Constructive

a thin film of pride
scorn'd by the green and vintage
merlot dialogues
coagulated thoughts, make
growing pains turn arthritic

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If I never learn to take criticism.....how will I grow?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 19, 2014 at 1:44 AM
WOWW !! What a beautiful short poem ! Simply awesome!! Wishes--- :) :): )
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