glory days, (let supernovae burn) Overhead the vacuum grows, just to make more space Stretching my dysmorphia, to align with gods face No one knows for certain, who enhanced his human race Gave an artful hand, outsmarting evolution’s pace As life spirals forward, in a world out of control Entropy dismantles, stripping back our maker’s role The poet in me keeps goofing, digging deeper holes He’s a junkie rhymester, overdosing on this soul So hail all billionaires, who never walk down my street Flying above fake cripples, with power in their feet Prodigies of bad and worse, scheming to make ends meet Leaves an aftertaste of smugness, one that will repeat As for those big questions, some take a straightforward twist Two things I thought might go away, stubbornly exist Not death or taxes, I’m already over that list Each day I arise, how come lies and bullsh!t persist? First there was oblivion, til I woke up and saw Now fully awake, dead ahead looms a fatal flaw But so long as I can dream, and able to guffaw It only hurts when I laugh, Don’t you think? vents my jaw By David Kavanagh Hms

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Date: 1/4/2024 4:08:00 AM
Nice to see you David: Congratulatiions. on POTD. I especially liked,”No one knows for certain, who enhanced his human race Gave an artful hand, outsmarting evolution’s pace.” So many issues covered with finesse, especially stanza 7. Into my. favorites. The people against the powers that be, We all need to awake simultaneously. SuZ
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/4/2024 5:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Suzanne, I’m absolutely delighted with your positive critique, and for pressing that Fave button you’re so right we all need to simultaneously be awake, (the powers that be) bank on at least half of us dreaming or sleeping at any given time, cheers David
Date: 12/31/2023 1:21:00 AM
Very creative David, an enjoyable read. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 12/31/2023 2:59:00 AM
Heya Beryl, delighted you enjoyed, thanks so much for stopping by with congrats, cheers David
Date: 12/30/2023 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, David! Prodigies of bad and worse, scheming to make ends meet Leaves an aftertaste of smugness, one that will repeat
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Date: 12/31/2023 1:39:00 PM
Don’t it just Kim, thanks so much for stopping by with congratulations, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Dear David. Really enjoyed, planning to read several times! A happy New Year to You and your loved ones.
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Date: 12/30/2023 2:00:00 AM
Heya Mala, thank you so much for kind comments and congratulations, I’m delighted you enjoyed, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 11:29:00 AM
Blurring the lines between dreams and reality, Well penned David, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/29/2023 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, sometimes I find both can be very hard to separate, taking on a virtual reality of their own, blurring indeed, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 9:45:00 AM
Hey David, you did a great job well-deserving the POTD! It's nice to see you posting again. I hope everything is going well for you now. Wishing you a happy New Year 2024, my friend!
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Date: 12/29/2023 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad, hopefully I’ll be posting a bit more in the new year, still not in full comeback mode yet, thanks so much for kind words of encouragement and congrats, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 9:08:00 AM
Hey David….Congratulations on POTD!! Good to see your return…. hope alls well with you now! Debx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2023 10:09:00 AM
I’ve been called a lot worse than John believe me lol!
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Date: 12/29/2023 9:55:00 AM
I am so sorry David…l don't know where John came from haha!! I do know who you are “for now” Ha! Glad you are back David John!!! Debx
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Date: 12/29/2023 9:41:00 AM
Heya Deb, (John)? probably a POTD glitch but thanks anyway for stopping by with congrats, all is going ok, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 8:44:00 AM
Congrats on awesome potd. My fave line? "It only hurts when I laugh, Don't you think? vents my jaw." Now that's poetry!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/4/2024 12:34:00 AM
Wow I’m blocked again, maybe I’m the prophet after all, No! you’re just predictable!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/29/2023 10:57:00 AM
Both, of course. :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2023 10:07:00 AM
But for how long, does that depend on me or you? Who really controls Tom’s blocker that is the question, have a good one!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/29/2023 9:59:00 AM
Consider yourself officially unblocked. Have a great day!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2023 9:38:00 AM
You see the truth is when someone has me blocked (like you do) I see only BS and meaninglessness in their words, The real power of writing poetry you can never understand, when blinded by that blocking button of yours!
Date: 12/29/2023 8:35:00 AM
The 7th verse, encapsulates much of the fatal flaw of which you refer. It reminded me of homeless spread out all around but not in my backyard (smug tone which billionaires strike). Wealthy not allowing a homeless shelter to be built in their zoning district is the latest here. Aphorism 'plus ça change, plus c'est la même chose' "The more things change, the more things stay the same" Rhymester on your downy pillow-- Congratulations on your POTD! Happy New Year! I Am Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/29/2023 11:02:00 AM
I hear you, David. I'm learning! Cheers from Anaya & Milo ,")
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2023 9:19:00 AM
Heya Anaya, great to see you and thanks for keeping faith in my poems, many avenues of interpretation in this one, I like the one you chose, I purposely juxtaposed a lot of lines and stanzas to give more scope to the reader, but the overriding one is an everyday truth, of seeing through the BS that surrounds us all, happy new year to you and cheers, David
Date: 12/29/2023 8:10:00 AM
Hmm David, Congratulations on this very creative POTD and Happy New Year 2024!
