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Warriors Final Due

The moon had held a wickedness So unlike many of night I've seen Embraced in an eerie listessness While projecting an ominous scene This night a warriors life was lost One who unselfishly fought for all She'd pay no matter what the cost Her battles she picked, was her call See it wasn't by beast's razor claw She was too wise for them you see Warriors hold at least one fatal flaw One taking her life setting her free It was much like an evil deception One thing she was unprepared for Like every rule held an exception This one cut deep to her very core The downfall of so many it seems Struck down by the blade of a love Laying there her blood did stream Had to rise was all she thought of High above that love raised his sword With a swoop drove it deep in her heart Her eyes stared at the one she adored He broke her soul, that's the worst part Her story will live on for the good done How what a brave soul she held so true Yet she knew for all the battles she won Brought her even closer to her final due

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Date: 1/29/2020 9:11:00 AM
Quite lyrical! Congrats , Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thank you L.J! I always enjoy your feedback!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on your podium win in Brian's contest Brenda--awesome write.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:35:00 AM
Vijay thank you so much my friend!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 6:05:00 AM
Amazing poem, Brenda:-) Congratulations!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Edward!;)
Date: 6/18/2019 7:11:00 PM
Awesome, really could feel it
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/18/2019 9:03:00 PM
Thank you Jay so happy you enjoyed it!;)
Date: 6/8/2019 5:19:00 PM
Hello Brenda Chirl, so sad that she had to die. have a ice evening my friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/8/2019 8:05:00 PM
Thank you but she is not gone forever! Never fear the warrior will rise!
Date: 6/6/2019 4:25:00 AM
A warrior of words, Brenda, you have championed the love-struck-down with honour. Great!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/6/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Phil yes it gets the best of us doesnt it?;)
Date: 5/30/2019 8:58:00 PM
That is the spirit my friend. Hold your honor and self counsel to be valid and your poetic creations to be that of a true poet.. A fav..
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/6/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Robert you we far too know!
Date: 5/29/2019 2:17:00 AM
Well written Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/29/2019 8:50:00 AM
Timothy thank you so very much!
Date: 5/27/2019 3:03:00 PM
A fine piece of writing Brenda, I've never seen games of thrones so can't relate but really good rhyme and flow with great imagery. Have a great day, Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/27/2019 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Gordon! It's not really after game of thrones but I decided people will relate in different ways! I relate as being the warrior! I do appreciate your comment and read Gordon! Thank you!;)
Date: 5/26/2019 8:04:00 AM
Reads ever so well, Brenda...excellent choice of rhyming words -- and so very ably connected. With lots of affection! :) john P.s It is good to see you posting, here, at the Soup, once again.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/26/2019 1:26:00 PM
Ah John than you so very much and I am glad to be back! I have missed your comnents!;) All my affection
Date: 5/25/2019 3:15:00 PM
Death sets the soul free...thus paving the way for reincarnation. Pleased to see you back stronger than ever before, Brenda! ~ By the way, Gamma should be mighty proud of her talented g'daughter:) ~ Hugs // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/25/2019 9:14:00 PM
Paul thank you so much! Yes reincarnation has a way of strength ig a person! Lol! Yes I am so proud of her!;) but she deleted her account ...her mom found out she had one and made her delete it! I hate she has to bug she must follow her mother's choice! Hopefully she continues writing I know it was very upsetting to her! And so very proud of her work she has been giving me a run for my money to say the least! Feels good to be back I must say!;)
Date: 5/23/2019 9:56:00 AM
Just magnificent...an instant Fave...bro bro
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/23/2019 10:32:00 AM
Lol ah thank you bro bro! What would I do without you! Lol I would have no favs!;) Your insane sissy;)
Date: 5/23/2019 6:13:00 AM
Each battle brings us closer to our own essence, my friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/23/2019 6:56:00 AM
Ahh yes a chance as tommy said to be resurrected and come back from the ash better than before! Thank you so much for stopping by!;)
Date: 5/22/2019 8:14:00 AM
Wow! You are back and how! Especially liked the opening stanza and this line: "Like every rule held an exception"
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/22/2019 4:54:00 PM
Hey PS yea I'm back! Thanks so much for your comment! Thought I'd give it another go round I have been here since 2005! Lol so it's still home! Still lovin the other sight too!;)
Date: 5/21/2019 9:07:00 PM
Inspired by Games of Thrones, per chance?! Great drama in this piece!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/21/2019 10:01:00 PM
Lol thank you and I do love game of thrones but sadly I have not seen this newest season at all! I plan on bing watching it for the full effect! Lol you has it though I do love the show!

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