Best Optic Nerve Poems


Traveling Light

Unburdened by mass,
star born 
photons
hurtle
through vacuum voids.

They reach a planet
where green continents swim 
in blue oceans.
It is night. A woman
looks up at the sky.

The photons travel
through the gelatinous matter
of her eye and die
on her retina,
sparking electric pulses 
that race 
along the optic nerve,
and her miraculous brain
translates:
I see a star.

Premium Member Global Drama of Medical Marijuana

I feel as if walking inside
an impressionistic painting, that too in 3D
as far as I can see, a world of dots and light
the same as what I’m made of.
I see summer in spring.
My eyes touch the sky and sky me.
I feel people staring at me
but why don’t they ask me about my Glaucoma.
My optic nerve, the cable, is damaged
And sends visual information to the brain
And can cause slight vision or even blindness
And am advised to take marijuana,
The most controversial choice
though there are alternative therapies.
I know smoking marijuana has been proven
to reduce intra ocular pressure
and prevents optic nerve damage
but takes a heavy toll
as one has to smoke multiple times a day
for the consistent results
adding to the global drama of medical marijuana.
I am trying it out but…….
Feeling the side effects of depression & exacerbate asthma.

                                         +++
November 29, 2014
Form: Free Verse
Dr.Ram Mehta
7th place win
Contest: Medical Marijuana by Debbie Guzzi

A Visit From Massacre Fairy 1st Half

Twas the night before Christmas and all through the town
Not a creature was breathing, not one to be found.

Bloody hand prints swept the walls which once were white
Darkness overshadowed anything that had light

Little boys were decapitated and sprawled across the floor,
While little girls were skinned alive; hung as décor for every door.

Mothers had their jaws ripped straight from their heads
As their children screamed for mercy from their very own beds.

Panic and pain ricocheted off the walls
Pets were brutally butchered then stretched out in the halls

And Fathers were kept alive long enough to observe
Then their eyes were gouged only to dangle by an optic nerve

Fifty-six minutes is all the creature takes
To slay the whole town with its massacre earthquake

Agony rained something fierce this night
For this town was caught in the worst of plights

And the echo of dripping blood is now all you can hear
The stench swimming through the air is encapsulated fear.

To have dodged this slaughter would have been transmundane
For this monster, this beast was most definitely inhumane


It came through the windows and tore through the blinds
Grabbing any human or beast it could find

Then Slash the body! Gnash at the body! Bash them in the crown! 
And Thrash the body! Lash at the body! Mash the body down!

Then it rips out your tongue and swallows it whole
This fiendish freak has a heart made of coal

When wondering eyes caught a glimpse of what did appear
They knew it wasn’t Santa and his flying reindeers


Premium Member Air Traffic Control Radar

Blips repeat on man's optic nerve
Reflections of each shapely curve
The impulse to meet
Slows the beat of his feet  
And to greet the target he'll swerve

Premium Member Controlling Energy

Voices of the silent whispers echo deeply disturbing fact 
debates hold principle those with brains tear down structures 
human rights ignored opening up a can of worms within morals 
where truth is hidden away questions agenda 
envelope of forgotten yesterdays sealed fate 

Honour amongst thieves new world order social control 
handshakes grasp secret societies revealing dark shades 
cover ups underneath the veil careless actions endanger security 
desert storm powered by the central bank hidden secrets leak oil 
  
Where the so called elite are born without sin lawless diamonds 
with their silver spoons attached empty vessels without moral right 
classifies perfection untouchable agents of death 
In the heart of a free man looking at the system 
creating slavery cutting wages spying imprisoning freedom of choice 

Applying pressure drones killing families 
within a cloud of dust or inside evidence to support such horror actions 
criminal murderers sitting in their offices should be banged to rights 
leaving no place for hope or a just democracy strikes issues flawed  
To fatten their purses behind the revolving doors open guess
 
Suffering begins with espionage
 loveless pride exposing sheltered acts 
dragging your heals security council protecting the vulnerable's need  
instead liberal intelligence with your reductions clearly speak volumes  
threatening the poorer field positions you without care 

Royalty who profit from others pain hidden agendas lie 
conspiracy theories can carry truth to the button 
because something is hidden away under dressing why 
we ask ourselves those not brainwashed 
dirty arms deals laundering ill got money gains 
The heads of states 
they are clearly breaking the law
justice is so corrupt fact 
every Joe soap knows 
they only give us the partial truth 
optic nerve cell centre brings up a live wire 
They do not give a rats **** 
who use uranium tipped enriched missals 
poisoning the earth's crust stringing us along as peace keepers 
arming terrorists is an act of war against peace makers 
countless innocent have died at the hands of murderers

