Best Thick Poems


The Fog So Thick

~
No sun, no moon, no stars above
appear this murky day
The fog so thick, you need a knife
to cut you on your way
Though as I drive within the mist
where I can hardly see
I still take time to make a wish
that you were here with me
For in these lower hanging clouds
I search my thoughts to find
The one who is more beautiful,
so clear within my mind
And now as I just travel on
I see the perfect view
For every morning’s loveliness
starts when I think of you
~

Just another hallmark card poem
which is obvious most of you are tired of
Categories: thick, good morning,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Murky Thick Haze

bluesy blurbs 
    of
brumal 
    blackness
      its 
  crawling 
clasps
   of 
silvery 
  gnawing
    below 
      shriveled 
            shades
       of 
       oxidized
    & 
      deep 
         haze
 immure
&
  wait

   awakening
     cold winter
         warm soul
&
         henceforth
     will hear
   pearly 
chants
    from  
      Birdie
        Green

with neon 
  embers 
     swirling
        fractals 
of
  gemmed 
      hues
 in 
 spirit
   for 
     soft 
        knock 
of 
   spring
           on 
    frozen 
shell
of 
withered 
     dreams

Written: January 15, 2023

3rd place contest winner

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

Brian Strand Contest No 1170 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: thick, allusion, analogy, blue,
Form: Other

Premium Member How Thick Is Your Skin

How Thick Is Your Skin?
Written: by Tom Wright
3/31/2018

In today’s society it appears to be about skin,
Many whine when things don’t go their way.
Laying at fault, is that our skin is too thin,
We’re easily offended by what others do and say.

Whiners leap to the podium with much to say,
Spewing words which aren’t from their own;
Saying clueless things swaying others their way,
Too young to realize you reap what you’ve sown.

Taking everything personal young tempers boil,
They seek to destroy any with dissenting view.
The old adage “to the victors belong the spoil”,
Seems to aptly apply to a “disadvantaged” few;

They seldom view things as just another’s opinion,
And are quick to strike back thus creating a flap;
Over verbiage alone each is granted dominion,
We need to give thought before opening our trap.
© Tom Wright  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: thick, word play, words,
Form: Lyric

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Premium Member Six Simpering Thick-Skinned Shifty Spinster Sisters

Six simpering thick-skinned shifty spinster sisters stiffly sit
Stitching sticky skid-marked scivvies of sixty sick stingy sailors.
Six sick from stitching scivvies of sixty sick scrimping sailors
Stickle over nickels; those insistent six thick-skinned spinster tailors!


For Joe Sandler's Tongue Twister Challenge Poetry Contest
Categories: thick, funny, sick,
Form: Alliteration

Thick As a Brick

Thick as a brick.

 Misunderstood. 

Alas a teenage daughter 
Got in the family way, 
Such they are the times 
What more can you say. 

It was getting near her time 
But still she wanted out, 
To the pub or just the pictures 
She didn"t mind being stout. 

Then one night it happened 
While she was all alone, 
Nature took Her course 
She fumbled for the phone. 

The time was nearly midnight 
It was dad who was awoken 
'Can you come and get me, 
I think my waters broken.' 

'Okay' shouts her dad 
'tell me where you are, 
You just say the place 
I"ll go get the car." 

He jumped up out of bed 
Put slippers on his feet 
'Where are you ringing from?'

'From my knickers to my feet.'
Categories: thick, funnydad, dad, time,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member - Thick and Heavy -

The fog lies like a thick blanket over my city
                         It is gray, damp and heavy to breathe in
                         Grey and wet ..... gives me a headache
                     Morning turns to night, without any difference
                         I have to get the light and the sun back
                                 Neither cat or dog will go out
                                  I've heard about rain dance
                           Now I would like to take a sun dance
                              Will you join with me in my dance





09.01.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
Categories: thick, dance, january, life, me,
Form: Free verse


Premium Member Thick As a Brick

One and two makes three, so four and five makes six
This guy's discovered all the mathematical tricks
The professors are all wrong
They really don't belong
Always knew theses guys were thick as a brick


© Jack Ellison 2015
Categories: thick, humorous,
Form: Limerick

Thick Voice

Why do we have a thick voice?
I don’t mean girls, I mean boys
Especially when we talk out loud 
Comes out an unpleasant sound 

It sounds like if it was a roar 
Or a throat that is sore 
It’s like you’re calling for a fight
When you only mean to be polite
It’s like trying to shout and yell
But you truly mean well

