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- Thick and Heavy -

The fog lies like a thick blanket over my city It is gray, damp and heavy to breathe in Grey and wet ..... gives me a headache Morning turns to night, without any difference I have to get the light and the sun back Neither cat or dog will go out I've heard about rain dance Now I would like to take a sun dance Will you join with me in my dance 09.01.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2013 1:37:00 PM

oh, this one lifts my soul, anne..., such an uplifting verse... you took a wonderful theme and made your words sing!... well done!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2013 2:34:00 PM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2013 8:24:00 PM

Annalise, Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2013 1:55:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, LINDA. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seth Shirey

Date: 2/5/2013 12:07:00 PM

Coming from a Gothic standpoint, ide say that this is a really good poem! :) Since becoming more optimistic with myself this is the exact kind of poem I need in my day :D!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2013 12:26:00 PM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Seth. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/1/2013 1:58:00 PM

How sweet, Anne Lise...I'd love to sun dance with you. I lived on the island of Cyprus where sun dancing was as easy as can be! You are a ray of sunshine to my soul. Thanks for your last post and encouragement! God bless!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2013 2:04:00 PM

.... we women have to stand together .... lol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 1/19/2013 8:57:00 PM

I come from a place where the sun shines far too bright much of the time. Maybe we can trade? I really like the way you format most of your writing - centered and symmetrical. Being a visual person, the form, as well as the writing, has meaning for me. Keep up the good work! Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2013 3:14:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 1/17/2013 1:07:00 PM

Great write, you have captured the essence of a climate that surrounds us most of the time. Could it be that you are a British Colombian ?:( /:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2013 1:11:00 PM

- (?) - Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, William . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/16/2013 11:49:00 PM

Hi Anne - Lise, how are you? Love the poem ;} have a blessed day xoxo's ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2013 2:12:00 AM

Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Debbie . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 1/14/2013 8:28:00 PM

Oh,I'll be right there with ya! I hate those dark days that fade into night....oxox f.e.f. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2013 1:56:00 AM

Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Dan. - -xoxo / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 1/14/2013 10:12:00 AM

what a lovely uplifting write - a sun dance : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2013 10:32:00 AM

Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Jack. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Terry L. Allen

Date: 1/13/2013 2:21:00 PM

A joyful dance should most shurely bring out the sun I'll join in. Huggs TLee

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/13/2013 2:23:00 PM

Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Terry. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/13/2013 7:54:00 AM

hi Anne, doesn't sound great but better days can only be ahead. the sun which shines within is still shining brightly I see.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/13/2013 9:33:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Robert. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2013 12:15:00 PM

Someone must be dancing here, the sun is shining brightly today.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2013 12:23:00 PM

I was Bob. - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

Date: 1/12/2013 11:33:00 AM

Winter indeed ,not much fun for some. A very nice expressed poem,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2013 11:35:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Erich. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/12/2013 11:05:00 AM

The story of winter. I like an occasional fog, but am always glad when spring hits. Many thanks for your kind comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2013 11:15:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sadaf Syed

Date: 1/12/2013 1:05:00 AM

Thanks for your comments on my poetry Anne.. A great description of the weather and also that any weather in life can be made more cheerful if we do what we want to regardless of whatever circumstances:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2013 5:27:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sadaf. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/11/2013 3:32:00 PM

I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2013 5:24:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ann Roske

Date: 1/11/2013 1:09:00 PM

My weather in Oregon State USA is a lot like yours this time of year... nice write Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2013 1:16:00 PM

It gives me a headache...... Thank you for shining on my little poem, Ann. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 1/11/2013 3:50:00 AM

This is an awesome poem, so lovely one that I feel like joining you in the dance my dear friend Anne-Lise to get back the light and the sun back. Two thumbs up here! Thank you so much for sharing, for your visits, supports, inspirations and everything. Big sweet hugs for you! love always, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2013 7:02:00 AM

Big hug back to you my friend Leonora, thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2013 6:51:00 PM

this is a bright and cheerful poem at the end of it, for a grey foggy day!! Me likes!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2013 2:04:00 AM

Andrea, I is pleased when the sun shines and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2013 2:05:00 PM

Continuous gray days can become heavy and depressing..Enjoyed your expression of this idea..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2013 2:02:00 AM

Sara, I will be happy when the sun is shining and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Faleeha Hassan

Date: 1/10/2013 1:44:00 PM

the Fog is must disappear and the sun must come Even we danceing under the sun Thanks to the beauty of the poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2013 2:01:00 AM

will be glad when the sun is shining and you're Faleeha visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 1/10/2013 1:00:00 PM

Put my name on your dance card - love to dance. Beautiful poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2013 1:06:00 PM

The more we are together ........ sun will come, Joann. - Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/10/2013 12:37:00 PM

Beautifully written piece... It obviously lays heavily on your heart, mind and soul.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2013 12:44:00 PM

Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Carol. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/10/2013 7:28:00 AM

Lol, I sure will, Anne-Lise. It's about time we have a sun dance! It is gloomy and raining where I am at so I would love to see that sun just about now, lol. Oh well, I heard it will be in the 70's. So can't complain :). Cute write. Enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2013 9:58:00 AM

Thank you for shining on my little poem, Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/10/2013 6:20:00 AM

A-L,Happy to join, my place is quite sunny these days!! Jag

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2013 6:21:00 AM

Thank you for shining on my little poem, Jag. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)