I Found It

As you look at me I'm not him.
Wearing a face of a man that does not exist, a myth. 
   For i am reserved, deep within the confines of self.
Ensorcelled, impelled, upon a journey of discovery. 
   Under the melanin pigmentation of epidermal.
Through the subcutaneous tissue, to travel around blood vessels, capillaries, and arteries, the rivers of life. 
   Observed and closely investigated all the fibers of the muscles, the joints, and the tendons which bind them.
   From the plantar, up the nervous system, to the cranium. 
Within the essence of me, the was, the is, and the maybe, the realms of my brain. 
   Continuing through the optic nerve, peering through the retina.
If seeing is believing, then there's more says my fervor. 
   So I close the lids and travel further. 
Encaged within the thoracic, observing the pulmonary action of breath taking. 
   At that moment, I hear the rhythm, the drumming of existence. 
Astonished with disbelief, awaiting to awaken from this dream. 
   All the days and years of believing me void.
There it is, pulsating with strength, feeding all the limbs and giving me life.
   Contradicting the accusations and claims 
of the misinformed strife.
   Reinforced by the deeds and sacrifices, the joy and the pains endured.
Shattered like glass, the image i am not.
   Against all odds, I found that I do have a heart.


My Heads Not Right

A few weeks ago, about 9:00 AM
My head started aching; loss my vigor & vim
It’s didn’t let up; just got more intense
At midnight to the hospital I went

In the ER and seeking some relief
Had to just wait as the cause they did seek
While they did MRI’s and scans and stuff
I had to suffer and hang in there tough

The staff got their data; gave me morphine
On it for two days before I was weaned
My head got better; still took Percocet
On the fourth day I was about off that

“A pituitary tumor”, they said
“Has been growing for years inside your head”
Headache came and went, that threw them a curve
The tumor could damage the optic nerve

The neurosurgeon sized it up this way
Your sight may stay just as it is today
As long as the tumor grows very slow
To restore loss sight, the tumor must go

If your Cardiologist thinks your fit
You can opt to have me get rid of it
My heart doctor scared the hell out of me
Then agreed I could have the surgery

At this point I wanted it out right now
By waiting I could lose more sight somehow
My wife only wanted things to move slow
Scared of the surgery I’d undergo

The third doctor involved in my case
This endocrinologist takes First Place
He studied my situation and found
Something which actually turned things around

Labs from Arizona, done months ago
Didn’t jive, things were high - should be low
A rare condition when the thyroid fails 
Is making the pituitary swell

The doctor knew of this rare condition
No surgery now was his position
It mimics a tumor, but best of all
Fixable without surgery at all

The endocrinologist said it’s rare
Never seen in his years of giving care
The neurosurgeon also said the same
Man! my lucky day, I won this health game 

Surgery was scheduled inside a week
Such an outcome, no better could I seek
My family can now get back to living
My thanks to God, I’ll never stop giving
Charles Sides

Shortcut To the Soul

The optic nerve is the longest nerve in the body,
But its really just a message carrier to the brain,
Where sight is actually seen.
The ear, on the other hand,
Is the on-ramp for music,
Leading down the higway,
Directly to the soul.
© James Rudd  Create an image from this poem.

5,438 Steps Into Madness

I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
Edgar Allan Poe


The crowd approached the lens of the mega camera. Its gnawing rose up in the smoke of 5,438 cigarettes encircled in the density of that afternoon. Moisture brought a stench of copper and old gold and bits of coal intermingled with splinters from -what at simple glance appeared to be-  a human jaw. When it rains, Palenque is as fragile and shifting as mirages in the desert.  


The euphoria had taken over the town and made of the palenqueros,  clairvoyants. The exorbitant pressures on their optic nerve reached the braking point of their vessels. Seeing was no longer possible, now with bloody pupils, in the immense darkness, they became seers. 

The hour advanced in highs and lows precipitation. The cloudburst couldn't wait; heavy drops rushed down and some ran with paper bags on their heads, while others made a circle gripped by the handles of their coffee cups. In the distance a haunted chant: 

OTRA, OTRA, OTRA!

The mantle of the night caught fire and the howling resounding swindled like pinwheels.  The strange music of pain. In a defiant effort, they aimed at turning their heads like tourniquets as they marched on, insanely saints.

M.I.

So the world softly exploded,
concussion grenade in a pillow factory;
shocking and disjointing,
dust and feathers spraying the vision,
tickling the optic nerve.

Clattering and booming, although
silently, like an inconsequential earthquake
in a vacuum.

Heartbeats came limping through,
dull, solemn, the drum accompanying
a funeral march, slightly out of time.

Green lines skipped and blipped,
radar peaks and troughs,
portions erased here and there
gaps in the picture.

There’s no life on Mars,
and little left in here in this room,
well, curtained cubicle 
of sparse clinical veneer.

Alone with sensations of dying and
death, alone with the self,
last thoughts, 
a mortal coil sparkling weakly
like slowly flattening lemonade.

Ah, let’s not be melodramatic,
this supposed cataclysm,
seismic event of the flesh,
it’s, quite frankly,
overrated…
and as for pain,
I’ve had worse…
© Tony Bush  Create an image from this poem.

Onwards

I dance in the dark
Probably cause these no one staring at me,
 Just me looking at the abyss 
Contemplating how I'll reach the light
Since im in the dark dancing around in circles,
Opening portals to unknown dimensions,
Its a party and no ones invited,
Like Christmas for saints
And girls for men,
The classes and categories we fall under
To the roof top we have to break to get outta here, 
They say follow your dreams
Well this is the solar system
Climbing the mountain top to reach
the sun just don't get burned, 
The eyes of the mighty father
And the lies of man,
So the son was never born
The mother never married 
Like the whole family was distorted 
So we were never saved
So we all are sinners 
Like one is all, all is one.

