Air Traffic Control Radar

Blips repeat on man's optic nerve
Reflections of each shapely curve
The impulse to meet
Slows the beat of his feet  
And to greet the target he'll swerve
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Good one, I think I Met you a while back. Lot of limericks!! Luv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 11:15 AM
funny, LOL!!
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February 21, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Good use of humor. What a day brightener--has me smiling. The poem flows well. The rhyme works! Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen
Palli Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 9:51 AM
entertaining, thanks
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