Thick Skinned - What It Feels Like For a Girl


“Thick Skinned – What it Feels Like for a Girl”



When you speak 
it’s as if stars cascade
out of your mouth 
galaxies you produce
musical incantations 
that I listen religiously to 

I watch your lips 
form glistening cupids’ bows

they spread wide open 
like the subtle legs 
of a forgotten nun
whispering vesper wishes
before priestly sermons
and John Donne

your hushed and salient
remonstrations, you now
plant me in your 
sentence, 
no, that this should 
never have occurred at all

we are irreverent 
in our choices 

forming new begottens
you usher from the 
pulpit of your world
eloquent reasons
to justify wrong from right
right from wrong

as if your internal fortitude
consists within a 
mirror universe 
deep and soulful
it promises 
more than heaven 

those curves 
and waivers

contracts we signed
some time ago 
souls sunk in a 
bad marriage 
and hushed assurances 
of ‘til death do us part weatherin’

kissing the skin
against my throat 

the very place 
my comeback is primed
to be launched, yours
deliver that kind of 
loose compensation 
lathered in snake oil

and a clear path 
to redemption
that tie my hands 
make me mute 
I was launched long ago 
from safe harbour, 

now
off sure

to lay down all my 
naked vicious antigens
I have grown in 
the petri dish of my
muddy life to fight your 
viral love 

like diamonds 
your words 
they sharpen and glisten
cut through 
the thick tempered 
glass of me, 

through the epidermis
of a close-packed woman
you laser your refined tongue 
eyes viscerally undressing 
you address the wide open
tableau of me, knowing 

you adroitly twist your points 
penetrating through 
to the now 
all too familiar
subcutaneous
safe base chakra of me 

within a short space of time 
I am sold 

into 
your chicanery 
wanting little of the 
life that was before 
the unfortunate 
taming of me

(LadyLabyrinth / 2021)



"What it Feels Like for a Girl"/ Madonna , Paul Oakenfold (Remix)
https://youtu.be/tbtt0WTKqnQ














https://www.huffpost.com/entry/8-steps-that-explain-why-_b_9143360

http://www.hiddenhurt.co.uk/domestic_violence_poems_1.html#learned

https://songmeanings.com/songs/view/7940/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/What_It_Feels_Like_for_a_Girl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/20/2021 3:02:00 AM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/20/2021 3:06:00 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Murder_of_Hannah_Clarke
Date: 9/23/2021 6:48:00 PM
I pray to God you never be tamed, I love your poetry , thank you
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/24/2021 3:00:00 AM
Love and Light to you Mystic. No one will ever tame me. Good advice for daughters and other females to stand by. Below link for my daughter and any other female, at any age. My thoughts with this young lady, and now her family/loved ones. Truth always comes out, eventually. xx
Date: 9/23/2021 1:11:00 PM
https://youtu.be/a27XBXb6Jkg
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/23/2021 1:18:00 PM
https://youtu.be/ni-eUzvBIWY
Date: 9/17/2021 9:27:00 PM
big Madonna fan here...love your write :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/18/2021 9:31:00 AM
thanks! that's a great line re sheets..yes, women were the ones left waving goodbye on the shore but that is changing now so there'll be more writes about the Ocean as they actively sail off into the horizon :)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/18/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thank you. I was looking into Ocean poems this afternoon, and coming across this "Ocean poems can not only be dedicated to capturing the heart of sea, but to metaphors for love and trauma, among many other things." it kind of fit here; and of course I have written a few poems about the Ocean and the Sea, but not as skilled with the ropes as you are :). A little gift for you.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/18/2021 1:57:00 AM
speaking of Oceans and metaphors - this is rather beautiful. "The sheets of my heart snapped taut to breaking, as a gale stronger than longing filled the sail inside me..."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/18/2021 1:57:00 AM
https://sailingtoantarctica.com/writers/women-writing-sea-poetry-theres-not-enough-of-it-about/
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