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Rainbows Hula Hoop



red ants parade forth
dew dances on trembling twigs~
rainbows hula hoop


August 17, 2020

Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
~Winner: 2nd Place

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 2:06:00 AM

Aah...cute one... with outstanding imagery:-) Loved it Aditi mam..Keep inspiring with your lovely musings..!! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Take care.Much love to you:-)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/23/2020 2:24:00 PM

Great imagery Aditi...love, love, love that last line. Congratulations on your top placement.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2020 8:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Aditi, great imagery. Hugs Eve

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/22/2020 4:51:00 PM

I read it a couple of times ( not a huge time commitment) If you saw this visual, how hugely amazing! Blown away moment! Well earned Win for this little gem.

John Watt

Date: 8/22/2020 4:40:00 PM

Congrats for your haiku win my dear friend ~ John

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2020 4:25:00 PM

i especially love that final line Aditi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2020 1:21:00 PM

Love that hula hoop image, Aditi. BIG congrats on your win.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2020 12:45:00 PM

Aditi, congratulations on your winning placement, love the imagery!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/22/2020 11:43:00 AM

Aditi, this is a visual feast of images and movement! Congratulations on your winning placement!

John Watt

Date: 8/18/2020 12:36:00 AM

Your words never fail to charm, your imagery never fails to amaze, and your muse never fails to delight. Best wishes for your nature haiku, my dear friend ~ John