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Traveling Light

Unburdened by mass, star born photons hurtle through vacuum voids. They reach a planet where green continents swim in blue oceans. It is night. A woman looks up at the sky. The photons travel through the gelatinous matter of her eye and die on her retina, sparking electric pulses that race along the optic nerve, and her miraculous brain translates: I see a star.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/16/2018 3:18:00 PM
A star is born, and the ever keenly attentive physicist does not fail to see its light:) Regards // paul
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Date: 10/16/2018 3:10:00 PM
I just love this one. Science is so fascinating, as is your poem. (Now if only algebra, trig, and calculus came easily... Chuckle …). Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/10/2018 11:14:00 AM
You are a star. Wonderful poem, Agnes. ~Warren
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/14/2018 5:11:00 PM
Thanks, Warren.
Date: 10/8/2018 5:30:00 PM
Hi Agnes, this work is so well expressed. Such vivid imagery sings in the mind as I follow your wonderful words to an excellent conclusion. I love the content. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/12/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words, Mike.
Date: 10/6/2018 8:21:00 PM
Science meets artistic expression to create a stunning piece of poetry, Agnes. Your poem is simply superb and I adore the last line! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/12/2018 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 10/6/2018 7:56:00 PM
Wow - Agnes. I love it when you share your scientific outlook inside poems... like no other poet can! A beauty! This is another FAVE for me.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/12/2018 5:43:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Line.
Date: 10/6/2018 3:59:00 AM
A real beauty Agnes! I can appreciate your background in this spectacular poem. : )
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/12/2018 5:42:00 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Date: 10/6/2018 2:45:00 AM
I loved this, I love seeing a poem revised or changed, be nice to see the link to the original!!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/12/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thanks Arthur. The original has the same title and I think it's still up.
Date: 10/6/2018 12:13:00 AM
Shedding light on photons, nice.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/6/2018 8:45:00 PM
Nice pun, Jim :)

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