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- Thick and Heavy -

The fog lies like a thick blanket over my city
                         It is gray, damp and heavy to breathe in
                         Grey and wet ..... gives me a headache
                     Morning turns to night, without any difference
                         I have to get the light and the sun back
                                 Neither cat or dog will go out
                                  I've heard about rain dance
                           Now I would like to take a sun dance
                              Will you join with me in my dance





09.01.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2013

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Nette Onclaud Date: 6/3/2013 1:37:00 PM oh, this one lifts my soul, anne..., such an uplifting verse... you took a wonderful theme and made your words sing!... well done!..:) huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/3/2013 2:34:00 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/14/2013 8:24:00 PM Annalise, Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2013 1:55:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, LINDA. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seth Shirey Date: 2/5/2013 12:07:00 PM Coming from a Gothic standpoint, ide say that this is a really good poem! :) Since becoming more optimistic with myself this is the exact kind of poem I need in my day :D! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2013 12:26:00 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Seth. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/1/2013 1:58:00 PM How sweet, Anne Lise...I'd love to sun dance with you. I lived on the island of Cyprus where sun dancing was as easy as can be! You are a ray of sunshine to my soul. Thanks for your last post and encouragement! God bless! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2013 2:04:00 PM .... we women have to stand together .... lol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan Date: 1/19/2013 8:57:00 PM I come from a place where the sun shines far too bright much of the time. Maybe we can trade? I really like the way you format most of your writing - centered and symmetrical. Being a visual person, the form, as well as the writing, has meaning for me. Keep up the good work! Jack Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:14:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 1/17/2013 1:07:00 PM Great write, you have captured the essence of a climate that surrounds us most of the time. Could it be that you are a British Colombian ?:( /:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2013 1:11:00 PM - (?) - Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, William . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 1/16/2013 11:49:00 PM Hi Anne - Lise, how are you? Love the poem ;} have a blessed day xoxo's ;} Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2013 2:12:00 AM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Debbie . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley Date: 1/14/2013 8:28:00 PM Oh,I'll be right there with ya! I hate those dark days that fade into night....oxox f.e.f. :o) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2013 1:56:00 AM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Dan. - -xoxo / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne Date: 1/14/2013 10:12:00 AM what a lovely uplifting write - a sun dance : ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2013 10:32:00 AM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Jack. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Terry L. Allen Date: 1/13/2013 2:21:00 PM A joyful dance should most shurely bring out the sun I'll join in. Huggs TLee Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2013 2:23:00 PM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Terry. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Reggae Magnet Date: 1/13/2013 7:54:00 AM hi Anne, doesn't sound great but better days can only be ahead. the sun which shines within is still shining brightly I see. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2013 9:33:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Robert. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/12/2013 12:15:00 PM Someone must be dancing here, the sun is shining brightly today. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 12:23:00 PM I was Bob. - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller Date: 1/12/2013 11:33:00 AM Winter indeed ,not much fun for some. A very nice expressed poem,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 11:35:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Erich. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Isaiah Zerbst Date: 1/12/2013 11:05:00 AM The story of winter. I like an occasional fog, but am always glad when spring hits. Many thanks for your kind comments. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 11:15:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sadaf Syed Date: 1/12/2013 1:05:00 AM Thanks for your comments on my poetry Anne.. A great description of the weather and also that any weather in life can be made more cheerful if we do what we want to regardless of whatever circumstances:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 5:27:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sadaf. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/11/2013 3:32:00 PM I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 5:24:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ann Roske Date: 1/11/2013 1:09:00 PM My weather in Oregon State USA is a lot like yours this time of year... nice write Anne Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 1:16:00 PM It gives me a headache...... Thank you for shining on my little poem, Ann. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun Date: 1/11/2013 3:50:00 AM This is an awesome poem, so lovely one that I feel like joining you in the dance my dear friend Anne-Lise to get back the light and the sun back. Two thumbs up here! Thank you so much for sharing, for your visits, supports, inspirations and everything. Big sweet hugs for you! love always, Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 7:02:00 AM Big hug back to you my friend Leonora, thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2013 6:51:00 PM this is a bright and cheerful poem at the end of it, for a grey foggy day!! Me likes! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 2:04:00 AM Andrea, I is pleased when the sun shines and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/10/2013 2:05:00 PM Continuous gray days can become heavy and depressing..Enjoyed your expression of this idea..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 2:02:00 AM Sara, I will be happy when the sun is shining and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Faleeha Hassan Date: 1/10/2013 1:44:00 PM the Fog is must disappear and the sun must come Even we danceing under the sun Thanks to the beauty of the poem Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 2:01:00 AM will be glad when the sun is shining and you're Faleeha visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti Date: 1/10/2013 1:00:00 PM Put my name on your dance card - love to dance. Beautiful poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2013 1:06:00 PM The more we are together ........ sun will come, Joann. - Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman Date: 1/10/2013 12:37:00 PM Beautifully written piece... It obviously lays heavily on your heart, mind and soul. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2013 12:44:00 PM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Carol. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell Date: 1/10/2013 7:28:00 AM Lol, I sure will, Anne-Lise. It's about time we have a sun dance! It is gloomy and raining where I am at so I would love to see that sun just about now, lol. Oh well, I heard it will be in the 70's. So can't complain :). Cute write. Enjoyed! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2013 9:58:00 AM Thank you for shining on my little poem, Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 1/10/2013 6:20:00 AM A-L,Happy to join, my place is quite sunny these days!! Jag Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2013 6:21:00 AM Thank you for shining on my little poem, Jag. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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