Knockout Blow Poems | Examples


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Premium Member The 'Mighty Maccabees'

    A few hundred ragtag, rabbinic Maccabees
      faced the might of Antiochus’ army
        60,000 fighting men strong                                                                               
      
    The Chanukah story we all know  
       The rabbis delivered Greece a knockout blow
    Rededicated the Temple, and with a small cruise of oil
       lit the lamps of the Menorah, eight nights in all 

    Yet in our prayers, not a single word about 
       the military prowess of the ‘Mighty Maccabees’
     We thank God, and God alone, for routing Greece

     Mattathias, the leader, and his sons,
        five indomitable priests
     we praise instead
        ~ but only for their spiritual feats



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     The Talmud asks: 'What is Chanukah?' The above is
     (a much-condensed version of) the answer it gives. 
     (Tractate 'Shabbos,' 21a - 23b)... Also found in the 
     'Abridged Book of Jewish Law, Laws of Chanukah,
     Solomon Gantzfried, (English version)

Close To Home

Written By:  D. Collins 3/15/24


It hits close to home when it comes to truth.
About the stuff that went down in World War II.
While Russia was delivering the knockout blow.
We were Shanghaiing scientist on the low.


That pissed the Russians off like never before.
Thus, the beginning of the existing Cold War.
Those same Nazi scientists we had scurried away.
Started what is the NASA that we know today.


Instead of sharing the wealth for everyone's gain.
We chose to deceive to stay ahead of the game.
We created animosity and a serious lack of trust.
Now, improved Nazi rockets are pointed right at us.

Premium Member Prepared For Possibilities

It pays to be prepared for possibilities
None of us know what the future brings
Some of us may face unwanted setbacks
Before the proverbial "fat lady sings."

Things we never could've imagined
Unforeseen illness, a sudden accident
Things happen that we least expect,
Things happen that seem never meant.

Preparation for the unexpected can soften
The hurtful impact of a knockout blow
And, if we have made contingency plans
We have a pre-planned direction to go.

Written October 13, 2021


Finding a Way

"It’s so exhausting these challenges,
Even for someone like you so talented 

You can dodge them as you make your way, 
Or hide them from display

But they will bleed you dry,
If you let them try

Best to look at each one on in a separate light, 
And pick the toughest one for a fight

Deliver it a knockout blow,
For you are it’s formidable foe

A woman with drive and persistence,
Profound knowledge and resilience 

Always thinking of another way,
For you will never walk away

From what you believe to be true,
And to receive what you are due 

The world may close some doors on you,
But God will open a window to let you through 

To continue on your journey,
For it is in his mercy

That we believe in the possible,
No matter the size of the obstacle 

So have faith in yourself,
And others here to help

That success is not far away,
For you are God’s protege

To overcome any force,
That threatens your course.

Miracle Trump

November, 8th is a witness of a mystery
A common man emerged from nowhere
Into the boxing ring he dashed
Without gloves, without experience

The world laughed, booed and cooed
But the miracle Trump clenched his fist
Forward he poked his head for a fight
The fight began and the world mocked

Veteran fighters, comrades watched in disbelief
Enemies carried banners for censorship
Members of his club described him a joker
But the miracle Trump pushed on smiling

The first round he delivered a knockout blow
As the opponent prepared sausages for victory feast
The joker became a hero, a name in every household
And left the world rolling heads in joyful confusion

Premium Member 'resilience'

Like a knockout blow 
In the final round

The challenges comes 
All at once 
How you cope will depend on how you see them 
It's not always black and white
Pastel shades 
Are all abound

You can get through this 
Even if you have to tick 
Them off one by one
Not everything 
Needs to be resolved today 
Deal with what you can 

Lighter they will become 
They say "Rome wasn't build in a day" 
Neither was your character
It might look flawed to you 
But in you might be 
That single trait your foe wish they had 

Test your resilience 
And surprise yourself 
You might see what I see 
One day, hopefully some day

©220920151226


The Message

I listened to old messages on my phone
          of people calling while I was listening or was not home
         One call was from my mom saying 'where you at thought you were coming down 
where did u go.She sounded so  happy and wondered why I did not show.I had no 
good reason I just did not want to go.I feel so bad fore in the next messages the pain 
started to show. I would go see her she would not smile or cry,  come to find out later 
her extreme pain was the reason why.i took her to the doctor to disclose how she felt 
not expecting the knockout blow we would be dealt.Sent to a hospice that very day 
within a week my mother would pass away. I guess what I am trying to say is I really 
wish I would have went that day.

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