Thick Comes the Night

The darkness subterraneously slowly slides in
As it covers the woeful wounds on the sanguineous skin
Thick comes the night I know it very well
Where mendacious mourners induce their own hell

The tears that fall...and build a wall of silence
With slippery slopes...and abandoned hopes of guidance
For the pouring of tears...of yester years behind us
As we slip and fall...and hit the wall that binds us

They cascade with their own charade...from within the inner soul
I slipped and fell to my own hell...on a tear drop as black as coal.


June.22.2016
For Contest... I SLIPPED ON A TEARDROP AND LANDED . . . 
By Cindi Rockwell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:15 AM
'Slipping and falling to one's own hell' and the 'cascades of charades', these are strong pictures. Been there, done that, got the T-shirt. This poem is very powerful.
Roper Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 7:46 PM
this is wonderful,^WW^, great flow good luck in the contest :)
Warrior Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Thank you so much Eve...god bless...^WW^
Turner Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 7:48 PM
The pouring of tears of yesteryears... i Love it and can relate. Excellent write my friend.
Warrior Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Thank you Daniel...hope all is well in your kingdom...god bless...WW^
Smith Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Very well done WW...I liked the internal rhyme and alliteration you used. Good luck in the contest.
Warrior Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Thank you my friend Tim...god bless...^WW^
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