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Long Commotions Poems

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Light On the Devil's Chord - Day 26
From that day on and forward,
I began to see the wretchedness my God had warned me of
He cursed the Lord wholeheartedly, for inflicting yet another agony on him,
In his well he called The Prison of...

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Categories: commotions, adventure, anger, beautiful, corruption, dark, inspirational, nature,
Form: Epic



The Moon Also Rises - the Midwatch
The Moon Also Rises
The Midwatch

Harry Mayer


The X.O.’s in the shower
and the Captain’s in his bed.
The Chiefs’ are playin’ poker
as we’re steamin’ to the Med.

“I’ll take that bet and raise you”
is what the Bo’sun says
from the...

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Categories: commotions, humor, military, sea,
Form: ABC
free to feel the way I feel
You don’t know how it feels
To be misunderstood and jaded
You won’t ever know till it kills you inside
To you, I speak words of wisdom
And it feels like I’m a million miles away
Just to feel isolated...

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Categories: commotions, angst, courage, emotions, endurance, happiness, hope, how
Form: Free verse
Perpetual Quandries of Dischord
Perpetual Quandries of Dischord

Permanent irreversible Attatchment disorder
A lemonade stand at the Mexican Border
A traumatised disorganised old lady hoarder
The incriminating evidence on an old tape recorder 

Elements of discontent shivering through a crowd 
Firmaments of promises...

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Categories: commotions, international,
Form: Rhyme
Haunt Me No More
Verse 4: Another day of fighting back tears of fears
Lingering around a chastening situation that appears
You can't just leave me with this junk of a job 
I sit down on the couch of my corruption...having...

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Categories: commotions, deep,
Form: Lyric



Jaded Jade in the Jungle
Saw you cry cry cry and pout
No doubt...I don't care anymore
What are you crying about?
Can't you see I'm jaded to the core?

I hear people preaching about marriage
When they're married themselves!
No humility! Just overrighteous and like...

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Categories: commotions, angst, deep, depression, desire,
Form: Free verse
The Echoes of My Heart Strings
I hear an echo, echo, echo in my heart’s cage
I feel a halo, halo, halo in my mind’s blank page
Hear my silent radiance and my dandelion breeze
Feel the drums at the dead of night at...

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Categories: commotions, angst, beautiful, corruption,
Form: Rhyme
Sos Part 3: Priceless Treasure
Ohhh…see right through my pain – regret & shame slits me like a knife, shaking 
in the hands of a cutter – I’m trying to look on the brighter side of life, but I 
am...

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Categories: commotions, angel, beauty, deep, encouraging, faith, hope,
Form: Free verse
The Glow
My heart is bleeding but no blood is dripping
My spirit is crying but no tears are flowing
The trees are moving but the wind is not blowing
A low feeling came over today that led my spirit...

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Categories: commotions, career, celebrity, character, cheer up, deep, emotions,
Form: Narrative
Doozies and Whozies of the Wild-Wild West! Synopsis (For Deborah's Contest)
Eighteen hundred and three begins U.S. destinies.
Merriwether Lewis and his comrade, William Clark, agrees –
They will go forth, avoid Frenchmen, fighting growling grizzlies.
To find a water trade route that flows west to the Pacific seas.
Louis...

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Categories: commotions, adventure, cowboy-western, history, men, men,
Form: Monorhyme
What If Its True
I Dont know why,I always choose the easy way.                          ...

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Categories: commotions, faithme, me,
Form: I do not know?
Keep Calm and Carry On
What do we know about the Coronavirus
The real risks behind the panic and human bias
Now let’s look at the facts that we have to date.
It not great news, its spreading at an alarming rate. 

Corvid...

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Categories: commotions, anger, earth day, humanity, poems,
Form: Free verse
Vicious Dogs
They converge at the gate with vicious eyes crawling out of the skies and vengeance puffed up in their guts with lots of details engraved in tattoos painted on their skins.  

The dogs carry...

