Mohamed Adel Poet Rhyme

Thick Voice

Why do we have a thick voice?
I don’t mean girls, I mean boys
Especially when we talk out loud 
Comes out an unpleasant sound 

It sounds like if it was a roar 
Or a throat that is sore 
It’s like you’re calling for a fight
When you only mean to be polite
It’s like trying to shout and yell
But you truly mean well

The thick voice makes you look rude
Even if you’re wearing a tie and a suit 
Though it sometimes makes you look brave
It most times makes you look like man of cave

Even when you try to control it and not to hurl 
They make fun of you and call you: girl!
But what are we to do? It’s the way we are
And we don’t mean to offend anybody nor mar 

In my opinion thick suits us more than thin
I think it’s one of the things that made us men
So after all we shouldn’t worry about the noise 
That is made by our thick voice

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Poetiq1der Simmons February 21, 2015 at 5:17 PM Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Humorous....but, oh so true! Mohamed Adel February 21, 2015 at 11:03 PM Thank you Don so much, glad you liked it :)

Debbie Guzzi February 10, 2015 at 7:30 PM So nice to read your verse this evening.{husky voice!] Light & Love Mohamed Adel February 10, 2015 at 8:40 PM Thank you Debbie so much, glad you liked it :)

Emile Pinet February 3, 2015 at 8:59 PM A humorous poem that exposes our weakness and expands our strengths. Emile. Mohamed Adel February 3, 2015 at 11:45 PM Thank you Emile so much, glad you enjoyed it :)

Crystal Keehn February 3, 2015 at 8:07 PM This is different and I enjoyed it. It made me laugh. Mohamed Adel February 3, 2015 at 8:12 PM Thank you Crystal so much, happy you enjoyed it and glad it did :)