Chris Green Poet Rhyme

The Fog So Thick

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No sun, no moon, no stars above
appear this murky day
The fog so thick, you need a knife
to cut you on your way
Though as I drive within the mist
where I can hardly see
I still take time to make a wish
that you were here with me
For in these lower hanging clouds
I search my thoughts to find
The one who is more beautiful,
so clear within my mind
And now as I just travel on
I see the perfect view
For every morning’s loveliness
starts when I think of you
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Just another hallmark card poem
which is obvious most of you are tired of

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Ronald D Thompson January 14, 2020 at 4:18 PM Super cool Chris. Best wishes my friend..Ron :) Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 7:36 AM Thanks so very much Ron

Kim Rodrigues January 14, 2020 at 3:31 PM No way! Keep them coming! We need to see the light through the fog! Kim Rodrigues January 14, 2020 at 3:36 PM Just about to post a senryu. Look for it ;)

Lin Lane January 14, 2020 at 1:07 PM You get my weather one day earlier; two days of mist and fog. Without seeing the moon and stars, the nights are filled with only emptiness...incomplete. Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 1:26 PM I do and hopefully I can send something a little nicer your way tomorrow. Thanks so much Lin.

Carolyn Devonshire January 14, 2020 at 12:56 PM Nicely done, Chris. We get a lot of fog near the cost. Glad to see you so active here. Best wishes, Carolyn Carolyn Devonshire January 14, 2020 at 1:38 PM It's just that time of year in the South when the arrival of dawn's warmth mixes with the night's coolness. Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 1:25 PM We have had it for the past two days, I am ready for it to leave. Thank you Carolyn.

Gershon Wolf January 14, 2020 at 11:56 AM Aw, I sure like the clever twist you gave to "to cut you on your way" (via a knife through the fog). Hallmark, Schmallmark. Three cheers for Chris Green. (And not Chinese cheers either! :). Cheers, Gershon Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 12:14 PM Phew, I'm glad it's not Chinese cheers, I couldn't afford the tariffs. : ) Thanks so much my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2020 at 10:04 AM We never tire of your positive romantic words Chris. I live at the 12 hundred foot level on a hillside overlooking the sea. We are often in the mist of low clouds and it reminds me of when I used to fly and it feels like home. Fog is dangerous to drive in but it has its own feeling of enchantment as in your lovely poem. Good morning my friend. Have a great day! xxoo Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 10:18 AM Wow Connie..."at the 12 hundred foot level on a hillside overlooking the sea" No wonder your poetry is always so beautiful. I'm sitting in a grey office with a grey desk and a fake plant on the credenza. :) Yep, it's foggy. : ) Thank you Connie.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 14, 2020 at 10:03 AM Tee hee. You're a cutie. Write on dude. xomo Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 10:17 AM Thanks so much my friend. Just whining, that's all. : )

John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 9:53 AM Hallmark sells a lot of cards, would be a great opportunity, mushy sentimentality is still in high demand and you are a romantic superstar...I never tire of your writing Chris! Good morning! Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 9:59 AM Wow, thank you John. That means a lot coming from a talented writer like yourself. From one superstar to another...I appreciate you my friend.

Heidi Sands January 14, 2020 at 9:16 AM Never tired of these poems , Chris. Beautiful thoughts within the fog! Well written :) Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 9:58 AM Thank you so very much my friend. My head is kind of foggy this morning as well. : )

Sandra Adams January 14, 2020 at 8:32 AM Sigh... what a beautiful poem to start our morning... you make the fog sound so inviting .... I love this Chris!!! Good morning ... :) hugs Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 8:43 AM Thank you so much Sandy. The fog is definitely a challenge to drive in but when your mind has something beautiful to focus on, it seems so much easier. :)

Caren Krutsinger January 14, 2020 at 7:57 AM I drove in the fog this morning and did not feel as cheerful about it as this poem makes it seem for you. Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 8:04 AM It's all in what you think about while driving. : ) Thanks so much Caren.