Constructive Criticism is to be the Best-Version-Of-Yourself
Categories:
constructive, christian, community, devotion, god,
Form: Monoku
Did a Constructive Criticism
He started getting mad
He said a lot of different things
Didn’t finish his prose
Wondering
Questioning
Constructive Criticism is to be
The best version of yourself
Pls do not be mad
It is not to offend u
Construct to be better
Our poetry is for people
Not all people knows poetry
Have to spoon-feed them
To be crystal clear
To be the best version
Poetry form: Free Verse
Date Written: June 4th, 2025
Time Written: 2:41pm
Categories:
constructive, christian, community, devotion, people,
Form: Free verse
The psychiatrist
A licenced lier
Tells some constructive lies
Beautiful and charming
But with no obligation ever
To see to their fulfillments
Man
A great listener
Obeys to lies
Beautiful and sweet
But too absorbed and satisfied
Have soon lost the intention
To bother their logicalities
Categories:
constructive, men, psychological,
Form: Free verse
To make a correction is part of Constructive Criticism
It is not to embarrass you
To make a Constructive Criticism
To be at your best version
Persevere is being determined
Our mothers are our best critics
Do not be hurt & Think positive
To be at our best version
Critics are there to alter what we did
Not for us to be sad or angry
But to construct to be better
To be at our best version
Depending on how we accommodate Criticisms
It is to be at our best version
Categories:
constructive, christian, devotion, god, happiness,
Form: Sonnet
All your positive purposes out negative.
The scheme to spur now stalling.
The speech’s structuring is all that matters.
Why not a moment take to think them through.
Before you blow my light within out
And scar my brain and heart forever
With weightless words sprinting smoothly off your tongue.
Centuries rapidly crawling by will render no remedy
To my shattered spirit hopelessly hovering the earth
Feeling insecure about my brain’s output
And leaving my self-image constantly contending my heart’s will.
About it, your brain must think thrice.
On yourself, in my shoes, test twice.
Then, only at me, orate once.
Certainly, all constructive words coming from you
Will in me impart zeal to attain success
With a smile at both ends.
After your words, after our success.
Categories:
constructive, character, encouraging, inspiration, leadership,
Form: Free verse
Why are people getting mad
It is promoting improvement
It is something good
Development
Don’t have to be college graduate to give constructive criticism
Know something is wrong
Corrected
To develop for the better
Embarrassed, I did one
She got mad
Told me I piss her off
Felt deeply sorry
Thought did something good
Constructive Criticism
Poetry Form: Sonnet (14 lines poem)
Categories:
constructive, christian, people,
Form: Sonnet
C-onstructive
R-emark
I-s
S-howed
T-o
Y-our
M-ind
A-s
N-ice
C-omment
I-s
O-btained
Topic: Birthday of Cristy Mancio (May 28)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
Categories:
constructive, birthday,
Form: Acrostic
A Constructive Life
I love my job as builder so I resigned
Construction of high rises rose to the occasion of the day
Weighed me down with pressure
Edifices will have to design and build themselves
And rise to the sky alone
I’m going home to write a poem today
Perhaps it’s time to pray for rain
To contemplate this sad dilemma
Who will pay the rent?
The architects of time?
While I work with words that go no where
Simply pulled from thin air without a care
Lacking concrete foundations or sound ideas
Equipped with nothing for survival
Yet somehow things still take on solid lives and thrive
Who will pour the cement into molds when I grow old?
And hold steel beams against the cold?
A resume is in my future for planning grand
Ground breaking the horizon
I love my job so much that I resigned
Don’t tell my wife
She’ll start to cry
Created on 7/17/14 for Teeter Totter Poem-Balance the load contest
Categories:
constructive, business, change, conflict, future,
Form: Free verse
Constructive criticism
Is striving
To Become-The-Best-Version-Of-Yourself
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Categories:
constructive, black african american, christian,
Form: Haiku
a thin film of pride
scorn'd by the green and vintage
merlot dialogues
coagulated thoughts, make
growing pains turn arthritic
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If I never learn to take criticism.....how will I grow?
Categories:
constructive, change, growth, poetry,
Form: Tanka
Don’t give me the meat
Throw me the bone
Hide the pot
And teach me to fill my belly
From barely anything
Categories:
constructive, dedication, faith, work, me,
Form: Free verse
Poetry is subjective and can be written how you like;
There are many different ways in which to write.
You can put it down as prose or create some double rows,
Triangles, squares etc. are alright.
I had feedback yesterday from a person with no name;
I guess most of you have had some too.
He said my poetry’s bad, archaic and awfully RANK;
But I don’t write for him, I write for some of you.
Constructive criticism is welcomed by us all
To help us each achieve a higher goal.
To knock for knockings sake is very bad indeed
It makes a normal person less than whole!
If you have something to say, make sure you give a rock
To the person whom you wish to criticise.
Give them helpful hints; you’ll find that the response
Will illuminate from their ever grateful eyes!
Categories:
constructive, hope, life, on writing
Form: Verse