Human nature
No dont touch me
You hit me first
So tell me why
Why, why, why/ Dont touch me
Just sit
Another strike
And another
One last one
Bow, boom, kabow
Now its over
And no one knows
Why.
Creation
A baby is born
And no one knows why
Well through it in the garbage can
Like Tupac said
*
"Tell mama don't cry"
What a life
What a life it lived,
And no one knows
why
Except you.
List of best twenty comments writers, in the last three years in PS!
Monoku poem.
Best active comments writers in PS, in the last three years, based on my personal reading, in aliphatic order are:
Andrea Dietrich.
Arthur Vaso.
Beryl Edmonds.
Brandy Nicole.
Daniel Henry Rodgers.
Darlene De Beaulieu.
Hiya Sharma.
I Am Anaya.
Ink Empress.
Jan Allison.
Joanna Daniel.
Karen Jones.
Kim Rodrigues.
Nette Onclaud.
Paige Hind.
Paula Goldsmith.
Sotto Poet.
Tania Kitchin.
Tom Cunningham.
Valsa George.
In this write..With oxymoronical title i take
Issue with a condition a rule most un-vital ' i must be nice.? When on poems i comment or advise.? I have no choice.' On this i could pen a sonnet? Not that by carachter
I am prone to be mean' if i be honest? yet thats a blanket
Ban.' Maybe usefull in Siberia? On going there i don't wish too.' Thats my choice.
Yet on here' there is a rule..that all must
Just adhere too.)
How on earth can I relate to the news they choose
It’s enough I’m forced to pay politicians dues
Comments without commas, coming each and every day
Commons talking pros and cons, never to delay
Let them Russian dancers sing, and Ukrainian singers dance
Let the Iranian strait float, I won’t take a chance
To go there, over there, and right there to see
How it goes I care as much as they care for me
Life seems better without news they put on the roll
Fooling me about the things out of my control
South Korea got their bronze, than predictably
Went to hell, I beg your pardon, to obscurity
It’s a snippet I remembered, and it hasn’t gone
Every game contains another, with no players shown.
At the age of sixty five he was accepted for employment
at a business dispatching organic, non hybrid, heirloom seeds
His specific duties found him in the garden
preparing soil, planting out pulling weeds
The tools that were used would sometimes seem to vanish
No matter where he searched unable to locate them, so outlandish !!
When the owner of the business found the tools that were required
" you've only had a boys look " a frustrated comment she uttered in despair
He could have replied , it's the only way I know, 'cause I'm not a girl
your remarks are discrimination and totally unfair
Instead he accepted her response as an accolade
I only had a boys look 'cause I wish to remain forever young
There are many situations where words have intensive connotations
Just be careful how you utilise your tongue
unethical grin
your barstool weeps at closing—
sins rhyme with thin wine
making others feel worthless does not increase the value of ourselves
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Monocrostic (Birthday of Sheryl Apog)
I am a confident, content person
l know and like who l am
I know my strengths and weaknesses
Me …l understand
Though at times , l lack confidence in aspects of my academic ability
I have never really considered myself creative or smart
Recently my self doubt has been boosted
Creating a positive change of heart
The recent Alphabet poems l have written
Alphabet gossip being the subject
Have received unbelievable encouraging comments
Comments, l truly did not expect
Words like clever, imaginative ,creative
Words l can’t and won’t ignore
Have elevated my fluctuating confidence
Like never before
I want to sincerely thank those poets
Who voiced such kind, genuine positivity
The power of your thoughts and words
Have encouraged a more confident academic self belief in me
Those were my teacher's comments,
as she handed back my poem.
And as I walked dejectedly back home,
I ripped my masterpiece to pieces
and flung my failing words ~ at the birds.
Some people
can feel confused.
While others
are more amused.
For the things you say,
Can be taken
the wrong way.
It's only a point of view.
inaction speaks louder than words ~ in fact it shouts to heaven above
i don’t seek indoctrination ~ this dude knows what it’s like to feel love
stay in your own comments box ~ i have no agenda nor need a shove
when putting digits inside someone else’s bubble ~ wear a latex glove
Comments and likes
What's the need?
Oh,give you the zeal
That you will surely succeed
Your wounds heal
Your work getting appreciated
You feel satiated
With the urge to become better
And shimmer
10/3/2023
Those who communicate,not because you are new!
But ………………because they honestly care about you.
They are not those selfish,rabid, comment collectors!
But………………warm-hearted, loving, soul-protectors.
You know, they are part of your supportive team!
And…..………………celebrate all of your poetic dreams.
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