The stone carved by them
The grass that grow under,
So I have to set my plans
Draw up strategies for my goals 
 and as time goes by I evaluate my progress,
Now and then I formulate new things
This is all for the dream of reaching nothingness,
The cold, The gold at the end,
Chasing paper the long race,
I have to watch out for the rabbit 
We all know they see clearly due to the carrots 
The great orange, giving emphasis to the optic nerve,
Visualizing so there's no knocking against something
 Just landing, and landing softly,
The steady movement as you know you reaching your dreams
The cosmos, now you an alien 
Watching over earthlings
Deciphering with Martians 
Feasting with reptilians  
Helping one awake like I'm a pleiadian
So I astral projection to 4th dimension,
Dreaming, streaming mind
So im saving time
Call me fate, and that's fiction
Like the legends we learn about in school,
The whole story behind education so we read,
Like the owl, the wisdom I wished I had
The grades I wished had passed
But we not going to the past
like the world isn't moving backwards
So we stand, follow the same line
Waking up everyday all over again.

Tapiwa

Not beauteuos to say but you more than
A frog to kiss, In nous you inflicts these
Emotions that spins round and round in
My mind, irresistable and the pulse harsh.

With a gaze to your splendid torso, brings
Forth a maze, that I am lost in thy white
Rimed perplexing eyes only my portray to
See bewildered in the dark pigmented iris

If not this be error, an optic nerve Beauty
Then I have learnt to appreciate my lady
And comprehend in nous my lameo not
To voe thy affections. A figment of minds

More than a fantasy... That you are even
The reason to my dawn ejaculations awry
Craiz as it is Tapiwa words cant weird all
In that is deeply hidden in fragile hearts.

Incandescence

The focus burns through a paper-thin reality
seared rings smolder,
                                      the laser fixed eye
becomes a fire starter.

You watch that slow burn
as the watcher watches the one who watches.

The foothills of mind catch the tinder, simmer
until lightning strikes flash upon an optic nerve,
                        a flare of solar plexus radiance
scorches all before it.

A wind is unchained from a giant painting of stillness
it runs through a hallowed valley of spinal awareness 
charring the seen
                            until an exposure takes on the shape
of molten heat.
                              Now the one who looks
has broken through the tissue of perception.

Hop onboard the overthinker

Hop onboard overthinkers

A warm Welcome aboard the overthinker to all our guests, 
Especially Mr insomnia, and Mrs overthinker, both frequent flyers and our VIP guests
I'll be your minds captain for this flight, through awake all damn night,
And then on to good mornings beaming bright resort in daylight,  
We have no nap-overs or drifting-offs scheduled this is a long-ass-haul, direct flight, 
Emergency exits are located in the right and left ear, emergency lights, 
Are located along the optic nerve in case of loss of power,
We can also deploy an emergency slide down the nostrils should we encounter, 
An emergency landing over the cerebrospinal sea,
Otherwise please fasten your seatbelts and enjoy tormenting this mind with me,
 
Dear passengers this is your captain speaking,
we are experiencing some frustration turbulence,
And some drowsiness daydreaming, 
this is Likely to continue until 4am so please remain seated, 
As our head is hitting head on, stormy pillow clouds, and alas 
A tossing and turning tornado has formed in our flight path,
Forcing us to go around the temporal lobe which will mean a delay to our arrival, 

Passengers you can now lift up your eyelids once the kettles foggy fog,
Has cleared you'll be able to see the sacred sea of coffee,  
And as we loop around the kitchen island there shines a good mornings sunrise, 

Passengers we have arrived at our destination, good morning, 
Upon the irises horizon is the sunrise dawning,
Here the local time is 5am and the current temperature is about 36 degrees,
Welcome to our new guests and a warm welcome back to our 2 VIPs, 
We hope you enjoy your stay here at the daytime resort, 
Oh don't forget to checkout our duty free thoughts 
On your way out, I've been your mind's captain
Remember time flies when you're having fun aboard this mental contraption 
So hop aboard this mind if you are to an overthinker,
© Sarah Cope  Create an image from this poem.

First Sight

Lightning struck the vision, ripping up the sky, 
flashed photo sensitivity upon the surface eye; 
exploded on the retina with white electric rain, 
spitting down the optic nerve, developed in the brain. 
Then the synapse shuffle sparked both frightening and fine, 
threw switches in the vertebrae, crackled in the spine; 
infected in the blood stream, rhapsody and sting, 
bade the veins expansion, made the plasma sing. 
Muscles cramped delicious, agony so sweet, 
charges on the derma from head down to the feet; 
rapture swelled the lips, engorged and fit to blow, 
love embraced conception as perfumed juices flow. 
Powder keg of first sight detonated bright, 
conducted sparks to fuses, set the world alight; 
and images of ecstasy forever found a place 
in the chambers of my heart and the look upon my face.
© Tony Bush  Create an image from this poem.

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