Way Up is Down

Being Desperate to succeed,
Means desperate to foresee.

To foresee the rudiments of success,
On steady look and not on swift races.

Though sense organs react to tranny's pains,
If they endure, it results to plenty gains.

As tolerance life's span has no limit,
That's why success stay for no limit.

There are tyrant on the walls of pen and paper,
That even syringe manipulators inherent tyranny from the paper.

All spheres of life experience tyranny,
Sometimes to compact us not tyranny.

Those who persevere stand up concretized,
As rocks that have been conscientised.

Following this noble trend,
Is to know thy godlily friend.

A raise of thy shoulder is a total down,
For the way up is head and shoulder down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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