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Premium Member -Dick the Ignorant

DICK, you think yourself fearless 
Protected by your screen
Shaming and blaming ,being hurtful
So brave and bold when unseen

Now DICK ,its obvious you don’t refrain
From spewing out uneducated remarks
Maybe that’s all you know
And ignorance is embedded in your brain

Your behaviour presents in a few ways
Via comments , poems and one liners
Abundant with insults and sarcasm 
Lacking compassion or praise

DICK ,it’s apparent you think you are clever
Viewing the rest of us as quite thick
But the truth is really quite simple
You are no clever DICK!

No doubt you consider yourself special
Unique , one of a kind
However, there are so many other DICKS like you
Simply Ignorant and blind

DICK ,I do not understand you
I will never know your reasons why 
Why not step out of your comfort zone
And give compassion a try

DICK, there is something important I need to say 
Regarding your  vicious remarks
Can you please stop doing handstands?
And talking out your a..e!!!
© Deb M   Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member On Poetic Courage

One's poetic ability, yea willingness, to speak
Truth.
To stand, soul-naked, as it were...
Whilst your poet enemies stone you or avoid
you in the online public square.
To swim with the sharks, though thou
might be their delicious repast.
To be be happily avoided because you
don't follow the crowd.
You won't bow and scrape and sell your
soul nor your country out, no how!

In this battlefield of ideas, the small of
mind will shame you.
Brandish your sword of courage,in full
view! 

A stalwart poem with three hundred reads and
comments, but two?
Shows that popularity trumps truth here,

So much so, I want to permanently vanish!
Or have 38,000 poets here to the famed,
"isle of Denial" be heretofore, banished!
                ~~~~~~

                     July 13, 2020
                     10:30 pm PST

Premium Member Thank You---Thanks To You

THANK YOU



T-hank you for the joy and care you bring into my life
H-aving them and You will always make me feel alright
A-ll the gifts of talents and good times we share will always be cherished
N-ever ending gratefulness for your  kindness and love, I warmly  express
K-nowing you is the best thing in this world giving me so much happiness.

Y-esterday ‘s acquaintance was  a bud of the most beautiful flower
O-ver the years, we lovingly nurtured it with love, time and care together,
U-ntil  then, You and I in the Everlasting Garden of Friendship bloom forever.



Feb. 18, 2014     8.10pm

A Valentines Poem especially dedicated to my dearest sisters and friends PD/Linda(bff) and Skat





THANKS TO YOU


To the welcoming committee:


T-hank you for the  warmth welcome and being always at my side
H-aving your support  keeps me in pen and my poetry to thrive
A-ll your words of encouragement and  great inspirations 
N-ow  they ‘re  keys to greater achievement in my writing endeavor.
K-nowing you is the best thing in this world giving me so much happiness,
S-ongs of your heart through your poetry-I love them all and I’ll forever cherish.

T-oday is a Valentines  Day  and it’ll be one of my best chances
O-f my humble heart,  million words of thanks may not even be enough to express.

Y-esterday, my knack of poetry was  a pip when compared
O-ver the years, you sprinkle with your loving words to grow and make better
U-ntil you gave me an earnest try and hope to be a prolific poet and writer.



Feb. 20, 2014   12.10


Note:
I dedicate this Special Valentines Poem, a “ Thanks To You” those who warmly welcomed me at soup:  my two loving poet sisters and BFFs, PD and Skat and my other dear poet friends, Anne Lise Andersen, Andrea Dietrich, Sara Kendricks and Carol Sunshine Brown. I also want to include my dear poet friend who always leaves his inspiring comments on my page, Russell Sivey & others. My loving poet friends, all your comments mean A LOT TO ME. I can’t thank u enough. More blessings to all!





2nd Place
Contest: A special something-dedication and tribute
Judged: 2/28/14
Sponsor: Poet Skat
© Len Gasun  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Acrostic

Un

Unavailable for work,
Unbeatable prices,
Uncertain times.

Undetectable fraud,
Unenviable tasks,
Unfathomable crimes.

Ungrateful children,
Unhelpful comments,
Unintentional consequences.

Unjustified dismissal,
Unkind acts,
Unlimited credit.  

Unmentionable briefs,
Unnecessary accompaniments.
Unopened mail.

Unpronounceable words,
Unquestionable loyalty,
Unreasonable requests.

Unseasonal weather,
Untroubled teenager's,
Unusual behavior.

Unverified reports,
Unwanted attention,
Un-x-rayed patient.

Unyielding bolt,
Un-zesty pizza,
For unproductive people, uninterested in undivided attention.
Form: List

Premium Member For Milton - a Tribute

 
"Someday we will fly free ~~only this physical body prevents us."

                                 By_ L Milton Hankins, Flying Free, Monoku

Milton, you came to soup like a blazing star across the sky,
not that long ago in reality and you blessed us with your light;
you shone like the most dazzling star in the darkness.
Milt, you touched souls with your gentle and kind comments,
with encouragement and became a beloved friend to so many;
you were my poetic friend and you always replied back to me,
your Kentucky friend-  in your last poem you wrote Bye-Bye Don't Cry!
But, Milt I have been weeping tons since I heard the news of your death!
Did you hear God calling your name?
Did you take hold of his hand?
Then, like a blazing star across the sky you left us forever,
I will never forget you, L Milton Hankins. Rest in Peace friend. 

