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Hula Hoop Poetry Double Haiku

A circumference
A point
A circle
A hula hoop
A girl
A poetry.
Form: Haiku

Premium Member Soup Troop Scoop, I'M Cock a Hoop

When I write a blog on the Soup
They are rarely read by it's troop
    Likes the ones posted today
    So many have said there say
If they were mine I'd be so cock a hoop











http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/humour-4.php
Form: Limerick

Three Point Shot

Three Point Shot


You reach the line, an almost perfect semicircle,
Racing from one side of the court to the other, avoiding the hoop
In a soft wide arc, 

Your shoes biting into the floor,
As you come to a halt, 
Announcing it to the world with a short, piercing squeak
Tearing through the atmosphere, to the stands


With the ball nestled in your hands, just yearning to take flight, 
You rise, knowing that your defenders can’t reach you
Everything but the ball and hoop a distant memory

Your hands travel through the same motions you know so well,
Knowing, even before the ball leaves your grasp, you’ve already won,
This time

You finally release the ball, with a quick, decisive snap of the wrist
Sending it arcing through the air with pinpoint accuracy,
Racing towards the net

Swish

Crisp and clean as a clear spring morning

The ball drops through the net, as the net snaps upwards
You breathe a sigh of relief and relax,
As play continues on


Premium Member Otherwise Shaped Hoop

In the year eighteen hundred and ninety-nine,
a Norwegian was patented for his design.
His name was John Vaaler, and we've great reliance
on his smart invention, a household appliance.

This smart little gizmo is made up of wire,
but power, electricity, doesn't require.
From springy material, an “otherwise shaped hoop,”
John's patent got the American scoop.

It holds things together; it's mostly for pages.
Its uses are endless: a tool for the ages.
In the days when a disk or a CD got stuck,
if you straightened out one, you might have some luck.

The oval-shaped double loop's truly a Gem;
I bet 'round your house you have hundreds of them.
This poem's near ended; I'd best let it slip.
It ought to be obvious: the paper clip.
© Jeff Kyser  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Didactic

Premium Member The Hula Hoop

The Hula Hoop

Capitalizing on any given situation borderS,
On acquisitiveness or generositY,
Where both parties wanT
More bang for theiR
Buck, therebY
CertifyinG
CloseR
AnD
H
A
L
C
Y
O
N
TieS
WherebY
EstablishinG
A permanent unioN

pilot fish eats large
sharks parasites clean so the 
sharks do not eat them

***The above CONCRETE form is the statement described by its shape
The below HAIKU form describes the statement via a natural event
Being well-rounded I decided to call this the HULA HOOP

2019 August 19

*5th Place*

Invitation to Play
~~Sheri Fresonke Harper
© Hilo Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Concrete

Premium Member Cock-A-Hoop

Burst of brandished flaming arrow,
Thump of bunnies against my chest,
Cupid’s straight pointer did narrow,
Continue my family crest.

Squawking souls of birds in my nest,
Potent from moonstruck bolero,
Crescendo of lust’s citrus zest —
Cock-a-hoop’s sunstruck sombrero.

1/18/2020
Charles Messina’s Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest
ABAB BABA 8 syllables

*Cock-a-hoop normally an adjective, using as a noun here
triumphantly pleased or boastful : happily exulting
Form: Lay


Premium Member The Hulu Hoop Fiasco

There was a gal known for the Hula hoop
    Until one day, she fell in some dog poop
                So she went on a dog strike
                Dog rep said, “go take a hike.”
 She said, “Have you all heard of a poop scoop?”














*I was inspired by Jan. I've seen several of her poems with this theme. And I decided to give it a go. Enjoy:-)

Alexis Y.
02/19/2021
© Alexis Y.  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Limerick

Hula Hoop and Chicken Coop

Hula Hoop and Chicken Coop

had a hula hoop
we were thrown for a big loop
cruddy chicken coup
© James Horn  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Senryu

Trump Had a Hula Hoop

Trump Had A Hulahoop

About Trump have heard the latest scope;
Had one heck of a time with a hula hoop;
Hard of hearing;
Twilight is nearing;
Long ties he languished did dip into soup.

Jim Horn
© James Horn  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Limerick

Rainbows Hula Hoop


red ants parade forth
dew dances on trembling twigs~
rainbows hula hoop


August 17, 2020

Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
~Winner: 2nd Place
Form: Haiku

Ain'T No Hoop and Stick

Whenever the grandchildren visit us
you can see how they turn their heads and cringe
If we should start talking about the games
that we were forced to play with way back when

They roll their eyes at each other and laugh
anytime we talk about how it was
When even the newest tech of our time
was only able to click, whirl and buzz

I told them, “Well ok smarty britches,
got anything better to offer me”
They opened a box of glasses and gloves
this is the latest gramps, it’s called 3D

My grandson stuck it on his head and hands
began to jump and prance around a bit
Swinging his arms and kicking both his feet
like he was having a conniption fit

When I told them I didn’t understand
what it was that he was trying to do
They said let us cast it to the TV
then you can follow along with him too

The TV pops up this high mountain scene
and he was just hanging there from a cliff
About a thousand feet above a blue lake
only his hands to use to climb up with
 
I can tell you now, that just by watching
I was already nearly out of breath
But when they finally convinced me to try
I won’t lie, pert near scared me half to death

Sure glad I didn’t have this contraption
way back then when I was a little tyke
Or I’d never learned to play tic-tac-toe
hide and seek, freeze tag or ride my bike

It’s no wonder kids are glued to their screens
whenever I see them walking today
because they got all these here fancy doo dads
and they are so gosh darn much fun to play
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Displaced Ballers Hoop Drops-

Honor truth
Settles the heart

Displaced young
They do start

Basket ballers hoops
Drops the love parts

aMERICA cuts the net
Ballers shoots the ball

Broken leg blurry eyes
Once again shoots a shoot
Drops the ball in game and love
Loses the game moves on



10/9/19
written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2019©
Form: Rhyme

Hoop and A Happy Child

A little child once hopped round a hoop.
The child tried it once and it felt like the best thing.
The child went back everyday hopping around the hoop with smiles and no care in the world.
Everything that happened before that hoop didn't matter.
The hoop was the only thing that didn't change in the child's world.


The child went again and came back a young adult.
This time, walked around the hoop muttering words to pass the time,
Reminiscing on how long she had been around the hoop.
What exactly about the hoop made her happy?
At least the little child was happy.
The little child came back a young adult that got tired of walking around the hoop.
The young adult who hoped to be able to free themselves from the hoop, stood blank, and spaced out.
Right at the centre of the hoop, she stood, thinking of what exactly drew the little child to this same routine.
A young adult who sought happiness like the little child stood right there thinking of how to leave the hoop happy and  not come back.
Form: Narrative

Yesterdays

The shuttlecock's not got a feather
my balls have lost their tether
yo-yo and hula hoop have gone for a loop
chasing rainbow's become a boring chore
in any kind of weather
and me I fling and fly frisbees no more
as now there's come the day
when games and music I can't play
the fiddle has a broken bow
out of wind such instruments
I know not how to blow
the guitar has no strings attached
the ukulele its self-same match
my drums I don't bang or bash
cymbals won't ride or crash
yet measure for measure
I treasure and love
the previously provided pleasure
by all of the above
Form: Rhyme

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