Desire

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Desire overcomes my fear I ride to her through the night Night’s coldness upon my face Nothing can stop me

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Jay Narain

Date: 8/5/2025 10:45:00 AM

We must overcome our fears.

Bill Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 5:28:00 PM

True, Jay. I'm still working on a few. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2025 5:56:00 AM

- Fear is a challenge in life, Bill ... we must overcome fear to move forward :) - hugs

Bill Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 5:27:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. I got past most fears, but a few pop in time to time. Have a pleasant week my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/4/2025 3:27:00 PM

love the profundity of this Dodoitsu, Bill. If we face our fears, we are unstoppable. Another poem filled with insight and wisdom. Love, me

Bill Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 5:26:00 PM

Still, trying! Bill