____________________
December 29, 2022


Poetry/Verse/For Milton - A Tribute
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1513-032-29
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Lewis Milton Hankins
1941 - 2022

Submitted to the Standard contest, In Honor of Milt - An Uncontest
sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 01/16/2023

First Place
Form: Verse


Premium Member Tweeting the Truth In Love

Tweeting the Truth in Love

By Mark D. Stucky
We should be “speaking the truth in love,”*
posted Paul in Ephesians 4:15,
to speak and act out truth while filled
with self-sacrificial, unconditional love.

Not too-tough truth without compassion.
Not laissez-faire love without correction.

Certainly not rude comments
left on social media,
hidden from responsibility
by anonymity.

Certainly not tweeting lies with contempt,
insulting others with childish nicknames,
repeating falsehoods already debunked,
or disseminating self-serving distortions.

Paul didn’t excuse behavior so deplorable.
Why do so now?

*Note: Literally “truthing in love” in the original Greek text of the verse, incorporating both speech and actions.


(First published in Spirit Fire Review, 3 May 2022. See also my poems "The Art of the Devilish Deal," "Antisocial Media," and “What Would Jesus Tweet?")

(Image by Tina Nord on Pexels.com.)

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© kashinath karmakar 2012
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Placement:3rd;(Jan 2012)

Name:kash poet

Date:22nd January, 2012.

Contest:What I love most about PoetrySoup

Sponsor:Carol Brown
© Kash Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Couplet

Tome of Days

And I’ll sail forever 
My ocean of mischief
A sea of comfort
My hymn of peace 
Love comes with in the drift
My heart tears from the rift
Life my burden to hold 
Above my shoulders in lift

And I’ll sail forever
The moments 
that flatter our cheeks 
A child, A fleet 
Of inspiring smiles 
Our happiness our triumph
The displeasure in vows 
My judgment in trials 
An episode relaxed 
Racing for miles 

Who’s to tell me 
I cannot sail 
Toward which wind wanders
I am but a sun lit rise
Growing ale 
Most prisoners ask for freedom
Letters of ordinary tales 
Photographs and mail
But I think 
I will forever sail

I thank you for your comments
I acknowledge them, I walk on
In search of wonders
Stress free, a place to belong
Don’t you wish you were home
I’m writing for pictures 
An image clear 
Yet no one sees
Then again who am I to be
I’m only running with the sea
Form: Ballad

Premium Member Tribute

I take delight in the wonder of your pen
You pull the reader in with every stroke 
And take us on an amazing journey 
You are the maestro of love and romance 
By capturing the real essence of love
You have the ability to make us feel what you write
Whether you are serenading your lady love
Or just painting a beautiful picture, we feel that too
Because  you have a wonderful imagination 
And it causes us to be bold and dream again
You are the ambassador of dreams
Your “Good Mornings and Goodnights” are a delight
They make us smile inside out
Your comments are always “golden” and uplifting
They are encouraging and make us all feel so special
This is my tribute to you my friend Chris Green

5-29-17
Alexis Y.
© Alexis Y.  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member I AM NOT THE AUTHOR OF RADIANT VERSES ON POETRY SOUP MISLEADING ADVERTISEMENTS

THE MISCONCEPTION MISLEADING ADVERTISEMENTS FROM POETRY SOUP ONLY ONE OF MY POEMS EVER ENTERED AN ANTHOLOGY TITLE REMEMBER ME P.S IT'S POETRY I CANNOT TAKE ANY CREDIT FOR ANY POET OR WRITER ALTHOUGH I HAVE COMMENTS ON A FEW POETS PAGES WHO WERE IN THIS ANTHOLOGY BUT NO I AM NOT THEE AUTHOR OF RADIANT VERSES ANTHOLOGY FROM AMAZON IT IS VERY MISLEADING YOU WILL NOT FIND ANY OF MY WORK ON AMAZON ANTHOLOGY RADIANT VERSES ANYONE LOOKING FOR MY WORK WILL FIND ALL MY WORK UNDER MY NAME JUST SPEAKING OUT BECAUSE IT IS VERY IMPORTANT THAT ALL POETS ARE RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR OWN ORIGINAL WORK KEEP IN MIND JUST BECAUSE SOMEONE COMMENTS ON A POETS POEM DOESN'T MEAN THEY ARE THE ACTUAL AUTHOR THEE AUTHOR OF RADIANT IS JOSEHF LOYLD MURCHISON LENA M PATE JESSICA C WHEELER KEWAYNE WADLEY  AND SARAH STEIN TOGETHER THEY CREATED THE BOOK RADIANT VERSES NOT ME YOU CAN FIND HIS INFORMATION WHEN YOU PURCHASE HIS BOOK TITLED RADIANT VERSES MY NAME IS NOWHERE ON THIS BOOK THANK YOU

WRITTEN EXCLUSIVELY BY 
MRS. YOLANDA JOY NICHOLSEN 
JAN. 17TH 2026
Form: Naat

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