Best Distinguish Poems


Premium Member Morning has broken

I watched on
as the universe fluffed its lines,
tripping over evolving stories
keeping me in the dark,
gravity pulling my leg
Impossible to ignore
those below-the-belt punchlines
and a Big Bang
that leaves me seeing stars
 
It all happened so fast
A "hold on there”
kick-in-the-nuts moment
a doubled-over realisation:
I am mortal
and painfully aware
fairytales must cluster
in a galaxy elsewhere
 
In truth, I could have a brain bleed 
tonight and die in my sleep,
just like my father 
when he was my age
I won’t even know I’m dead,
no more than I knew I’d be born
Only the living are subject
to such subjective things
 
What a waste,
a goddamn waste
in all eternity
Why does consciousness 
surface at all
only to drain back
into the vacuum of space?
 
Yeah, thinking about death sucks
especially lying in bed
tossing and turning
trying to sleep
Wish I could fantasise instead,
tucked up nice and cosy
dreaming about all things rosy,
Like those early simians
who went to sleep as monkeys
woke up knowledge-hungry,
bipedal junkies,
after digesting the original
chicken-and-egg omelette
that self-prepared in a forest fire 
 
As for me,
I can’t even distinguish
divine awe
from Sod’s Law
since that probabilistic day 
my buttered toast fell
and landed vertical on the floor
Such aberrations occur, 
stuff one cannot conjure or control
Adult stuff?
If you like! 
Except kids experience (stuff) too!
 
Most frustrating part:
the universe tells no lies,
only portrays truth,
albeit in an emergent sense
Past to present tense,
the future unravels;
knock-on effects travel,
sometimes producing
sudden knock-backs
as temporal waves
come knocking on one’s door 
 
Still, I’m with the action now;
life hasn’t gone away
Besides, if I knew everything
or was omnipotent,
I’d eventually bore myself to death
in every possible way.
 
?
 
so came the morning
and just look at my pillow
well and truly fluffed 

By
David Kavanagh

Fireflies

It's so dark outside, my eyes can't distinguish where sand meets water. Somehow, dusk has come and gone, plunging the evening into darkness. 
 
But even as my eyes yield to this opaque absence of light, my other senses heighten. I can hear the crash of waves as they abuse the shoreline, sending foaming water up the beach in icy streams. I'm lulled by the sound of polished pebbles colliding like marbles as they recede with the waves. I can feel the sea's cool mist against my face, taste its salt on my lips. The scent of seaweed drifts on the breeze in gentle wafts - and then, slowly, the faintest whiff of smoke.   

I glance over my shoulder, where a tiny dot of light penetrates the darkness. It's a beacon on this cool night, and I walk slowly toward it, digging my toes into the soft sand with each step.


dim moonlight
peeks through thinning clouds--
fire crackles 
  
He's still there, stoking the fire, feeding the flames until the heat is tangible. The air wavers between us like a veil - a line I want to cross. He stirs up clouds of smoke, stirring feelings within me as I watch his busy hands. I wait patiently for him to notice my approach, and when he does, my breath catches.


rainbow flames
burst from seasoned maple--
blue eyes sparkle

I watch golden light flicker across his skin, softening the lines of his face. He abandons his task, moving around the fire until he stands before me, smiling as if he knows my heart is thundering in my chest. 

He waits for a painstaking moment to pass. Then he kisses me with toasted marshmallow lips, pulling me down into his lap to watch the sparks rise like fireflies into the breathless night.

Person, Woman, Man, Camera, Tv

Identify an elephant
And I will shout, “Hooray!”
For you’re so smart you could be
Leader of the U.S.A.

Another test to prove your worth?
Repeat this after me – 
Five words: they’re “Person, Woman, Man”
Then “Camera” and “T.V.”

It’s comforting to know we’re led
By one with an I.Q.
That helps him to distinguish
All the red states from the blue.

Well, I am just a Person,
Yes, a Woman, but, oh Man,
On Camera, for T.V., I’d say,
“I hope he gets the can!”


Premium Member Anthropomorphic


If food for finer thoughts we did not crave,
If sense of purpose we did not apply,
If we did not critique how we behave, 
If dormant laid Alert Judgmental Eye…

If float and breed were our exclusive wish,
If instincts solely spurred us to survive,
We might as well be just a school of fish -
Not learning about deep currents of Life.

If we ran loose, not playing by the rules, 
If years weren’t  measured by the days we seize,
We might as well be just a pack of wolves -
With hungry jaws and reflex to appease.

If loyalty and trust weren’t our guide,
If fam’ly failed to withstand the Time,
We might as well be lions, without pride -
Where govern male rivalry and crime.

If we ignored the term - Personal Growth,
Meandering complacently in awe,
We might as well be just a slack of sloth -
With sluggish status quo, seeking no more.

If benefits of thought we didn’t reap,
If mindful property we didn’t hold dear,
We might as well be just a herd of sheep -
That sacrificed their free will out of fear.

Brushing aside the Kingdom of the Wild,
Place on a pedestal a Human Mind.
With love and progress equally aligned
Let’s be the best we can, one of a Kind.

