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A Breath of Air

Mist covers the landscape, whitewashed in moonlight It seems I've been taken on a heavenly flight The music surrounds me, envelops my soul I'm lost in a dream-world where I can let go I cannot distinguish, what's real or what's myth There are no lyrics, to leave me bereft Just sweet gentle heartstrings to sweep me aloft The sound is so gentle, it takes all my breath With fragile vignettes, and moments to rest There are bittersweet edges on the tip of each note Taking me forward, and backwards in time Rapture I know like the back of my hand Touches new places where I've longed to go It calls me to sleepwalk through dreams in a fog I'm free-falling backwards, releasing my breath, as something releases white doves from above. The pent-up emotions that cling to my breast exhale with the notion that music is love
*________________________________________________________* Poem Based on the music by Johann Sebastian Bach "Air on a G String" 2/5/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 4:39 AM
Carrie, you are a master when it comes to free verse. Stunningly beautiful.
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Lovely! Congratulations on your placement win.
Turner Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Love it . Congrats :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Lovely, Carrie. Congrats on a most deserved win.
Scars Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Carrie, "There are bittersweet edges on the tip of each note Taking me forward, and backwards in time" My favorite verse, congrats on your placement Carrie! *smiles* -luloo
A   Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "Solitary Moment win." LINDA
Turner Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Just thought I'd come back to say congratulations on your prize winner.Peace
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 7:00 PM
The depth of beauty contained in this poem gave me chills Carrie. I dearly love the essence of imagining my soul soaring to this music. I love instrumental music the most and this lovely poem extols the wonder of it. #7 and a fave for me Carrie.
Turner Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:54 PM
This is a very good expression of what music can and will do for you. I think this is wonderful.
Henderson Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:40 PM
I was just listening to some Bach last week. Peace and many blessings my friend.
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