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Categories: commotions, community, corruption, endurance, environment, judgement, violence, war,
Form: Narrative
Nearing My End - I Thought Your Grass Was Green
Give me an excuse or a reason
To overcome these waves of emotions
Friends come and go like season to season
Dealing with vile clashing commotions

I thought your grass was green…I’m hopeless…
I thought the grass on the other...

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Categories: commotions, beauty, best friend, deep, depression, desire, devotion,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Girl On a Dolphin
Favorite Carolyn Devonshire Poem

History Rising from the Sea

Treasure from the sea
Golden doubloon
Sixteenth century artifact
By ancestors hewn

Earth's history lays buried
Beneath five oceans
As undersea tremors
Create violent commotions

Freeing from Spanish galleons
Precious metals, gemstones,
To greet early beachcombers
History on loan

Memories...

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Categories: commotions, animal, girl, life, ocean, remember, sea, stars,
Form: Free verse
Guided Under Pressure
I'm sorry for all the stupid things I've done
I guess I'll leave now before the break of dawn
You made me love you, but that didn't last too long
You belong with me or so I thought...

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Categories: commotions, deep, depression, desire,
Form: Lyric
Nearing My End - You Owe Me
Pre-chorus #2: You turned out to be so mean…you were so heartless… (you 
make me feel like nothin’…make me feel like someone…somethin’ – your words 
pierced me like a pin on the floor)
I’m not haunted...

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Categories: commotions, anger, angst, betrayal, confusion, deep, love, sad,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Unleashing the Inner Butterfly
Written: August 06, 2023
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I evolve at my own rate; I won't be defined.
By the expectations that others designed
In this journey, I'm the one who decides
To spread my wings and let my spirit glide

I am elated...

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© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commotions, analogy, appreciation, character, encouraging, fate,
Form: Rhyme
Self Inflicted
We have mentally drained our emotions into the world around us 
Causing our own commotions then get mad with what surrounds us. 
We lack to feel for those that we see have less. 
We slack...

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Categories: commotions, appreciation, art, beautiful, beauty, blessing,
Form: Light Verse
Siege At Baker Ranch, Part Iii
III.
It was near midnight when they came again,
four warriors armed all with flaming brands,
Myron bolted up from a fitful sleep,
and poured out bullets as the horses ran.

He managed to shoot one off of his horse,
but...

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Categories: commotions, america, conflict, courage, hero, history, native american,
Form: Cowboy Poetry
The Things Around Us - Part 2
(Continued from Part 1)


Transparent figures walk at a flirtatious pace
On world-class runways, with no expression on their face
Parading styles you can't afford in your possession
They are the ghostly models of the latest, greatest FASHION.

A millisecond...

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Categories: commotions, life, words, time,
Form: Rhyme
The Indian Tsunami
My heart cries for thousands and thousands of people
those who perished in the earthquake-spawned waves;
known as tsunami, the worst natural disaster
that caused tons and tons of deaths across Asian countries.

It’s a great tragedy, a giant...

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Categories: commotions, sadheart, people, heart, life, people,
Form: Prose Poetry
The Indian Ocean Tsunami
My heart cries for thousands and thousands of people
those who perished in the earthquake-spawned waves;
known as tsunami, the worst natural disaster
that caused tons and tons of deaths across Asian countries.

It’s a great tragedy, a giant...

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Categories: commotions, angst, death, history, hope, introspection, life, heart,
Form: Narrative
Twentyfabelthree
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Viewpoint Of The Fish 
 
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Invariably life is surmounted and over come with obstacles designed to amuse 
the abusers among the men the users of the clay to mold the old...

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Categories: commotions, adventure, animals, fantasy, children, natural disasters, science
Form: Prose Poetry
Protective Lyricism For the Ages Part Two
Protective Lyricism for the Ages Part Two 

Martin Luther King creating a path to dessimate discrimination 
An angel earning his wings from an epiphany of prophetic elation 
Listening to Ella Fitzgerald sing while learning a litany of...

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Categories: commotions, life,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Shattered Sighs