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Wiggling Waves and Other Observations
Wiggling Waves and Other Observations

Wiggling waves reaching like tall grass,
Summertime’s warning to wear shoes,
Little stubbed toes from bare flip flops,
Tears, scrapes, little ones’ blues.

Searing sidewalks too hot for pups’ paws,
Compassion let’s a walk miss this day,
Steering wheels blistering, electricity soaring,
Rob a bank to get power...

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Categories: observations, poetry, seasons,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Fun Observations on Poetry
 


Like hard, dry toast, with no aroma,
Poetry minus heart and soul, puts me in 
an endless coma!


My brain short circuits, the longer the poem!
I get a poetic seizure and my mind
is lost and endlessly roams.


Then come the poets, who are would-be 
philosophers!
As fascinating, and...

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Categories: observations, humorous, poetry,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Observations
The only normal family is abnormal.
Do we have daymares?
Thinking is a soliloquy of the mind.
Do you really think Jack and Jill only wanted a pail of water?
To be great is to be misunderstood.
Some people must dream to balance those who don’t.
I am entombed by the...

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Categories: observations, allusion,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Observations From a Messmate Stump
Here I sit on the stump, of a dead messmate gum,
where house-keeping is poor, for the cleansed human mind;
the dead is not buried, so the living survive.
I see the fine balance, in a world that’s unkind.

There is always the devil, that lurks out of sight,
to...

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Categories: observations, nature,
Form: Lyric
Observations For a Summer Night
The setting sun shines down on trees and lawns      
While white puffy clouds sail serenely along
Two black dogs walk on padded feet down smooth grassy streets
And the cat in the corner meows and chases her tail round and round
In the...

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© Jim Joyce  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: observations, cat, nature, tree,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Observations
My truck has been broken for quite some time
I needed something at the store…
The closest convenient store is an hour walk
So, I started to walk on a beautiful day
On the side of a busy road, to get there
I saw green grass and brown grass
Patches of...

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Categories: observations, today,
Form: Free verse



Premium Member My Observations
All the eagles soar increasingly circular overhead my umbrella.
All the elephants thrash inconsolably tasting of trees umber.
All the earwigs buzz inexpressively surrounding oracles with uncertainty.
All the evil makes illness triumphant over the unclean.
All these expressions say ignore details obey the unusual.
Animals like everyone have inelegant...

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Categories: observations, africa, animal, butterfly, conflict,
Form: Free verse
Six Random and Rather Ridiculous Observations Concerning Love
1: If love is a game we need a referee
2: How do I love thee? Let me count the ways!  Um…
3: I loved her to death but got off on a technicality
4: Star-crossed lovers occasionally get crossed up and can get rather cross about...

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Categories: observations, funny love,
Form: Light Verse
Observations From a Squash Court Wall
Built to take the abusive raqueteering
punishment unleashed upon me
by human beings

Towering around those agile people
so quick of foot and strong of arm
with blood sweat, and testosterone raging

Black rubber ball scuffs pure white painted walls
a dash here, a strike there, a record good or bad
but each...

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Categories: observations, devotion, education, life, nostalgia,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Observations From My Pew
I deem it important to attend church for my spiritual maturation.
I really savor the fellowship of a loving and caring congregation.
I especially relish the potluck suppers and other social interactions,
But even in this worshipful scenario, there are bound to be distractions!

Now, I don't mind the...

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Categories: observations, funny
Form: Rhyme
Labor Day Observations
Tell me again
This wealth you gasp and clamour for
This strategy you wield
From the invincible substratum
Where the hunt pursues the frenzied heart
And the congestive traffic of arteriosclerosis 
For what do you deal
The long evenings swinging on the green and
The soul's sanity again?

I have checked for definitions
One...

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Categories: observations, on work and working,
Form: Free verse
Astral Observations
Blue and white ball spins
seemingly peaceful from space.
But the nearer we get:

Volcano smoke floats
amongst whirling hurricanes
or are those bomb ‘tests’?

Look at one land mass -
part in fires; other in floods.
Live things run for life.

Closer – past the sights.
Listen to inhabitants’
explosions and screams.

Some silent – praying?
Single...

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© Kj Hooten  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: observations, perspective, planet,
Form: Haiku
Weather Observations
You come to me hesitantly
Like a hot wind
Unclothing the sea
From the negligee of the sun
Raising one leg
Bare 
So there are no curtains
Clouding my brain
Over my prostrate body
You climb
Lingering in groves
Of spice
Where the birds
Hard beak
Plunge
Into the soft core
Of mangoes,
And naseberries sweet odor
Drift through the trees
Seducing you...

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Categories: observations, nature
Form: Free verse
Keen Observations
Reminis on how many times,
Having keen observations
Were depended on - 
To report, to assist in, to formulate
A scientific opinion in the Healing
process of a Charge.

The Charges members also got to know,
And when an elderly Charge passes on,
Members cry out: "If you had only been there"!

Then...

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Categories: observations, career, deep, heartbreak,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Old Delhi
a mass of wires criss-crossed the sky
and hung across the road
as car horns - stuck on 'play repeat'
blared out where tourists strode.

there were happy, smiling faces
advertising private care
but beneath those giant hoardings
lay indigence everywhere.

we were watching 'non-stop TV'
through the window of our bus
but we couldn't...

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Categories: observations, holiday, poverty, social, travel,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry