Traveling Light

Unburdened by mass,
star born 
photons
hurtle
through vacuum voids.

They reach a planet
where green continents swim 
in blue oceans.
It is night. A woman
looks up at the sky.

The photons travel
through the gelatinous matter
of her eye and die
on her retina,
sparking electric pulses 
that race 
along the optic nerve,
and her miraculous brain
translates:
I see a star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:18 PM
A star is born, and the ever keenly attentive physicist does not fail to see its light:) Regards // paul
Wolf Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:10 PM
I just love this one. Science is so fascinating, as is your poem. (Now if only algebra, trig, and calculus came easily... Chuckle …). Best wishes, Gershon
Doll Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 11:14 AM
You are a star. Wonderful poem, Agnes. ~Warren
Krampe Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Thanks, Warren.
Raven Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Hi Agnes, this work is so well expressed. Such vivid imagery sings in the mind as I follow your wonderful words to an excellent conclusion. I love the content. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Krampe Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 5:45 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words, Mike.
Ashley Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Science meets artistic expression to create a stunning piece of poetry, Agnes. Your poem is simply superb and I adore the last line! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Krampe Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Wow - Agnes. I love it when you share your scientific outlook inside poems... like no other poet can! A beauty! This is another FAVE for me.
Krampe Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Line.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 3:59 AM
A real beauty Agnes! I can appreciate your background in this spectacular poem. : )
Krampe Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 5:42 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Vaso Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 2:45 AM
I loved this, I love seeing a poem revised or changed, be nice to see the link to the original!!
Krampe Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 5:41 AM
Thanks Arthur. The original has the same title and I think it's still up.
Musser Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 12:13 AM
Shedding light on photons, nice.
Krampe Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Nice pun, Jim :)
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