As to Judgmental Eye, its primal goal -
To keep our planet safe and civil,
By virtue of Grey Matter, above all -
To distinguish between good and evil.

January 20, 2021

Emotional Euthanasia

Got such sharp pain in my heart,
feels like it will never go away
I'm dying on the inside,
sadness eating at my soul like a cancer
Boxes full of tissues,
empty bed is missing you
Toss and turn every night,
under the covers, I witness
my wasting away life
Shocked by your sudden disappearance,
traumatized by your mysterious vanishing
You made a move so unusually cruel ...
didn't even tell me that our love got stalled
at a relationship railroad crossing
This train wreck wasn't no accident,
to Occupant is where your Dear Joan got sent
Letter said embryonic love died with no name;
no need to cry, no one's to blame
Nine months later, I still ain't the same
I'm filled with shame, baby, only shame
If I didn't do anything wrong,
why ain't my health getting right
Simply put me out of my misery,
got the pox of tears since we parted company
Doctor says I'm in critical danger,
recommends emotional euthanasia
Painless injection to the heart,
gonna make all my hurt go away
Expected from you a sympathy card,
don't hold your breath my friends they say
Now I'm so desensitized,
can't seem to form feelings anymore
When I see someone who looks like you,
I just weakly smile and turn away
It's hard to distinguish blue from gray,
guess that's the side effects still pumping through
Should feel something, at least be a little sore ...
nah, no red eyes,
every tear duct is dried
What's the point in being alive,
when you have emotionally died

Tear of Joy Or Sorrow

How could you distinguish between a tear of joy and sorrow~~

blank page of a diary with dry teardrops asked me this question,

the answer was not known to me,so I tore that page out.




Date: 14th January 2013
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Placement: 4th; January 2013

Contest:Sijo

Sponsor:Rick Parise



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I Can Sacrifice For You

© Rodgers Roger 

Every single day 
Sunrise to sunset
I think of you,
How whole
And how well
God endowed you
With beauty so incomparable, 
Yet I can't stand going through a life, 
Knowing You will never be mine.

To cherish you I will
To treasure I shall
To long for you I do,
Just like your presence,
Your absence tires me apart
But you can't help it
Who you fall in love for, 
Its not like choosing which taxi 
To carry you through,
So I understand

If I am asked to say the last word,
I would go speechless
Your story leaves me incompetent 
I see many things that leave me tongue twisted, 
As I slowly die away.

I would courageously say it
That you rock my life,
But you wouldn’t care,
So what would be left of me
Than to kiss your soft lips and run away,
As I risk the silence you would blow on me forever?

But I can't keep this heart of mine dreaming,
Things that will never happen, 
If we can’t make them happen,
I will make one step back
But not step away
I will nail this love for you
And surrender my last passion
I will make a sacrifice

I will do anything you ask of me, 
Even pull a sharp spear 
Into this heart that bleeds for you, 
So that blood can stream out this chamber,
Since without you my life isn't worth the save.

I would sacrifice anything for you my brainteaser,
My early morning song, Yes I would sacrifice for you
But only when you know,
And believe 
I'll never stop loving you,
Even to the deep dark grave
I would go smiling
If only I know
You distinguish my love
From other people

Sponsor:	SKAT A
Contest Name: Any Old Poem Will Do 
Poet: Rodgers Roger Carter 
Date:7/17/2014 
Time:12:00:00 AM

Premium Member A Breath of Air

Mist covers the landscape, whitewashed in moonlight
It seems I've been taken on a heavenly flight
The music surrounds me, envelops my soul
I'm lost in a dream-world where I can let go

I cannot distinguish, what's real or what's myth
There are no lyrics, to leave me bereft
Just sweet gentle heartstrings to sweep me aloft 
The sound is so gentle, it takes all my breath
With fragile vignettes, and moments to rest

There are bittersweet edges on the tip of each note
Taking me forward, and backwards in time
Rapture I know like the back of my hand
Touches new places where I've longed to go

It calls me to sleepwalk through dreams in a fog
I'm free-falling backwards, releasing my breath,
as something releases white doves from above.
The pent-up emotions that cling to my breast
exhale with the notion that music is love


*________________________________________________________*
Poem Based on the music by Johann Sebastian Bach "Air on a G String"



2/5/16

Sobriety

Mesmerized by silence
the maiden sips the chalice 
dipping drink in pilonce
entertaining life without malice
indulgence fills the music
into the cup she holds
sifted in sobriety dousing with fluid
til the limitless path unfolds
to savor is her destruction
she must be careful of a fall
for the entirety of life's instruction
she'll learn to heed the call
maybe it will relinquish
the magic that it bids
and binding won't distinguish
between the garbage it rids
moreover this gift is freedom
but not ever to be free
the punishment is thrice beaten
will she refrain I guess we shall see

Premium Member Screen of Awareness- POTD

Born into this earth one day quite unaware,
We grow with time and eventually age.
Pass through stages many and varied,
And in activities manifold, we busily engage. 