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Date: 12/29/2023 9:05:00 AM
A lot to take in in this one Nancy so I understand the Hmm, I like to give plenty of scope for interpretation in my poems, Happy new year and thanks for stopping by today cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 7:47:00 AM
What a wonderful message David and it is SO good to see you back on soup, I'm hoping my muse will return in the new year. Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2023 10:02:00 AM
Heya Jan great to hear from you today, A message within a message methinks! damn those muses abandoning us and taking holidays off without any consideration whatsoever, thanks so much for stopping by, have a great New Year cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 7:32:00 AM
Super fun read David. Love the 'junkie rhymester' ;) Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:59:00 AM
That’s me for sure Linda, thanks so much for all your comments, and congratulations, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 6:43:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this creative write again. Glad you are back. In Sept, I took many weeks off Soup/life. I was burned out/I needed the rest. Have A "Happy New Year 2024" writing away...............................
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thank you kindly Paula, was more personal issues with me , but I agree we all get burned out and need to recharge our batteries Happy new year Cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations and welcome back David!! I love the message in your splendid words my friend!
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Date: 12/29/2023 6:20:00 AM
Hello Mark and thanks for stopping by, yes indeed a big message and some home truths for myself, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 4:51:00 AM
David, congratulations on your POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings
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Date: 12/29/2023 6:15:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I’m delighted with the POTD honor, and your visit, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 4:43:00 AM
imaginative poem, David. Hearty congrats on your POTD recognition. Have a pleasant weekend. Happy New Year, too.
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Date: 12/29/2023 6:12:00 AM
Heya Sarah, I appreciate you stopping by today with congrats, Happy new year to you and Bill, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 4:25:00 AM
A great potd! Congrats
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Date: 12/29/2023 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Karen, you’re very Kind, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 3:33:00 AM
Imagination unshackled, unleashed ~ great poem, David, warmest congratulations on POTD. Seeing you here after a long spell.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2023 4:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Seeker, yes imagination is always best when released full on, great to hear from you after my hiatus, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 3:32:00 AM
David, welcome back, congratulations on POTD with your wonderful poem!
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Date: 12/29/2023 4:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Tania, I’m delighted to be back in some, if not full capacity, I’m delighted you enjoyed my poem, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 2:20:00 AM
First…Welcome back to PS and Milton Creek, David. You were missed more than a sundial running on empty. Secondly… for making me smile at your responses to a certain commenter. You really do treat people the way they treat you. Your poem requires multiple readings to appreciate every drop of truth you offer to quench a thirst. Dreaming or awake, you call BS when it persists. Yes, I don’t just think. I know you do. Congratulations on a Potd that’s not BS. Cheers!!
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Date: 12/29/2023 7:49:00 AM
I see the chief of BS is up to his usual with magnanimous comments when he is just full of his usual crap and will never change - glad you have flushed him out David:-) hugs Jan xx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2023 3:34:00 AM
Great to see you Lin, yeah so much BS going on, I always try to point it out, rather than pretend it’s not there, some people and a certain commenter here seems to get off on it, Had a few personal issues that need/ed attention, I’m absolutely delighted with POTD, had no idea how this one would be received, but you are right a lot of truth in this outlandish poem, you decipher it well, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 2:08:00 AM
Congratulations! I mean I never thought it was possible to follow your last POTD, but you've come back so strong :D Well done, absolutely deserved POTD.
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Date: 12/29/2023 3:23:00 AM
Aw you’re too kind Dilly, I’m flattered and delighted with POTD, on my first post in a couple of challenging months, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 1:54:00 AM
Well, you certainly found a way to earn POTD honors (lol) Great writing, David. Good to see you back. Congratulations...Happy New Year! Charlie
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Date: 12/29/2023 3:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie sometimes it’s great to hit the ground running, I’m glad you enjoyed, cheers David
Date: 12/29/2023 12:31:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you David on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 12/29/2023 1:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Tom I am absolutely delighted and honoured this one made POTD, cheers David
Date: 12/28/2023 2:52:00 PM
Ugh! I hate lies and b.p. too (I don't curse). Take macro evolution for example... Hey, good to see ya back!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/28/2023 3:39:00 PM
I couldn’t care less one way or another! I treat everyone with the same respect and contempt they show me, all in equal copious measure!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/28/2023 3:11:00 PM
Oof! I know. Would you want me to unblock you? Will you be a civil, charming lad? Please say yes...
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/28/2023 3:07:00 PM
Yeah I rest my case, you have me blocked!
Date: 12/28/2023 12:11:00 PM
Hurray! All the fanfare!!! What a return with this poem - wow! Love how you've played so cleverly with language making my brain jump through hoops, happily performing for the next treat like some mental agility training :) Superstar return :)
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Date: 12/28/2023 12:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Dilly (high praise indeed) yeah it’s probably a brain scrambler on first read, but one with a solid underlying theme, its always good to stretch the imagination of the reader and hopefully send them off on tangents, I’m humbled by your comment, cheers David
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