Concretized Poems | Examples


Way Up is Down

Being Desperate to succeed,
Means desperate to foresee.

To foresee the rudiments of success,
On steady look and not on swift races.

Though sense organs react to tranny's pains,
If they endure, it results to plenty gains.

As tolerance life's span has no limit,
That's why success stay for no limit.

There are tyrant on the walls of pen and paper,
That even syringe manipulators inherent tyranny from the paper.

All spheres of life experience tyranny,
Sometimes to compact us not tyranny.

Those who persevere stand up concretized,
As rocks that have been conscientised.

Following this noble trend,
Is to know thy godlily friend.

A raise of thy shoulder is a total down,
For the way up is head and shoulder down.

Prodigal Son

PRODIGAL SON

Prodigal son I was
I lived a wayward life
Indeed a promiscuous
A boy with a sinister heart

I didn't respect no one
Nothing to lose, but all to gain
Nor was I scared from anyone
In my young heart it reigned

I lived in the streets
With my friends by my side
I didn't heed to my parents' advise
Nor from the teachers sent by God

In my brood, I was the black sheep
In school, I was the teachers’ antagonist
A bad influence I was branded
To my townspeople, I was bad indeed

I was eighteen when He touched my heart
I was confounded,  baffled and dazed
What is this Lord?, I soliloquized
Change! Change! Is what I realized

I prayed to the Lord God
" What should I do my Lord?" I asked
" Be my servant, to me He replied
Then my faith, He concretized and galvanized

I am now teaching the Good Tidings
For men to be saved from impending judgment
From the Lake of Fire on the Day of recompense
That the Kingdom of God they may inherit.

The Way Up Is Down

Being Desperate to succeed,
Means desperate to foresee.

To foresee the rudiments of success,
On steady look and not on swift races.

Though sense organs react to tranny's pains,
If they endure, it results to plenty gains.

As tolerance life's span has no limit,
That's why success stay for no limit.

There are tyrant on the walls of pen and paper,
That even syringe manipulators inherent tyranny from the paper.

All spheres of life experience tyranny,
Sometimes to compact us not tyranny.

Those who persevere stand up concretized,
As rocks that have been conscientised.

Following this noble trend,
Is to know thy godlily friend.

A raise of thy shoulder is a total down,
For the way up is head and shoulder down.


Premium Member The Sweetest Sign - Concretized

Vital fluids drip
            into the bucket
        below.
Corn snow underfoot
        a stark landscape
              black and white
          trees, snow and
        shadow.
In the early dawn
     our breath clouds
              and the air
                   smells of
              woodsmoke 
      and new maple 
syrup.
Surely 
         the sweetest 
                   sign of spring!
.
______________________

A new month, won't be long now.

Depth of a Woman's Love

It is different than mother’s 
Love; for it is Anitya; but it 
Becomes concretized, once 
Her psyche has fallen in love 
With thee. 
 
Mother was a woman of golden 
Lightening; for she gave unto
Me heartfelt wretchedness. Thus 
Beauty blossomed.
 
But the woman that I now love; 
She is Vajrayana to me: my 
Diamond which glistens in the 
Mire. 
 
I tripped upon her in the forest of
Affliction. She was sorrow unto 
Herself; alone, in need of a true 
Friend.
 
Out of pain, her radiance drew me
Near. Since the start of our union, 
She has been heaven to me. I dare 
Not say this of the others.
 
The depth of a woman’s love, if 
Thou canst experience it, it can move
Thee to tears. I felt Avidya within me, 
Scared of the love of light. 
 
But I embraced love; somewhat   
Aloof from the reaching of its presence. 
I praise Spirit; for blessing me with
The wings of my awakening: unto love.



Glenn Jr. Marchand

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