The thick voice makes you look rude
Even if you’re wearing a tie and a suit 
Though it sometimes makes you look brave
It most times makes you look like man of cave

Even when you try to control it and not to hurl 
They make fun of you and call you: girl!
But what are we to do? It’s the way we are
And we don’t mean to offend anybody nor mar 

In my opinion thick suits us more than thin
I think it’s one of the things that made us men
So after all we shouldn’t worry about the noise 
That is made by our thick voice
Categories: thick, emotions, encouraging, funny, humor,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Battle of Thick and Thin

What causes fat disappearance?
Diets that take perserverance
But wallet's too thin
Love those clothes from a bin
At stores that sell with a clearance
Categories: thick, funny,
Form: Limerick

Thick Skinned - What It Feels Like For a Girl

“Thick Skinned – What it Feels Like for a Girl”



When you speak 
it’s as if stars cascade
out of your mouth 
galaxies you produce
musical incantations 
that I listen religiously to 

I watch your lips 
form glistening cupids’ bows

they spread wide open 
like the subtle legs 
of a forgotten nun
whispering vesper wishes
before priestly sermons
and John Donne

your hushed and salient
remonstrations, you now
plant me in your 
sentence, 
no, that this should 
never have occurred at all

we are irreverent 
in our choices 

forming new begottens
you usher from the 
pulpit of your world
eloquent reasons
to justify wrong from right
right from wrong

as if your internal fortitude
consists within a 
mirror universe 
deep and soulful
it promises 
more than heaven 

those curves 
and waivers

contracts we signed
some time ago 
souls sunk in a 
bad marriage 
and hushed assurances 
of ‘til death do us part weatherin’

kissing the skin
against my throat 

the very place 
my comeback is primed
to be launched, yours
deliver that kind of 
loose compensation 
lathered in snake oil

and a clear path 
to redemption
that tie my hands 
make me mute 
I was launched long ago 
from safe harbour, 

now
off sure

to lay down all my 
naked vicious antigens
I have grown in 
the petri dish of my
muddy life to fight your 
viral love 

like diamonds 
your words 
they sharpen and glisten
cut through 
the thick tempered 
glass of me, 

through the epidermis
of a close-packed woman
you laser your refined tongue 
eyes viscerally undressing 
you address the wide open
tableau of me, knowing 

you adroitly twist your points 
penetrating through 
to the now 
all too familiar
subcutaneous
safe base chakra of me 

within a short space of time 
I am sold 

into 
your chicanery 
wanting little of the 
life that was before 
the unfortunate 
taming of me

(LadyLabyrinth / 2021)



"What it Feels Like for a Girl"/ Madonna , Paul Oakenfold (Remix)
https://youtu.be/tbtt0WTKqnQ














https://www.huffpost.com/entry/8-steps-that-explain-why-_b_9143360

http://www.hiddenhurt.co.uk/domestic_violence_poems_1.html#learned

https://songmeanings.com/songs/view/7940/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/What_It_Feels_Like_for_a_Girl
Categories: thick, abuse, dark, muse, symbolism,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Thick As a Brick

What the hell is a limerick... this is a limerick!
Don't understand, is this some kind of a trick?
I'll repeat it slower
Perhaps when you're sober
Sometimes you can be as thick as a brick!


© Jack Ellison 2015
Categories: thick, silly,
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Thick As a Brick

Go ahead, ask me what makes me tick
Well, to answer your question really quick
I'm a simple man
No devious plans
Though sometimes I can be as thick as a brick


© Jack Ellison 2015
Categories: thick, humorous,
Form: Limerick

Thick Comes the Night

The darkness subterraneously slowly slides in
As it covers the woeful wounds on the sanguineous skin
Thick comes the night I know it very well
Where mendacious mourners induce their own hell

The tears that fall...and build a wall of silence
With slippery slopes...and abandoned hopes of guidance
For the pouring of tears...of yester years behind us
As we slip and fall...and hit the wall that binds us

They cascade with their own charade...from within the inner soul
I slipped and fell to my own hell...on a tear drop as black as coal.


June.22.2016
For Contest... I SLIPPED ON A TEARDROP AND LANDED . . . 
By Cindi Rockwell
Categories: thick, abuse, addiction, anxiety, depression,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Thick Veil

Fog
Thick veil
Settles, engulfs, covers
Slowly, totally, wraps 
Condensation
Categories: thick, nature,
Form: Cinquain

Premium Member Thick Forest

A kingdom of dark shades
tall and fat inhabitants
shelter to all kinds of beasts.
Categories: thick, nature,
Form: Haiku
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