We do not know what tomorrow unveils,
Or where the road we tread may lead.
But within us is a realm that will never change.
It is something that to vagaries, never shall yield.

Beneath all fluctuations, it stays static.
It is the light of consciousness that in us shines,
That has been slowly built in us through our breeding.
Through values garnered and what God in us aligns.

This screen of awareness is something so palpable,
But can never be seen yet stays securely intact.
It is the consciousness that God has planted in us.
Defeating all deceptions, it helps us choose the right act.

When we experience pain and heaviness of heart
On the screen of awareness may appear a shining star
It will sure pilot us through the dank and dark corridors of life.
Help us stay firm in fluidity, showing who we truly are.

Beliefs and concepts may evolve and change with time,
But as long as we are insulated within the protective screen
Of awareness, it will distinguish the genuine from the sham, 
And our life will glitter in all radiance and heavenly sheen!

May.18.2023

~ Placed Fifth~

The Screen of Awareness Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Unseeking Seeker

Premium Member Villanelle: If You Haven'T Had That, What Have You Had

Villanelle : If you haven't had that, what have you had*

If you haven't had your life, what have you had
In fear of what lies beyond the locked safe-door
Live you now the moment, not for what's ahead

Fear of what others may think, nothing's more sad
Yet if you abandoned all care, who'll forbear
If you haven't had your life, what have you had

Since James*, Mottram*, Barrau* live not a day dead
Yet don't they live safe as Confucian State's heir
Live you now the moment, not for what's ahead

Or do they live safe to be thought Reason-bred
The best of all the Worlds where Time's a mere snare
If you haven't had your life, what have you had

Walk Eternity back to Big-Bang zero-bed
What has no Beginning cannot End-fruit bear
Live you now the moment, not for what's ahead

No Future's secret the Yi Jing* has not read
Don't ephemeral hordes breed the Jün Tzu* to bear
If you haven't had your life, what have you had
Live you now the moment, not for what's ahead


Resources/Notes

"	Quotation from Henry James' Ambassadors : " If you haven't had that (your life), what have you had "
"	Henry James (American novelist), Eric Mottram (British poet, professor, critic), Aurélien Barrau (French astro-physicist, philosopher, poet)
"	Yi Jing : the ancient Chinese Classic of Change
"	Jün Tzu : the Noble or Superior Man, the advice given in the Yi Jing is meant primarily to distinguish the Superior Being, all the rest are mutatis mutandi " ephemeral beings " which makes one wonder if Life on Earth is not a mere breeding-ground experiment to produce the " Superior Being ", the rest - if you believe in " samsara " or reincarnation - condemned to be born again and again until they make the grade.

© T. Wignesan - Paris, May 14, 2019
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Little Proton

When I closed my eyes they swirled before me,
like little atoms, protons in my hands,
little worlds of their own.
The colours and the sounds, the smells.
When I opened my eyes for the first time

After,
I could not see,
but for those twirling coloured specks of light.
Could not interpret, see what it was,
could not distinguish head or tail.
Was scared when in the middle of
these smithereens a voice appeared
saying things I couldn’t distinguish either.
Life was frightening and complicated
back then.

I am a little proton,
shining bright in the middle of the night,
opposing everything and everyone,
just because I am still around, am still here,
because I am who I am.

I am a little proton,
I am allowed to be here.
I don’t need to be perfect,
don’t need to see, hear or walk faultlessly,
I am allowed in your swarm of
dancing little colourful atoms,
me, your little proton.

***

November 24, 2017
Copyright © Darren White

Moon-Viewing

Fingers round the moon...
Tonight I cannot distinguish –
The weight of sake.

Premium Member Zenith of Design

Can a god build walls on the horizon 
Hang chandeliers from zeniths above 
Let the ocean drain into the nadir 
Turn platitudes of doubt into love 

Can a god look west, to watch sunrise 
Go back in time, see humanity evolve 
Walk barefoot across the suns corona
Make reason, meaningless to resolve

Can a god bring order to happenstance 
See through charades of pantomime
Grow vaccines on earths magnetic field 
With a mere thought, distinguish design 

Can a god travel faster than light speed 
Cross our galaxy, in the blink of an eye 
Throw caution to the winds of tomorrow 
Leave us dumbstruck for pondering why 

Can a god see through endless darkness 
Bring a smile to a heartbroken face 
Take delusion, and banish it forever 
Whisper in a dying ear, your soul is safe

Can a god truly answer all questions 
Is it meaningless to pen poems of trial
If a god comforts through your prayers
Who am I, to cast doubt or denial 


''Z'' Contest, New or Old - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Prompt word No7 Zenith 05/12/21

Premium Member EMPATH

Let me write poems for all our souls
	With a pen in my hand …
Let me communicate all our words
	With a pen in my hand …

Let me take all emotions and confuse them with my own.
Let me have all notions to tend until they have grown.

Let me cry for all our sakes
	With a pen in my hand …
Let me pray for all tomorrows
	With a pen in my hand …

Let me dare as I know best to distinguish all life's nettle.
Give me all of your unrest so each heart in turn may settle.

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